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| 2012-03-05 23:57:48 |
The Little Mermaid (Part 2) |
I had alot of trouble with this story. I wanted it to be as good as my first one. I just couldnt think how. thats why it took so long to post. it may not be as good but i still do think its a good story. |
| 2011-12-27 08:30:59 |
The Little Mermaid (Part 1) |
thankyou billy :) |
| 2011-12-17 14:47:48 |
The Little Mermaid (Part 1) |
lol yeah that would be hot but I dont think you can add pics to stories here lol |
| 2011-06-23 15:13:00 |
The Little Mermaid (Part 1) |
its done just working out the kinks the sex scene is to borring for my taste and i won't post it untill i'm satisfied :) |
| 2011-04-28 12:04:57 |
Cheerleaders' Rape and Torture |
this is the hottest story iv'e read so far on this sight. and for me thats saying something. i came so hard while reading the chapter that i often missed the story and had to re read it. which made me masturbate which distracted me so i had to re read it again. no where near finished reading yet. but looking forward to all the other chapters i can get off to |
| 2011-04-26 07:36:22 |
The Little Mermaid (Part 1) |
great thanks unfortunatly my laptop was stolen so it will be awhile before i can post stories again |
| 2011-04-09 01:47:12 |
Revenge Against Ex-Wife/Step-Daughter - Part 13 (FINAL CHAPTER) |
absoloutly love it its so hot and gives me some ideas for the bedroom thanks |
| 2011-04-07 16:59:39 |
The Little Mermaid (Part 1) |
yes i agree 6icequeen9 it would be hot if eric rapes arial. i have just chosen to do it in part 2 for 2 reasons. one vanessa has him bewitched meaning shes in control so she can get him to do anything and that means longer hotter scenes & 2 i want to respect the original story by not changing the characters personalities. eric is a good guy and therefore wont hurt anyone unless he doesnt know any better. i beleive changing the characters cheapens the experience and you should allways respect a good story. |
| 2011-04-07 15:04:40 |
The Kingdom ch. 01 |
i loved the story your a great writer and really build up the suspense and emotions to this story. if i had one complaint at all it would be how the queen begged him to fuck her. seemed to dampen the forbidden being forced kind of theme other wise loved the story :) |
| 2011-04-07 00:05:28 |
The Little Mermaid (Part 1) |
thankyou for your support i hope to work on part 2 soon. a little nervous lol :) |
| 2011-03-30 02:19:24 |
A little reminder of boyfriends past.... |
i enjoyed the story :) |
| 2011-03-30 01:57:52 |
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you are a very talented writter i loved how the sex was never repetative or borring it kept you constantly aroused and in suspense for what would happen next |