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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-12-17 13:25:21 |
Sweet Sarah |
Negitave rating, you if post something that ist there, or a person!! I mean come on!! How can you forget something like that! |
| 2011-12-11 17:47:33 |
Hot Little Sister for Summer |
This story skips around to move, would be much better if you have better details also. |
| 2011-12-11 17:38:00 |
Hot Ass |
I stopped in the middle of it, i could not read anymore, it only talks about 1 thing, it going on and on about her ass. And, there needs to be more of a followup the the sex |
| 2011-12-11 15:57:05 |
Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 1 |
Good story, but "it would be a understatement" is used a lot! |
| 2011-12-11 15:55:52 |
Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 1 |
Good story, but "it would be a understatement" is used a lot! |
| 2011-06-14 11:16:56 |
The Contraption: Gemma and Jake |
Haha good story, but i dont get how it was a truck they were in... |
| 2011-06-14 11:16:55 |
The Contraption: Gemma and Jake |
Haha good story, but i dont get how it was a truck they were in... |
| 2011-06-14 11:16:54 |
The Contraption: Gemma and Jake |
Haha good story, but i dont get how it was a truck they were in... |
| 2011-06-14 10:53:29 |
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Ohh, i try different writing styles, i guess some don't work for me... |
| 2011-06-14 10:53:28 |
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Ohh, i try different writing styles, i guess some don't work for me... |
| 2011-04-23 12:15:58 |
Me and Kayla |
Great story keep it up! |