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| 2013-01-07 00:34:55 |
A new day, a new me part 1 |
This is you first story and a wonderful effort. You may find it easier for people to read by setting up your spacing differently:) If you go into the writers forum there is lots of great advice there you can look at. It also includes character development, advice on punctuation, grammar etc.
Also, you may find it of use to have someone proof read your work. In the sex stories forum is information relating to this as well.
You have a good story here, You can do a lot with it. You votes to this point should tell you that:) Hang in there, keep writing, and keep the stories coming. The fact you submitted the first means you are over the hardest part... daring to put your work out there:) |
| 2013-01-02 14:55:31 |
Marie's Christmas |
This was a lot of fun and really well done. I love the depth and development you gave to it:) |
| 2012-11-05 09:39:55 |
Helena's Nightmare |
Hi! I just got your PM and came directly to have a look.:)
This is a wonderful story! You have a real talent... I cannot wait to see your next story as well;) |
| 2012-11-01 11:36:52 |
Girls In Trouble, Part 3 |
Well done and it would make sense for her to quote a famous American movie. Very interesting development. |
| 2012-11-01 11:34:09 |
Girls In Trouble, Part 2 |
Even better than the first chapter! I do hope you keep writing and perhaps cave to the suggestions regarding CAW;) |
| 2012-11-01 11:32:48 |
Girls In Trouble, Part 1 |
Great work!! Well done... and I agree that people should read fully before they make a silly comment! |
| 2012-10-18 10:02:50 |
The Yellow Sign. |
Well done my friend... well done:) |
| 2012-10-18 09:36:33 |
Unknown Presence - The Vessel |
Hello! I left my comment on the forum page... but did not want to neglect to say here GREAT STORY!!!!! |
| 2012-10-18 09:32:01 |
Angela |
This was a very good story!!! Well done. I liked the way the scene was set, the pacing and tone were well done. The ending was good too... I like happy endings. A very good spin on the theme. |
| 2012-10-09 15:26:32 |
Sister Catherine's Nighmare CAW 13 |
NEWS FLASH - CAW SOP IS INCLUDING THIS STORY IN THE CAW 13 COMPETITION. Thank you to the many authors who supported the decision. It appears I was not only one who had a delay happen. I am happy about this and the positive reaction to it. Thank you again. |
| 2012-10-09 01:54:57 |
Sister Catherine's Nighmare CAW 13 |
Thank you Ghostrider939. I do not thinkI have ever simul posted on this side of the site before! :) |
| 2012-10-09 01:53:26 |
Sister Catherine's Nighmare CAW 13 |
Thank you for reading it:) I appreciate you comments and for coming over from the forum to read it. Thank you also for your critique, I appreciate it. |
| 2012-10-09 01:49:59 |
A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue |
Loved it. I was watching for this to come along and was so happy to see you had written it. Amazing work my friend:) |
| 2012-10-09 00:19:00 |
Sister Catherine's Nighmare CAW 13 |
THIS STORY WAS POSTED TOO LATE FOR CAW13 and it is my fault. No one else has any blame here. I am terribly sorry, but I could not alter the title.
Please take the time to visit the Sex Stories Forum. A group of wonderful writers have posted stories for the competition. Every one of them is worth reading. Make sure to return later when the voting stage begins. It will appear in the Stories Forum as well.
