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| 2012-08-22 04:42:50 |
a good accident |
Just updating a chapter two is in the works but my college started so its going to take a couple weeks I thank all of the readers to taking the time to read and rate my story |
| 2012-08-07 04:42:51 |
a good accident |
Anon reader below this comment my writing infintile really I know I'm not the best but I try. I write the words how people actually pronounce them not how there actually written. thanks for liking the story but I'm not perfect nor is anyone else |
| 2012-06-14 22:04:35 |
my soul mate never thought to be part 5 |
I really want people to comment give me new ideas something iv started 2 other stories and have another brewing in my head one of them connect to this one comment or rate |
| 2012-06-12 04:51:18 |
Her Taste |
No offence but I felt like a robot reading this story
I am-I'm
We are-were
I'm guessing your not from an English speaking country I liked it but you had no flow sentence to sentence |
| 2012-06-12 04:50:57 |
Her Taste |
No offence but I felt like a robot reading this story
I am-I'm
We are-were
I'm guessing your not from an English speaking country I liked it but you had no flow sentence to sentence |
| 2012-05-19 12:19:54 |
my soul mate never thought to be ( part 1 revised and re written |
OK since so many people are complaining someone I.M. me on here and I'll gladly let you proof-read and fix any errors in another story iv been working on
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| 2012-05-19 12:19:27 |
my soul mate never thought to be ( part 1 revised and re written |
OK since so many people are complaining someone I.M. me on here and I'll gladly let you proof-read and fix any errors in another story iv been working on
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| 2012-05-17 20:41:14 |
my soul mate never thought to be ( part 1 revised and re written |
There's 3 more stories following this already and for those who haven't read the first version of part one be happy I redid it trust me and for the dude who said take an English class that's not a class for grammer its exactly the same as a reading if you wanted my writing to get better with caps and all of the doo-hikeys that's writing class and if your complaining about missing letters at the end of words the writing is in the style and pronunciation of modern day trends I know I'm one |
| 2011-10-13 06:57:11 |
My soul mate never thought to be part 3 |
Hey thanks for the criticism and everything but the spellings correct I do have auto correct on my computer and it works fine
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| 2011-07-21 22:36:57 |
My soul mate never thought to be part 2 |
I'm going to wait on zoey and kc for two more chapters probably 2 or 3 years ahead yeah I did get my years wrong badly but this is me starting out on story 3 it will probably be out between today or Sunday ill try to average out the chapters there's going to be alot of them telling a life story almost a chance at a time |
| 2011-07-21 22:35:08 |
My soul mate never thought to be part 2 |
I'm going to wait on zoey and kc for two more chapters probably 2 or 3 years ahead yeah I did get my years wrong badly but this is me starting out on story 3 it will probably be out between today or Sunday ill try to average out the chapters there's going to be alot of them telling a life story almost a chance at a time |
| 2011-07-21 15:04:25 |
My soul mate never thought to be part 2 |
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