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2012-12-25 19:16:24 The night of her Dreams - part 0 Please comment!! It really helps
2012-12-26 08:50:22 Chaos pt. 0 - 7 That's very true, and I thank you for the critique. This is my very first attempt at something like this, and I appreciate the input. I'm also aware of the fact that I tend to blend a bunch of ideas together randomly, and I also interrupt an ongoing scene often as an feeble attempt to create "Plot twists". I'll work on it, and I hope that I'll get better with time. Of course the whole "no background information" is kind of my signature, as I reveal the background slowly throughout the story. It makes everything seem rational and obvious to the characters while confusing the reader until the bits and pieces are gradually revealed.
2012-12-26 08:51:33 Nayima and I If you enjoyed it/hated it, I'd appreciate a comment :)
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