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2011-10-28 17:20:57 Milking daddt dry. Literally. Part 2 Haha going well! Excellent story.
2011-10-30 03:08:02 Re the previous comment: in real life nobody enjoys rape; it's a vile, disgusting business.

This story is a FUN story, poking fun at sisters. Vicki bitches about everything but is gradually cuddled and fucked into BELONGING.

What's happened is that one or two people have skimmed the story and projected themselves onto it. Their experiences were ugly, evidently, but they are NOT the story. It's a story with a happy ending.

It just needs to be read slowly enough to take in the detail. Or maybe I should have put it in the Fantasy genre?
2011-10-30 03:09:46 Re the previous comment: in real life nobody enjoys rape; it's a vile, disgusting business.

This story is a FUN story, poking fun at sisters. Vicki bitches about everything but is gradually cuddled and fucked into BELONGING.

What's happened is that one or two people have skimmed the story and projected themselves onto it. Their experiences were ugly, evidently, but they are NOT the story. It's a story with a happy ending.

It just needs to be read slowly enough to take in the detail. Or maybe I should have put it in the Fantasy genre?
2011-10-30 20:47:03 Re the previous comment, glad you enjoyed it. Lettie, John and Vicki are the three Mellor children who appeared in David's porch and also at the party and swam in Chapter 1.

After that, as far as the initial Whitaker 'household' is concerned John and Vicki are a surprise, so they couldn't have too much of an introduction.

In my mind there isn't too much of an overall plot, the big happening is the establishment of the commune then Ch 4, 5 are snapshots of events within it. I suppose they're more episodes than chapters, that's true..

Anyway its read numbers are wrecked now unless an awful lot of people vote for it, so I don't what I'll do with it. I guess I have to see if I could have made it clearer without making it horribly obvious with a "Lettie I Love You" ending :))
2011-11-06 16:14:43 Daddy avenges his daughter There are later chapters, at the top of the page there's a yellow MrSoftee link to my profile :)
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