I apologize to my friends for this screw up and to the people who encouraged me to enter. |
| 2012-09-11 12:27:55 |
My Mother, My Lover, My Wife Part 2 |
Hi. Well written, as too being too short, well I think that ultimately is the writers call. Take the requests as a compliment! We Want More!!!! |
| 2012-09-11 12:25:19 |
My Mother, My Lover, My Wife |
Well written my friend:) |
| 2012-09-10 12:31:06 |
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I cannot wait for the next. Awesome! |
| 2012-09-10 12:28:15 |
Morgan's Curse, Ch. 1 of 4 |
I know this is a multiple chapter story... keep it going and don't worry so much about rating. This is a wonderful continuation of the setup story. Thank you for taking the time to write it. |
| 2012-09-10 12:16:26 |
Merlin's Magic Wang |
Love it. I enjoy your stories very much. Arousing and a good read :) |
| 2012-09-10 12:14:54 |
Progenitor 2 |
I'm so happy that you wrote a second chapter. I also hope that there will be a third. I very much enjoyed this. |
| 2012-09-10 12:13:31 |
Progenitor 1: The Beginning |
This is a really good story. I enjoyed it very much. It was a wonderful read and well written. Great, simply great. |
| 2012-09-07 09:42:08 |
Modern Mage - Chapter 15 |
Love your series! It wasn't until you contacted me that I clued in. You have wonderful talent and I hope you keep writing more. Thank you for a great series :) |
| 2012-09-07 09:41:51 |
Modern Mage - Chapter 15 |
Love your series! It wasn't until you contacted me that I clued in. You have wonderful talent and I hope you keep writing more. Thank you for a great series :) |
| 2012-09-06 12:36:22 |
A Super Life Chapter 3 |
I am really happy you liked it! I am going to keep it going and a villain will be introduced. She is starting to do things that will attract his attention :)
Thank you to everyone who has taken time to read this and comment. I really appreciate it. :) |
| 2012-09-06 08:08:46 |
The Wall |
Amazing story! I don't know what else to say other than WOW. |
| 2012-09-06 08:06:43 |
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Nice Story! Positive. |
| 2012-09-04 12:04:04 |
MOM'S YOUNG STUD |
I really enjoyed it :) Wonderful job. |
| 2012-08-24 15:30:51 |
I AM NUMBER 69 (CAW 12 Entry) |
Such a beautiful story and I enjoyed it thoroughly. |
| 2012-08-24 15:04:54 |
SEX FORMULA 69 |
It was so much fun to read and I actually started recognizing people's names. I love how you did that. That was wonderful!!! |
| 2012-08-24 14:51:35 |
Tristane of Eloise |
Amazing. I read it wondering what the hell would happen next. Very emotional story. Thank you for your wonderful effort. |
| 2012-08-24 14:20:17 |
The Wolves of Paris. |
Wow... I do not often read historical pieces based on western history. This was really wonderful. Thank you for taking the time to write. :) |
| 2012-08-24 12:08:00 |
A Game of Inches - Part Fourteen |
I wish I could write half as well as you!!! I love this story... and the food in New Orleans ;) |
| 2012-08-24 12:05:45 |
Mom Needs Son's Help, Ch. 2 |
I love your writing very much. Great story :) |
| 2012-08-24 12:04:14 |
Yukio's Adventures Part 5 |
I am sorry I kept you waiting. I will be working on the next Chapter of A Super Life and then returning to this. Any feedback welcome and feel free to PM me.
Thank for taking the time to read and vote. I appreciate it very much:) |
| 2012-08-24 11:52:34 |
How About a Pic - Chapter 4 - DP |
I am enjoying your work my friend... very much:) |
| 2012-04-05 12:20:49 |
A Not-So-Simple Life: Part 1 |
I think this was a very good story. I enjoyed it very much and truly hope you will write a continuation as you have planned. I enjoyed your style and plan to read them as you post them. Thank you for your creativity and the time spent to share it with us. |
| 2012-03-15 08:08:54 |
Our First Meeting |
Congratulations on your first story!!! ;) |
| 2012-03-06 12:22:38 |
Yukio's Adventures Part 4 |
You want more Bondage in my stories scottMaster? I am beginning to think Good Sir that you are a psychic.
I promise that there will be another chapter, hopefully soon. Thank you all for the kind remarks! |
| 2012-03-05 18:53:38 |
She Devil - Part III |
This was very arousing... omg |
| 2012-03-05 18:41:46 |
A Gorean kajira |
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for letting me know about it! |
| 2012-03-04 22:59:57 |
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Sorry, I was not logged in when I commented. As I said before "That was simply one of the hottest things I have read. Amazing!!!!" |
| 2012-03-04 22:22:06 |
A Bad-Stepmother |
This story is getting slammed in the voting. Would any of you who liked the writing, or hated it, please comment... |
| 2012-03-04 12:11:52 |
My Dad's Leftovers |
Hi! I just had to read this after you sent your PM.
