Comments from MrSoftee

Date Story title Comment
2011-08-26 10:12:13 Becky confesses to ravishing a younger girl Heh, great to know Captius, & just18, that we can inspire each other :)
2011-09-05 05:15:08 I love the way you tell the story. For me personally I'd be wary of letting the mind control theme take charge of the story, as it gets harder to suspend my disbelief and there's less suspense when the hero can do just anything. My 2c :)

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Very enjoyable!
2011-09-07 16:56:26 Becky's Ordeal with her Bad Teachers OK I'll start on the next chapter. I guess the gorgeous teen girls should emerge victorious in the end? :)
2011-09-08 11:04:09 Rebecca Chapter 01 Heh, terrific writing! Not my genre normally but so well done I really enjoyed it.
2011-09-16 04:21:52 Daddy avenges his daughter, Part 3 of 3 If you want to follow the rest of the series (there's another 5 chapters), use the yellow MrSoftee profile link at the top of the page, you'll see Daddy's Vengeance... and Becky.....and then finally Daddy's ULTIMATE vengeance <eek!>