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| 2013-05-09 18:30:28 |
ARE WE TEACHING THE CHILDREN - OR ARE THEY TEACHING US? - PART 1 |
To audribabygurl99!
Thank you so much for your PM, it's nice to know my stories have a positive effect.
I wanted to reply to your PM, but you are only registered as a guest, which means you can PM me, but I cannot reply to you.
If you choose to upgrade your registration please PM me again!
XXX
buttfukka666
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| 2012-09-24 23:42:44 |
PURE PRIMAL PASSION.....A COUPLE REDISCOVER - CHAPTER 1 |
Cynthia I salute you!
For a first attempt this is an exceptional piece of work, and a true pleasure to read.
Your story is a seamless journey of eroticism, and the story within a story aspect is completely involving. For the first time in a long time I was torn between the need to pause and seek some relief, or the overwhelming desire to read on.
You have a very bright future and I encourage you to continue, and I'm sure I won't be the only one anxiously awaiting the next installment.
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| 2012-08-16 21:45:16 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS-6 |
I HAVE RECEIVED SO MANY POSTS AND PMs THAT IT HAS BEEN VERY HUMBLING, AND I EXTEND MY SINCERE AND HEARTFELT THANKS TO EACH AND EVERY ONE.
THIS WILL NOT BE THE END OF MY STORIES ON THIS SITE, THOUGH THEY MAY NOT BE THAT FREQUENT UNTIL EARLY NEXT YEAR. I AM WORKING ON A DIFFERENT STORY NOW, AS I FELT I NEEDED A FRESH DIRECTION.
I MAY PICK THIS ONE UP AGAIN, BUT IF I DO IT WILL BE TOLD FROM A NEW PERSPECTIVE. I AM CONSIDERING A FOLLOW-ON AS TOLD BY ONE OF THE TWINS, BUT I WON'T DO IT UNLESS I'M SURE IT WILL ENHANCE THIS STORY, RATHER THAN DETRACT FROM IT.
THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR SUPPORT AND KIND COMMENTS, THERE IS SIMPLY NO STRONGER FORM OF MOTIVATION TO CONTINUE! |
| 2012-07-26 00:48:08 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-CHAPTER 5 |
Dear Ms.Editor o/porn,
Thanks for your kind comments, and publishing my work is something I'd be interested in exploring but lack the experience to do.
If you are registered on this site perhaps you could PM me? If not you may have another way we could discuss privately?
Regards,
BF666 |
| 2012-07-19 02:57:24 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-CHAPTER 5 |
TO ALL MY LOYAL READERS WHO HAVE POSTED OR SENT A PM RE CHAPTER 6. I ASSURE YOU I AM WORKING ON THIS RIGHT NOW!
I'M AFRAID I HAVE TO WORK FOR A LIVING AND I'VE BEEN EXTREMELY BUSY, WHICH ANNOYS ME AS MUCH AS IT PROBABLY DOES YOU, AS I REALLY WANT TO FINISH 6 AND POST IT!
I AM HOPING TO POST NEXT WEEK, AND HAVE ADDED SOMETHING SPECIAL WHICH I SINCERELY HOPE WILL MAKE IT WORTH THE WAIT.
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| 2012-06-29 01:39:37 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-CHAPTER 4 |
To the post below, and similar further down, all I can say is SIMPLE, DUMB, AMATEUR ERROR! When I tried to post this story and it was too long, and I guess I panicked! I'd been working on chapter 4, which became 4 and 5, for 3 weeks and really wanted to get it posted. When it bounced I did a cut and paste to separate into 2 chapters, and screwed up big time.
Really sorry! The do find out, but not until chapter 5, which I've just posted now. All I can do is apologize!!! |
| 2012-06-07 04:25:01 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-2 |
WITH APOLOGIES FOR THE DELAY - CHAPTER 3 HAS BEEN POSTED NOW!!! |
| 2012-04-20 05:04:01 |
A MOTHER'S DARKEST DESIRES - CHAPTER 5 |
To the recent posts re the "Mom Wants to be my Cum Bucket" series, I have finally finished Chapter 13 and have posted today. I apologise for the delay and to be honest, I got a little carried with developing this story!
Hope you enjoy CB13 and would love to know what you think of it! |
| 2012-04-04 07:12:43 |
Lessons - Chapter 1 - Retaliation |
Great first effort, and very enjoyable to read a story that can and will develop further. A lot of promise Exorcist, I'm sure I will enjoy future chapters! |
| 2012-03-20 16:52:47 |
A MOTHER'S DARKEST DESIRES - CHAPTER 4 |
To cajuncashew,
I figured someone would pick me up on this! Yes, this was a typo error. I finally finished this story quite late and just as I clicked to post I realised this should have been titled chapter 3!
Simple, dumb operator error!
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| 2012-02-23 21:25:42 |
MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM-BUCKET! - CHAPTER 12 |
Hi to the latest post. I'm happy to be criticised if I've made an error, as this leads to a better story. However, in this case I wonder which part of "I pulled her forward and cut the zip ties holding her wrists" you didn't understand? Perhaps you'd like to scroll up to the 15th paragraph from the end and have a closer look?
Cheers. |
| 2012-02-23 21:03:05 |
A MOTHER'S DARKEST DESIRES - CHAPTER 2 |
Hi to the latest post. I have posted this story twice to let followers of the Cum-Bucket series know that I am separating Phil's story from Rick's.
From here on Phil's adventures will be in this series, and Rick will continue in Cum-Bucket. I thought this was the best way to advise readers of the separation so they can follow in future.
Future chapters in each series will not be posted twice.
Cheers.
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| 2011-10-26 01:02:57 |
Good Neighbours Ch. 1 |
I enjoyed this story very much, it's a pleasure to read a nicely crafted story and not wonder what the writer's first language is, as in many cases it doesn't appear to be English!
This is well-crafted, and does exactly what these stories should, as it creates a clear, enjoyable mental picture.
Where you take this is up to you but I hope you take it further! |
| 2011-10-26 00:53:15 |
Good Neighbours Ch. 1 |
I enjoyed this story very much, it's a pleasure to read a nicely crafted story and not wonder what the writer's first language is, as in many cases it doesn't appear to be English!
This is well-crafted, and does exactly what these stories should, as it creates a clear, enjoyable mental picture.
Where you take this is up to you but I hope you take it further! |
| 2011-09-16 04:12:18 |
MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM BUCKET! - CHAPTER 6 |
Dear anonymous 2011-09-15
You can't piss in a woman's ass or cunt when you have an erection and are fucking her, which is why my character came and waited for his cock to soften. Then you most certainly can! I am 55 and have been enjoying internal watersports since my late teens.
It takes a time and concentration, and it's easier if you start in her cunt, as the muscles relax more after cumming. When your cock softens her muscles will have also relaxed and you should be able to do it. Don't just blast away as that can be uncomfortable, better with a gentle stream.
Anal is more difficult at muscles do not relax as much, but is possible. NEVER try this when they have any kind of internal cut or broken skin, they won't thank you for it!
Finally, this should only happen with prior agreement, and if you want more, be prepared to lovingly get dwon there with your mouth. You made the mess, you should be prepared to clean it up! |