It was a very good story, and your romantic side is once again showing itself ;)
As to the remarks involving spelling/typos... yes they are there, but I did not find them a distraction. Your idea and story are good. The mistakes minor. Thank you for writing this! |
| 2012-03-04 11:38:33 |
Revenge Against The Ex-Wife/Step-Daughter (All 25,000+ words) Entire Story! |
Wow, what a massive undertaking this story was. Thank you for putting in the incredible amount of time it would have taken to write. This work of FICTION (Yes everyone, fiction, so please relax) was well done! Yes, blending the chapters would have been a large challenge and lead to issues. If that is all they have to complain about, then I agree with your earlier sentiment. Thank you also for being able to explore the darker aspects of creation.
I was not able to combine the Chapters of one of my longer series because I found it too difficult.
Thank you for informing me of this series in your PM.
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| 2012-03-02 17:42:27 |
A Confession A Night of Firsts |
Thank you very much! |
| 2012-03-02 09:54:45 |
Would You Like That Orgasm With Fries? |
Thanks a lot scottMaster! That is very kind of you to say. :) |
| 2012-03-02 07:45:51 |
Best Little Whorehouse on XNXX: Virgins In The Whorehouse! |
All I can say is WOW! That was truly amazing and so arousing. Thank you for writing it! |
| 2012-03-02 07:43:31 |
Different Love - Part III |
I enjoyed this very much. I do hope you find more inspiration to continue either writing this series, or embark on a new course. Thank you for taking the time to write and share! |
| 2012-02-27 11:42:37 |
The Rush pt. 6 |
This was well done, love the plot. I cannot wait to read the next one. |
| 2012-02-27 11:35:27 |
The Rush pt. 5 |
It may have been a good idea to blend this and another chapter together. The idea is to make a longer story and allow the reader to get more immersed in the wonderful tale and world you are creating.
I one read someplace that long paragraphs containing conversation are harder to read as there is eye strain involved with a computer. Try separating them... it makes it easier for your reader. Some give up if they feel an irritation while reading it and may not even know what bothered them.
Just a suggestion. I think your ideas and writing have merit.
You asked me to comment on the writing for you. I hope this is helping. |
| 2012-02-27 11:29:08 |
The Rush pt. 4 |
Everyone makes mistakes when writing. It happens. Having them proof read can help, but I don't know any professional editors and people make mistakes. It is just the nature of things. Don't take the criticism to heart... or negative votes.. it can be very hard, and still makes me cringe sometimes.
Keep writing and keep working at improving. The premise for the story is good! You writing overall is good! Just keep at it and work at improving.
I have been tempted many times to comment that a person who slams like that Anonymously should try writing and open themselves up to the same scrutiny. However, you can't please everyone and the number of positive comments made by Anonymous Reader far out number the bad ones and people DO appreciate your hard work. Please do not be discouraged. |
| 2012-02-27 11:17:25 |
The Rush. pt. 3 |
I like the story so far. The ideas are good and I think you write well. May I please ask that you make it possible to send you PM messages? I was not able to reply when you contacted me by PM last night. |
| 2012-02-27 11:04:11 |
A Teacher's Release |
Oh my... I'm actually blushing. Thank you all so much for your feedback and comments. I continually try to improve and it is very touching to read these comments. Thank you all for taking the time to write them and for voting. :) |
| 2012-02-27 11:01:00 |
The Doctor Is In |
I wrote a longer story because that was the nature of this telling. The sex is important, obviously, but I wanted to tell the story with it. |
| 2012-02-27 10:53:21 |
A Super Life |
Hello. I have been reading it and will make comments once I finish the series later today. Thank you to everyone who took the time to vote. To those who shared comments, that you for taking the time to do so. It is appreciated. :) |
| 2012-02-27 01:42:17 |
The Rush pt. 2 |
Great chapter... I'm going to keep going ;) |
| 2012-02-27 01:35:30 |
The Rush |
Okay... you got my attention ;) I will keep going with the series! |
| 2012-02-25 09:57:34 |
Would You Like That Orgasm With Fries? |
