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Story title |
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| 2013-01-16 10:15:19 |
A mother in law Dilemma Part One |
Thank you for those few who have passed comment. It is much appreciated and I am pleased you have enjoyed my tale
FL |
| 2010-03-30 12:12:39 |
Aunt Peg's Visit |
Re the first comment at how using asterisks is not a proper form of emphasis and how they distracts from the story. While it may be the case asterisks are not the correct form, they in no way detract from the story.
As for the story not being real or believable, might I suggest this would be why the term fiction is used.
In my opinion the author has taken the time to set the scene rather than jump straight into the sex. This also allows for the story to be continued.
Full marks from me and I hope you will pen a second part soon |
| 2009-10-05 14:17:51 |
My Son In Law |
To the reader who posted the last comment. Thank you for posting what I term, constructive criticism. I have taken note of the points you've raised and will bear them in mind for future work.
Once again, thank you
Foxylindi |
| 2009-05-30 02:51:43 |
A young guy. An older woman |
Thank you for your comments.
It is not that I have stopped writing. I still do, whenever time permits, plus there are also periods when I will write something, only to find I am not happy with the finished result. I have written several of those already and I feel readers deserve better. I think if I am honest, I should use an editor rather than rely on my own, less than professional abilities.
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| 2009-05-10 02:32:36 |
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I enjoyed this and the few of your stories I have read. You have a relaxed writing style which allows the reader to easily take up and run with their own imagination. Keep up the good work |
| 2009-02-28 17:28:08 |
The Mirror |
To the person posted directly below, thank you for responding to the first readers comment which I too felt was a little foolish.
I did think of responding myself, maybe not quite as strongly as you but enough to point out my reason for NOT tagging this as incest was purely because it is NOT.
As for this theme containing an element of betrayal?? Am I to then assume, individuals who conduct affairs outside of their marriage are NOT to be considered as betraying their partners?
I daresay I could go on but would prefer to leave it to whoever chooses to read my stories to make up their own minds.
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| 2008-11-19 02:56:29 |
The Deep of Night |
I enjoyed the story. As a mild criticism I found it a little short but it does make a change to read something written from a different perspective. I think your description managed to capture the 'feeling' and allowed the reader to picture themselves in the room watching.
Foxylindi |
| 2008-10-12 02:37:54 |
Welcome Home |
I'm not sure what there was NOT to understand? It was as was stated right at the beginning....a "quicky". What's more it's easy to sense from the way it was written how you tried to "imagine" it happening as you wrote the story.
As for the negative comments.....Yes...it is always easy to say a story could have been better written but I would agree with the comments so far in suggesting you captured the readers imagination and transported them into that Bathroom.
I enjoyed the story and will look forward to seeing more from you. |
| 2008-10-10 02:59:38 |
A young guy. An older woman |
Thank you to everyone who has taken the time to vote, more especially to those who have also added a comment. They are very much appreciated.
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| 2008-09-22 02:30:31 |
A young guy. An older woman |
Ooops |
| 2008-09-22 02:27:45 |
My Son In Law |
Thank you for the comments posted below. It's always nice to know my efforts are enjoyed by others. |
| 2008-06-09 18:24:06 |
Roleplay |
Firstly I should like to say, I do appreciate those who have taken the time to comment, whether in the negative or positive, however I would ask all of you to remember, I am female and therefore can hardly be called a cuckold...and more importantly, please also remember, this is ONLY a story....pure fiction which though it arose from my thoughts I have never claimed it has happened, at least not to me.........
I hope this has cleared up a few points and will help those of you who come to read this later to enjoy the story all the more.
Once again, thank you for your comments |
| 2008-05-08 13:19:51 |
Roleplay |
Thank you.
I enjoyed writing the story and it's nice someone has seen fit to post a comment.
This was a first time story for me and I guess,it's good to have received some kind of positive feedback.
Once again..Thank you
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