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Date Story title Comment
2011-06-14 09:55:20 The Family Business I: Coming Home I got some comments for Riding the Ponies that said they wanted longer stories so I broke this one up differiently. Let me know what you guys and gals think.

If I get 10 comments.I'm thinking of uploading something special ahead of schedule. :-)
2011-06-16 17:29:57 The Family Business III: Return to Riding Actually, Olive is short for Olivia. Maybe not as common of a nickname, but my only error would be assuming everyone would figure that out without explicit explanation.
2011-09-02 12:21:57 Know Your Cock! - III Finale 8-23

Thanks for the feedback. I did pretty much throw realism out the window but who knows what the future holds. Then again I don't remember if I made it clear this story was set in the future either.

I do have a few ideas for another chapter or two of lost and found, but I'm also in the middle of three seperate stories and have ideas for another few unstarted. It'll come eventually just probably not soon.
2011-09-02 12:26:39 Know Your Cock! - III Finale 8-31

Thanks for reading and providing constructive criticism instead of random hatefull comments. I honestly had lost much of the inclination to finish this one despite having the ideas in my head. I think I just pushed to finish it and I know the end isn't as strong as I am capable of writing. But I have no inclination to change it with other projects in progress and I thought leaving it unfinished would be a disservice to anyone who wanted to know what happened.

Thanks again, Talyn.
2011-09-02 12:29:29 Know Your Cock! - III Finale Also I did a fair amount of research on this story and it doesn't agree with what you are implying of rhinos. If you'd like to provide a link to your information I would appreciate it.
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