Thanks for the comments! I do plan to write more. Shotgun82 and Ghostrider939... It is so wonderful to hear from you both again! |
| 2012-02-25 09:54:02 |
Would You Like That Orgasm With Fries? |
Thanks for the comments! I do plan to write more. Shotgun82 and Ghostrider939... It is so wonderful to hear from you both again! |
| 2012-02-25 09:52:30 |
Would You Like That Orgasm With Fries? |
Thanks for the comments! I do plan to write more. Shotgun82 and Ghostrider939... It is so wonderful to hear from you both again! |
| 2012-02-25 09:49:38 |
A Super Life |
Thank you for the kind words! It helps keep me motivated. I am working on a plot for chapter 2. |
| 2011-10-19 10:04:08 |
My Japanese Love Part 9 |
OMG thank you so much for dedicating the story to me and Amazon36DD. I have never had another author dedicate work to me... it's pretty humbling actually. Sorry I have been away so long. Life got crazy. Loved the story. Your emotional connection is very nice to read. Thank as well for letting me know you posted. I will have to see what else I missed by you in my absence! It is great to see you are doing better. |
| 2011-10-19 09:45:48 |
May-Ling the Litle Chinese American part 1 |
Hello. I read your story as requested, and thank you for asking. The premise was very good. It is your first story and I am not going to repeat comments already made. You tried very hard to explore the emotional/motivational side of the story. It was a great first attempt. One idea that was not mentioned is asking someone else to proof read for you. As English is my second language I have to say that spell check sometimes misses words... such as "rite" (a religious ceremony for example) and "Right" (a direction or correct statement for example). Just ask someone to proof read and that will eliminate a lot of the issues the anonymous people are complaining about. It did make the read challenging, and I have had to learn this myself, but don't get discouraged. Simply ask yourself... what have they written? Was it flawless? I make lots of mistakes and will continue to do so.
Don't stop writing... keep up the effort and believe in yourself. |
| 2011-07-05 04:19:02 |
Pet Teacher |
That made me hot. Well written and very kinky fantasy she had. I can see why you chose to write this. Amazing work, I wish you would write more! |
| 2011-07-05 04:09:39 |
Broken Curfew |
A very well written story.
I cannot understand why someone would be angered when they have chosen to ignore content tags. They then act outraged, almost surprised that an incest story.... omg..... had incest in it!
Corbie, I enjoyed this very much. I just wanted to let you know! |
| 2011-07-01 22:49:11 |
Freshman Year part 2 |
I think the structure suggestion has been made. It is something that is particularly kind to people reading on their computers, which all of us are.
As to direction, I agree with an earlier suggestion, he should be dating her and then allow experimentation/party brain to take over and he ends up in a threesome with her and the roommate. That would work quite well.
Do not forget, in future chapters you can branch into other areas.
You have a very good 1st and 2nd Chapter. You can go many places and do very well for having just started. All the best and good luck |
| 2011-07-01 22:27:50 |
Freshman Year part 1 |
This is a very good effort on your part. You should be very pleased with this first effort. You did not go directly to sex, there was buildup.
I agree with another comment that this could have many chapters. So many thing happen at college ;) |
| 2011-06-30 07:59:03 |
The Doctor Is In |
Hello Everyone,
Thank you for taking the time to vote and comment. It means a great deal to me.
I am not sure what to make of the comment below mine.
This story was actually so easy to write. I do not know why, but even though it is a work of fiction it came to me very quickly thanks to a suggestion in a PM.
Please feel free to PM me with your suggestions and comment as well.
Best wishes to everyone.
JadeM |
| 2011-06-30 07:48:14 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 9 |
Hello Everyone,
Thank you all for your comments and votes. This series will have more Chapters, I promise. I will be covering the reaction of my family to Peter's son.
I am so happy to see that my efforts is appreciated and is welcome by so many. I did not dream that this would be the case. Thank you all for putting a smile on my face. It is very much appreicated.
