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Date Story title Comment
2011-08-17 13:29:46 Dominating some bitches, part 1: The first two @the reader below, sorry, my mistake, I don't know why but I was hesitating between the names "Mike" and "Jake" so I must've accidently changed it in the middle of the story... I did actually re read and revise but I guess I just missed that... the name however is still "Jake"... thanks for the comment though :D
2011-09-03 21:46:36 Dominating some bitches, part 2: Schaeffer's daughter @Comment below, thanks so much, that really means a lot to me (:
2011-09-03 21:52:59 Dominating some bitches, part 2: Schaeffer's daughter @Comment below, thanks so much, that really means a lot to me (:
2011-09-04 05:38:09 Dominating some bitches, part 2: Schaeffer's daughter @comment about the important statement/exclamation,:thanks. See, these are the kinds of comments that help me out, and I really appreciate it :D. I will definitely use your tip on my yet-to-come parts.

@Comment below, wow thanks so much, that gives me a lot of confidence and motivation to write a third one. In fact, I'll try and have the third installment ready within a week if college homework doesn't get too much :)

If anyone else sees something which can be done better, please do not hesitate to tell me. I want to make my writing style better (:
2012-04-13 07:52:19 Dominating some bitches, part 3: Chemistry?s chemistry Thank you so much, that is a huge motivation for me to write more! I think I won't continue this series right now, but I'll look into expanding it later!
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