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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-03-22 04:08:47 |
New Harry Potter Adventure's: Chapter 10 - The Battle of Hogwart's |
How did this lame POS get 93% rating? You want REAL HP smut, go to fanfiction.net. This one wouldn't arouse a lifer in prison. For the love of God, do us all a favor and NEVER WRITE AGAIN. |
| 2012-10-08 06:38:26 |
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You should have that nasty little cocktail weenie dangling between your fat chubby thighs WHACKED OFF WITH A SHOVEL blade, and fed to a dog. Men should all be castrated. |
| 2012-10-05 03:32:29 |
Johnno Allthwaite MP |
What's it going to take to get this POS to stop writing? |
| 2012-10-05 03:30:39 |
The Trial |
That was the stupidest thing I've ever seen. I would have gotten more fun out of watching a steaming heap of Muslim shit with flies buzzing around it. |
| 2012-10-04 05:18:51 |
Traveling the underworld and above |
This looks like the sort of story that a 14-year-old who hasn't had any sexual experiences other than her hairbrush jammed up her snatch would write. |
| 2012-10-04 05:15:45 |
Little brat girl at the truck stop |
Happily, IP CapturePro is on the job. I'm glad that a sick fucker like you will soon be in prison, and soon you're going to meet BUBBA in the prison shower. You'll be screaming and crying like the little bitch you are when BUBBA makes you his fucktoy. |
| 2012-10-03 02:43:29 |
My Hot Little Sister |
Negative rating just for the "I'm on the pill" crack. 14 year old girls who aren't having sex DON'T GO ON THE PILL. Get a clue, you fucking asscrack |
| 2012-10-03 02:34:24 |
Monopoly Birthday |
The last anon wouldn't know erotic if it jammed its horse cock in his skinny virgin ass. |
| 2012-09-17 05:35:52 |
Penny, May I Rescue you from Hell? |
I loved the part where he shot off the rapists' cocks! EVERY NASTY COCK should be lopped off and thrown in the garbage! |
| 2012-07-12 06:19:13 |
Love Her Like a Daughter, Ch. 5 |
I want to know who the 15 shitbags are who gave this great story a negative rating? |
| 2012-06-10 20:20:35 |
11 Year Old Kasey's Beginning |
You are fucking SICK. I hope when BUBBA is raping your ass in the prison shower you will understand, but by then it will be too late. You will burn in HELL for your vile and sick acts. |
| 2012-04-28 20:11:08 |
I made a baby for my sister in law. |
Hey, choad, do you think that this is Lifetime.com? Yeah, a touching story, boohoo, but where is the SEX? Fuck this, and fuck you. |
| 2012-04-28 20:08:10 |
His Debt |
This just goes to show why all men should be CASTRATED. Men use and rape women, then they come here to write lame stroke stories about it. If you are a man, do the right thing: grab a kitchen knife, a broken beer bottle, whatever ... and DESTROY THOSE NASTY TESTICLES right now! |
| 2012-04-28 19:55:30 |
My sister's baby |
Completely lame. This wouldn't give a stiffy to an inmate in solitary. Learn to write, you limp-dicked choad. |
| 2012-04-26 02:59:51 |
Corn Girl |
How many times is this choad going to post the same story? |
| 2012-04-03 05:16:46 |
Unexpected pleasure |
God, all the hallmarks of a lame story. Parents killed in Sudden Car Crash, check. Underage girl On The Pill To Regulate Her Period, check. Guy thinking he can guess a girl's measurements off the top of his head, check. Mary Sue guy type is an Ex Soldier, check. Guy Has Big Cock, check. Virgin Girl Has Immediate Orgasm, check.
The only difference between this shit and a bog standard Penthouse Forum letter is that Penthouse hires decent writers. |
| 2012-03-27 03:26:30 |
Raping Young Matt |
You are destined to die in prison where you'll have to have Kotex jammed up your ass, because BUBBA WILL RAPE YOU so much in the shower that your blood will be dribbling down the back of your thigh |
| 2012-03-10 04:04:32 |
Best Sister in the World!!! Part 1 (repost) |
Fuck you, anonymous readers |
| 2012-03-10 04:01:17 |
She Devil - Part III |
He doesn't need his cock, he should be chained to a wall, have tuna smeared all over his nasty genitals, and Madam should bring in a starving dog to CHEW THOSE NASTY PARTS OFF |
| 2012-03-10 03:59:25 |
She Devil - Part II |
Please let the next part be where she CUTS OFF HIS NASTY COCK |
| 2012-03-10 03:58:31 |
She Devil - Part I |
I hope this story ends with the woman whipping out a knife and cutting off that nasty part of the man, and FEEDING IT TO HER DOG |
| 2012-03-10 03:57:26 |
my sisters revenge |
Great idea - all men should be treated like this - but shitty writing |
| 2012-03-10 03:53:49 |
Take me Daddy |
You lying sack of shit, I bet you couldn't get it up for your right hand. What beautiful young teen wants worthless old men like you? (For starters, lying sack of shit, how many middle-aged toads can guess right off what their step-daughter's height and weight are?) |
| 2012-03-10 03:48:22 |
Sweet Katie |
You sick fucker, anyone who fantasizes about raping 10 year olds should have their cocks lopped off with razor blades. I hope you scream like the damned when Bubba ASSRAPES YOU IN PRISON. |
| 2012-03-09 14:03:15 |
Emma's Big Night |
I want all those teenage girls who think they're so hot to be PUNISHED |
| 2012-03-09 13:56:28 |
Blackmailing Vengeance (Re-edited) |
Yeah, rape that bitch, over and over again, until her belly's swollen! Film it and put it on the Internet! Make her SUFFER |
| 2012-02-29 17:30:49 |
The Tribe |