JadeM |
| 2011-06-30 07:44:31 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 10 |
Oh My God,
Thank you all so much for your comments and for your votes. I appreciate the time you have taken to write and vote! It is very kind of you all.
lol. I might have met Amazon36DD before. :)
Thank you all again.
JadeM |
| 2011-06-25 08:34:24 |
The Beach House |
I enjoy your story. Once again you have done a beautiful job of painting the picture.
I am not sure what will happen next... John/Dave has a number of things he must deal with so goes with his wife.
I think maybe his new found willingness to voice his displeasure with his rich wife's conduct is good. It may change dynamic of what appears to be dysfunctional situation between them.
Perhaps he leaves her and returns to Meg. Maybe she decides to go with him to see Meg because she wants to understand their relationship. Perhaps getting closer to Meg as well... Meg has not lead a life of experience and could benefit from the guidance of an experienced friend since is some areas she clearly has issues.
Sure... the "Wife" might be a bitch, but what was John/Dave like before?
I love all the directions you could go with this... you wanted me to muse on this, and I have tried. Your next Chapter will be a thrill. |
| 2011-06-24 15:02:54 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 9 |
I am so sorry for the many small errors in this. I apologize very much. Hope you enjoyed this anyway, despite my foolish mistakes, |
| 2011-06-24 13:15:24 |
Meeting Michelle |
Very good story! I do hope you keep writing. I guess I have a soft spot for guys who help the damsel in distress lol |
| 2011-06-24 13:09:50 |
Waking Up a Whore |
That was a very interesting and creative story! Very enjoyable. |
| 2011-06-24 13:08:00 |
Lost Sailor - Chapter 2 |
That was absolutely beautiful. It warmed my heart and moved me tremendously. The details... the composition... the structure... I cannot ever hope to match your wonderful gift for writing. Thank you so much for sharing this. |
| 2011-06-24 11:59:12 |
Out of My Element |
I enjoyed your story very much. English is my second language and I got through it fine. Those small errors did not detract from the story, at least for me. Keep writing my friend and you should believe in yourself. Many of us do! |
| 2011-06-22 18:50:46 |
TAKEN BY SURPRISE |
OMG that was so amazing!!! I loved it. What a wonderful story and so erotic. I am in awe. |
| 2011-06-21 11:43:41 |
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Not my normal read but really well written. it is fiction and i knew what i was reading. positive rating for writing and at least no one is forced. |
| 2011-06-21 08:25:01 |
My Future Hope |
Nice;y done... Sounds like he had a very hard time before. Maybe he can find happiness. Series or not... well done. |
| 2011-06-21 08:16:09 |
Defying My Family Part 4 |
You just keep getting better and better! Loved it! Keep going. Positive Rating. |
| 2011-06-21 08:01:54 |
Lost Sailor |
This was so well done. I enjoyed it very much. I hope she does not turn out to be a manipulative user and that maybe they can both find happiness together. He seems to have a good spirit and she obviously saw it in him. Wonderful story... I could saw it all so clearly I felt I was there. I wish I could write with a tenth of your ability. |
| 2011-06-15 06:56:24 |
My Japanese Love Part 7 |
This was wonderful. I agree that you could end it here, and it would be natural. If you do decide to write more in this series lease ensure not to spoil things between Akira and AJ. It is special. |
| 2011-06-15 06:48:56 |
Pity Fuck turns out better than expected |
Well I guess that question about pity/sympathy fucks was not an idle one! I knew you had done it but did not realize it was the subject of your first story. Congrats on your first story btw.
I am not the best for style/spelling/grammar etc so I will not comment on that.
