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| 2011-09-26 09:35:14 |
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Brilliant yet sad finish but the reality is among the best on this site. WELL DONE - Positive vote x |
| 2011-09-26 09:34:11 |
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BRILLIANT BRILLIANT BRILLIANT!!!!! As a fellow writer I take my hat off to you Rachael, you knock my stories for 6. DEFINITE positive vote x x x x |
| 2011-09-16 10:50:27 |
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Excellent. You are going to be sooooo popular on here with your writing. Love n Hugs at ya x x x |
| 2011-09-14 12:13:19 |
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Rachael, you are a legend! I told you that you had an amazing mind and your story is even more amazing. You MUST write more!!! For those of you who don't know Rachael, she is a girl who has been to Hell and back over the last couple of years but her spirit has NEVER been broken. Love you to bits kiddo and well done again. I just wish I could vote for you a dozen times |
| 2011-08-04 11:05:58 |
Rachael's Story - Chapter 3 - Morning Showers |
Chapter 4 coming VERY VERY SOON |
| 2011-07-23 10:40:51 |
My first Time |
(that should read 9 inch and 10 inch) this software doesnt like my quote marks
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| 2011-07-23 10:39:55 |
My first Time |
basis of the story is OK apart from the grammar and then you get to cock sizes and then the reader loses interest because you lose reality when by pure coincidence, one guy has 9" and the other a 10" cock!!!!! GIVE THEM NORMAL COCKS, MAKE IT BELIEVABLE!!! |
| 2011-06-24 06:41:58 |
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i LOVE the fact you are taking this slowly |
| 2011-06-24 06:21:54 |
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I love this kind of writing and that is how I wrote my Rachael series. A good story at the start feeds you the feeling of the moment. Awesome mate |
| 2011-06-20 18:37:13 |
Blonde Angel - Part 3 |
So why fucking read them dick head!!! |
| 2011-06-18 21:11:24 |
Blonde Angel - Part One |
ok my apologies, the tags refer more to the continuation with Paul's sister. That will appear on monday |
| 2011-06-17 10:12:40 |
Blonde Angel - Part One |
This was originally posted on Nifty.org by me and I wanted to share it here. I hope you enjoy it guys. Comments very welcome |
| 2011-06-15 06:33:33 |
Rachael's Story - Chapter 3 - Morning Showers |
thanks for the positive comments guys and if you want to see the girl who is behind my inspiration for these stories, click on rachael_babyface who has commented. you will see why I use her for the lead. Thanks again. Chapter 4 very soon |
| 2011-06-14 12:30:21 |
Rachael's Story - Chapter 3 - Morning Showers |
thanks Rachael x x x |
| 2011-06-08 10:22:57 |
Rachael's Story - Chapter 2 - Caught |
well spotted about the pubes! Wow I am impressed. I am usually quite keen on minor details but you got me on that one. Part 3 will be on before weekend. I think it is the best chapter so far |
| 2011-06-07 07:16:52 |
Rachael's Story - Chapter 2 - Caught |
Hiya Rach, glad you enjoying it. had to use you in the story as you are the sexiest girl I know x x x To everyone else, my description of Rachael is accurate to the last detail and she is a horny little sod lol |
| 2011-06-06 13:55:07 |
Rachael's Story - Chapter 2 - Caught |
Haha is that the Rachael I think it is?? |
| 2011-06-01 07:48:25 |
The Awakening of Katie |
I look forward to reading the rest of this series immensely |
| 2011-06-01 05:39:50 |
XXX Home Videos |
Danielle was introduced brilliantly, but I agree, Father and son should have made it full circle |