Comments from MrSoftee
|2013-06-11 11:58:42||Cassie||Wow terrific writing. Class.|
|2013-06-13 12:22:51||Sadie – Chapter 7 – After the Island||Terrific story, very credible and involving :)|
|2013-06-13 12:50:03||Girls In My Shed||Thanks sofman, very generous of you.|
|2013-06-15 09:37:34||Girls In My Shed||Most guys would feel the same mate, below. But then, would the girls have helped themselves to you?? :))
Cos it's about relationships, and how the main character, while being inoffensive and unassertive, nevertheless ends up with everything because the girls and Sheila LIKE him. The girls wouldn't have behaved like that with anyone at all macho, like the boys at school. Nick is someone who is fulfilled by providing a service to others (doing up the shed, eating pussy). He settles for being what he is, and that is the key to his success.
|2013-06-15 19:06:08||Girls In My Shed||Thanks lolaheiress I meant to say, and Diego, interesting comments. More dialogue during sex I'll definitely think about, and I agree in hindsight I wish I'd done a little bit more with Sheila. She's not sexy tho lol. No part 2 sorry this was its natural end, but you can imagine them all having a great time for a long time :) Now I have to think of a new story...|