Keep writing and see what else you come up with! Positive vote |
| 2011-06-13 11:03:34 |
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very nice and well done. i was at a wedding on the weekend... but it was not as nice as this :) |
| 2011-06-13 08:14:40 |
Defying My Family |
A good start. Please do write more in this series if you wish. |
| 2011-06-13 08:00:39 |
My Japanese Love Part 7 |
I am very happy! well done and I do hope you will do more in this series. This was a wonderful chapter. |
| 2011-06-13 07:57:12 |
My Japanese Love Part 6 |
I did not see Amya dying, that was very unexpected. Still a very good story though. Thank you! |
| 2011-06-10 16:54:40 |
My Japanese Love Part 5 |
Well that was a surprise. I didn't see the twist coming that DirtyDaddy1966 mentioned. Keep going, you seem to have a hit on your hands! I think you are making it hard for me to type lol |
| 2011-06-10 10:08:08 |
My Japanese Love Part 4 |
I would like to echo Ghostriders939's comment. The story was very... moving ;) 10/10. I am enjoying your series very much. AJ is right to wonder if he can handle them both, but I don't think he will mind the challenge. Thank you for PMing me to let me know it was up. |
| 2011-06-09 03:32:58 |
My Japanese Love Part 3 |
Hello my friend,
Great work on this story. I enjoyed it very much. I look forward to the next Chapter. Ghostrider939 is correct, you do seem to have a good grasp of Japanese culture. It can be very confusing to anyone who is looking in from the outside.
Thank you again! |
| 2011-06-08 11:40:02 |
My Japanese Love Part 2 |
OH you are doing very well. I enjoyed this and thank you for letting me know you posted it. Your writing has improved so much so quickly!! Thank you for letting me know Part 3 is being worked on or I would have had to beg! ;)
Hiro is a totally subhuman animal. His actions go well beyond any that could be understood. I am very much looking forward to her parents arrival. Amya is lucky to have AJ. |
| 2011-06-08 11:10:50 |
All for Mr. Redman |
Dear Ghostrider939,
Thank you and you are right about my Author's info. I did not think to look there and considered myself foolish after.
Mou ii yo. Ki ni shinaide. Please, it is forgotten already. Simply a misunderstanding and not worth worrying about any further. I respect your choice to apologize in a public forum. That was very decent of you. Your PM was also appreciated and you are none of the negative things you referred to yourself as.
It is forgotten and I am happy we have peace. Misunderstandings cause so much stress.
I am chagrined to see I spelled it "Hockay" in my author's info. I am happy you pointed that out. |
| 2011-06-08 02:07:52 |
All for Mr. Redman |
You actually upset me enough to make me commit spelling mistakes in my response. |
| 2011-06-08 02:06:52 |
All for Mr. Redman |
I'm not sure what you read but:
As to the Hockey comment here is the only place it was used "To my mothers dismay I didn't really take to figure skating but instead wanted to play hockey." Seems to be right... same way you spelled it.
Secondly... no place in this story do I atlk about my hymen. I did talk about my cervix (I wasn't a virgin) and you might recall that is at the deepest part, the last barrier so to speak before my womb.
I do appreciate the positiev comment regrading my writing, howeer, challenging my gender and Nationality? When hokey is spelled correctly and the word hymen does not een appear in the story... let's just say I am shocked you would do such a thing. |
| 2011-06-07 07:20:15 |
My Japanese love |
I do hope you will write more to this story... I would like to see how things turn out for them. well done. |
| 2011-06-06 17:34:43 |
The Handsome Rapist |
I am sorry that you did not enjoy the story and appreciate your feedback. I will be careful in future to ensure that I am very explicit in the opening paragraph to make sure that I warn people that they may not wish to read it, as it may be offensive to some.
I did tag the story as follows: Dark Fantasy , Anal, Asian, Blowjob, Group Sex, Humiliation, Males / Female, Rape, Spanking, Violence, Written by women.
I agree (as a woman) that women are not punching bags. However, if you read stories where Dark Fantasy, Rape and Violence are all tagged you should probably anticipate the woman is going to be injured.
I do thank you though for reading the entire story before making a decision. How would you have wanted it to end I wonder? |
| 2011-06-06 17:12:02 |
The Handsome Rapist |
I am sorry that you did not enjoy the story and appreciate your feedback. I will be careful in future to ensure that I am very explicit in the opening paragraph to make sure that I warn people that they may not wish to read it, as it may be offensive to some.
I did tag the story as follows: Dark Fantasy , Anal, Asian, Blowjob, Group Sex, Humiliation, Males / Female, Rape, Spanking, Violence, Written by women.
