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2011-05-30 10:56:00 A Deadbeat's Diary - One hell of an hour No dude, ur a loser. I'd love for you to call me a loser to my face. Go back to the sewer that you crawled out of you piece of crap. You can't even use a real name while you shout insults at me. So who's the loser? Idiot!

As for the other guy who isn't gonna read chapter 2, oh my your words have ruined my day. Yeah sure they have. I guess had I talked about the 2 pre-teen daughters and their budding breasts, then I'm sure the positives would of been higher. Fucking PEDOS.

As for the writing, not bad for something I didn't even bother to edit. Just looked for the red underlines to indicate spelling mistakes. That's all.

As for the 275lb chick, she wasn't hot but allot hotter then what most of the guys on here get.

As for this story, I told a story that was gritty, ugly and real. If half the guys who write the stories on here got laid as much with all those hot babes they write about, they'd be out screwing instead of writting 24 chapter novels about the same crap.
2011-05-30 11:05:28 A Deadbeat's Diary - One hell of an hour As far as I'm concerned, I'm thrilled I got a 33% positive. My stories will not be to everyone's tastes but I figure there are guys out there who are just like me and are sick of the usual crap.

Why is it that all the authors seem to be like these well built, well hung guys who fuck these hot women? Frig, even the 80 year olds are hot in these stories. Despite some of the author's best intentions, some of these stories just don't seem real and the fact that many so called sex experts write about entering the woman's cervix with his cock tells me right off the bat that the guy has no clue about female anatomy and if it is true that he can enter the cervix with his cock then that woman needs to be check out for a very very late term pregnancy. :)

I want to write real stories about people and places that others will refuse to write about.
2011-05-30 11:07:27 A Deadbeat's Diary - One hell of an hour As far as I'm concerned, I'm thrilled I got a 33% positive. My stories will not be to everyone's tastes but I figure there are guys out there who are just like me and are sick of the usual crap.

Why is it that all the authors seem to be like these well built, well hung guys who fuck these hot women? Frig, even the 80 year olds are hot in these stories. Despite some of the author's best intentions, some of these stories just don't seem real and the fact that many so called sex experts write about entering the woman's cervix with his cock tells me right off the bat that the guy has no clue about female anatomy and if it is true that he can enter the cervix with his cock then that woman needs to be check out for a very very late term pregnancy. :)

I want to write real stories about people and places that others will refuse to write about.
2011-05-31 20:33:36 A Deadbeat's Diary - Older Woman who hadn't been laid in 19 years So I'm a sleazeball. This is coming from someone who writes about Incest? Fiction or not. YUCK!
2011-06-05 13:51:34 A Deadbeat's Diary - First night as a Bouncer Biggest issue i have is the lack of time i have to write these. The chicken comment cracked me up. Yeah there was quite a bit of blood, even for a virgin fuck. :) FYI, I think in some circles, young girls are called chickens but there must be some truth in that. lol

Stories will improve once I have more time to sit down and plan out the flow rather then do what i do now and that is just write as I think it up. ETA on that is roughly the fall.
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