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| 2011-09-28 22:43:56 |
New Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 7 - part 1 of 2 - Harry's Recovery |
Well you say Harry's main attraction should be Cho, Ginny and Fleur. In my stories they have been his main attraction. And you say Ron's main attraction should be Hermione, Lavender and 'that barmain' (madam rosmerta) and yet again, they have been his main attraction. If you don't like my stories, then please don't read and comment on them. |
| 2011-09-28 22:11:23 |
New Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 7 - part 1 of 2 - Harry's Recovery |
To the below commenter, where exactly does Ron get 'bashed' in this story? I'm not angry that Hermione didnt get with Harry at all (if you actually read my stories, you'll notice that Harry and Hermione have only got together once, which was in my very first story and Hermione actually rejected Harry a few chapters back.) The way JKR wrote Harry Potter leaves scope for Ron to be a bad character as many times he and Harry fell out and Ron for all his good points does have a sinister side. I decided to make Ron a bad character as I thought it would be interesting to see what it would be like if he was bad as he is such an interesting character. I haven't made him bad because I hate him, quite the opposite, I love Ron's character and love writing his chapters. I made him bad because he is such a great character and thought it would be a twist on the norm. Obviously if you want read stories that are true to the books, you could always try reading.... the REAL BOOKS. :) |
| 2011-09-27 02:24:44 |
New Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 6 - Capture! |
Thanks for commenting everybody. I knew the gay scene wouldn't be everybodies cup of tea but I thought it was neccessary in the story and linked in well with the last chapter especially (Harry getting washed by Hermione was like her washing away his innocence in preparation for this.) Also I felt it was neccessary to show Harry doesnt always get it his own way and isnt just this sort of sex God which he comes across as in other peoples HP stories. |
| 2011-09-27 02:21:16 |
New Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 2 - The Wedding |
Hey to the commenter below. Firstly, thanks for the positive vote, and secondly, Ginny was captured by the Death Eaters on Ron's orders during the battle of Hogwarts at the end of the last series |
| 2011-09-18 11:44:24 |
New Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 4 - Dark Discoveries |
yes I do know how big D sized tits are. I've had the pleasure of sucking the titties of a girl who had D sized breasts. Hermione was born in September so is 18 in this story, so it isnt too hard to believe she would have big tits. |
| 2011-09-08 13:31:33 |
New Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 3 - Old and New Friends |
sorry to the commenter below, it does take me a while to create and write a story, and obviously, i do other things in my life so i write where and when I can. |
| 2011-09-03 18:53:42 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 5 - Draco's Plot |
to the below commenter, i quite clearly a comment saying that I got the title wrong and it was a mistake which I quickly rectified. As for your other comments on my other stories, it's called artistic licence dear, if I stuck completly to the story word for word then I may as well of not bothered writing these. If you want to read stories that are 100% to the novels then read the NOVELS. |
| 2011-08-28 16:03:49 |
New Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 3 - Old and New Friends |
To the commenter below, I take your comments on board and will consider the ideas you have put forward. I am flirting with the idea of certain characters (won't say which!) either having a full on sex scene or just to experiment but I'm not sure yet. To me, it would be a big step to put it in to the stories and at the moment, I feel I would only do it if people wanted it. What do other people think? |
| 2011-06-06 15:52:58 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 11 part 2 - The End of all Things |
thanks for the nice comments guys and that you liked my ending. I've decided I will do a sequel, focusing on the Deathly Hallows book, but obviously with twists here and there. |'ll let you all know when I start writing it :) |
| 2011-05-29 07:15:44 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 4 - Part 1 of 3 - The Joys of Quidditch |
thankyou to whoever left the below comment :) |
| 2011-05-12 17:42:40 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 7 - Draco's Plan Begins |
well im afraid you couldnt be further from the truth with how you believe this series will develop, and i believe that you will miss out on a great story from now on. thanks for the comment but I cant sit here and take criticism for things I havent done and wont do |
| 2011-04-19 15:04:55 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 5 - Draco's Plot |
Hey guys, this should be titled Chapter 4 part 3 of 3, not chapter 5. sorry for the confusion. hope you enjoy the story. |
| 2011-04-17 16:07:29 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 4 - Part 2 of 3 - Ron's Reward |
thanks for all the suggestion guys :)
i'm just starting to get new ideas of where to take this series. got some thoughts for stories which hopefully you'll all enjoy, as well as some major plot twists and turns |
| 2011-04-14 16:52:09 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 2 - Cho's Jealousy |
thank for the kind feeback guys :)
im still pretty new to the story writing so still finding my voice if you know what i mean
and thanks for the suggestions, definately taking your ideas on board and maybe will take them further into the series :) |
| 2011-04-13 06:49:21 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 1 6th Year Begins |
thanks for the comments guys
yea i didnt mean to underline everything lol, as this was my 1st time, i musta pressed the wrong button |