I agree (as a woman) that women are not punching bags. However, if you read stories where Dark Fantasy, Rape and Violence are all tagged you should probably anticipate the woman is going to be injured.
I do thank you though for reading the entire story before making a decision. How would you have wanted it to end I wonder? |
| 2011-06-05 17:22:29 |
Maternal Desire |
Wow... so well done. Ive never written this subject, but I checked it out after your kind PM to me. Well written! I admit it was hot too ;) |
| 2011-06-05 10:53:52 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 6 |
Thanks for the comment! His parents welcomed me easily... they still think I'm a little angel. wow. I find white parents were usually okay with me dating their sons. I dated a Chinese guy in high school from Hong Kong. His parents did NOT like him seeing me. He got blasted for it and we had to sneak around. It was entirely based on the bad history and I understood that. I found that Chinese, Korean, and Filipino parents all had that it common. It is sad to have that issue based terrible things from the past that I cannot change and was not involved in. But, my parents also had a thing against me dating outside my own race. Its so stupid, but in some cases I can see why... even if I don't agree. |
| 2011-06-05 10:42:42 |
A Better Me Through Genetics |
Thanks Ghostrider939!!! I think Part 2 will have to be written. I really appreciate your comment and positive vote.
Pregnant? hmmmmm.... have not gone there before. That would be a cool twist too! |
| 2011-06-04 18:54:19 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 6 |
LMAO. Thanks for that thickhead! I cannot reveal the ending, but I showed him and he almost choked he was laughing so hard. Hugs and Kisses for a wonderful laugh! |
| 2011-06-04 11:49:56 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 6 |
Thanks TT. I will keep trying and I appreciate your feedback. I noted you also commented previously on one of my stories. Thanks for your support and encouragement.
To the previous commentator... thank you as well. If I become single I will be sure to share that! Lol. The final chapter would start off like "Peter's pissed me off. Single and looking? Takers?" LMAO. |
| 2011-06-04 11:18:17 |
Big Game |
Not my usual read, but OMG that was so well done. It was amazing. 10/10. Loved it. |
| 2011-06-04 01:22:49 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 6 |
I want to apologize to everyone who reads this story. I was not as careful as I should have been when I cut and pasted it for publishing. I also made some careless mistakes during the writing. I hope you manage to enjoy it anyway. I hate it when I prove I'm a newbie by making careless mistakes. |
| 2011-06-04 01:06:17 |
My Sexy young prot?g? |
Nice story and I was laughing when I read the intro. I'm bi and you are so right about how having a handsome man with you is great bait. I enjoyed your work very much. |
| 2011-06-04 01:02:39 |
Surprise! |
That's a very nice welcome home! |
| 2011-06-04 00:34:30 |
Phenom- part 1 |
I really enjoyed it. Well done! I liked your format and it was easy to read. Nice job with development to put everything into a clear focus. |
| 2011-06-04 00:28:51 |
Slumber Party Truth or Dare |
A good story, well done. Not entirely my thing... but fiction is the one place everyone gets to let go. Nice job and I gave you a positive rating. I appreciated the writing. |
| 2011-06-04 00:19:12 |
MIchelle Part 1 |
I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing your creativity. |
| 2011-06-04 00:12:04 |
A Summer 'Job' |
That was pretty wild. I like your style and I think it read well. I am probably not the best judge, but I liked it. |
| 2011-06-01 23:49:07 |
DETENTION SUCKS |
I really loved this story... it was amazing. |
| 2011-06-01 08:40:51 |
The Twin Cheerleaders: Our Snow Day |
Hey... you're trying and this has potential to be a very hot series. Just take a bit more time with development. I see you are actually younger than me, and that's rare on this site for authors I think. Just keep working at the writing and don't get discouraged. I remember a comment from the first story suggesting you use spell check. I think that you must have listened to them as nothing jumped out at me. |
| 2011-05-23 13:20:58 |
Life of a Playboy Chapter 2 |
This was an amazing series. I cannot agree more with all the positive comments already made. I really enjoyed it. |