You want a comment? Okay. YOU SUCK AS A WRITER. Please do us all a favor and never write anything again. |
| 2012-02-29 17:22:52 |
Lost Virginity |
You lying SACK OF SHIT. How can this be a "true story" about a girl named Polly being raped when your account is listed as a *male*? Fuck you, you lying toad! |
| 2012-02-12 23:23:58 |
My Brother-In-Law Was My First |
I believe you that it's a true story. It's just lame and you should LEARN TO FREAKING WRITE. Spelling and grammar are good things too. |
| 2012-02-09 16:09:40 |
From 16 yr old girlfriend to 17 yr old mother |
Well, Colt ... YOU'RE AN ASSHOLE. I hope two big black men assrape you repeatedly, and you scream like a girl as you are violated. |
| 2012-02-06 09:41:40 |
Monopoly Birthday |
Some people are just dickheads, like a lot of the commenters. What, you've never seen before in your lives folks in a circle of friends who date one another, are crazy about one another, fall out of love and start dating another one in the circle? It happened in mine. |
| 2012-02-06 09:17:48 |
I love the rain |
This story wouldn't give a stiffy to a lifer in prison. Learn to write. |
| 2012-01-17 03:03:23 |
Screwing Nicki |
I hope when Bubba catches you in the prison shower that you scream for hours, as he violates you repeatedly in your fat ass. I can just imagine how like a little girl you'll scream, begging for the mercy that will be denied you, just before he shanks you in that 2-inch long shriveled stub you pretend is a penis. |
| 2012-01-16 08:06:04 |
My dream girl |
Haha, based on a TRUE STORY??? No, I don't think so. What you really are is probably a fat, pimply kid who never was athletic and couldn't win a fight on the best day of his life, with a 2-inch long shriveled dick between your fat marbled thighs, and if you ever dared to talk to a Sidney she'd laugh herself hoarse. Listen to yourself, claiming it's okay for YOU to call a girl a slut but not okay for anyone else to do it. You're a piece of work. Anyway enjoy whacking off in your parents' basement, because the only pleasure you'll ever get in your life is from your right hand, when you can't find a goat to stand still long enough to lick at your knob. |
| 2012-01-16 07:53:21 |
Tiny Cousin Amanda first time, |
Fucking illiterate teenager. I hope you get spammed with Penis Enlargement e-mail. Of course any enlargement pill would have to be amazing to turn that 2" shriveled stub dangling between your fat-marbled thighs into anything anyone would recognize as a cock, but it isn't that the stench rising from your flaccid body would let you get anywhere near close to a woman who wasn't passed out already. |
| 2012-01-16 07:50:18 |
Me and My Royal Sister |
This wouldn't give a stiff one to a lifer in prison. I nearly fell asleep reading it. |
| 2012-01-16 07:45:21 |
Katie's dress is too small (corrected) |
I miss being fucked. I wish I hadn't kept shoving my husband away, but he left me for a younger woman. |
| 2012-01-08 02:21:05 |
In My Lap On The Mower |
Fucking RAPIST I hope you run over your dick with the lawn mower and you die in agony knowing that you are no longer a man ... but then you never were, you sick freak |
| 2011-12-22 14:53:12 |
High School Revisted |
Outrageously lame even if it HADN'T been written by an illiterate. I don't think this story would give a woodie to a prison lifer. |
| 2011-12-06 01:18:45 |
A Most Exquisite Corpse |
You're fucked up. Really fucked up. I hope you die in prison, from slow bleeding from repeated anal rapings. |
| 2011-12-06 01:15:26 |
Best Sister in the World!!! Part 1 (repost) |
Just as lame as the first time! Your stories couldn't give a hard-on to a lifer in prison. |
| 2011-12-06 01:13:24 |
Best Sister in the World!!! Part 1 |
Fuck this, this is fucking LAME. A dick three inches thick is something you see on Creature Double Feature, not on human beings. GET A FUCKING CLUE you limp wristed needledick. |
| 2011-11-05 21:43:37 |
Jessica\'s Number - Part 2 of 4 |
You ARE a SICK TWISTED CUNT. I hope your throat is raw with screaming before you're allowed to die. |
| 2011-10-01 01:51:27 |
A Lesson For Liz |
How the hell did this overcontrived POS get 92%?
LEARN TO WRITE, you douchebag. |
| 2011-09-19 19:39:22 |
My Humiliation |
You lying FAGGOT, all your stories claim that they're "written by women" but your profile says you are a MAN! Of course that's a lie since you are nothing but a whimpering FAGGOT |
| 2011-09-02 06:00:27 |
Watching Darcy Die |
You sick fuck, I hope you scream yourself hoarse in prison when Bubba blasts his 10" cock into your ASS, and rips you up inside. |
| 2011-08-11 01:18:33 |
Vietnam |
What unbelievable BULLSHIT. Look, if you're going to write fantasy that has nothing to do with reality, go write Star Trek or Harry Potter or some other crap. It fits with a bullshit name like "Norik Jerkkit" anyhow. Besides which you are a LAME ASS writer whose stories couldn't get a prison lifer hard. Go back to jerking off to photos of Charlie Sheen and having your dog lick the dribbles from your diseased cock off of your hand. |
| 2011-07-29 05:04:21 |
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Fucking sick faggot, I bet you can't get it up for REAL women so you jerk off fantasizing about raping 10 year olds. I hope you get assraped in prison! |
| 2011-07-29 05:01:26 |
I just Fucked my little girl |
Fucking raping a TEN YEAR OLD? You perverted scum, you ought to have your cock chewed off by a pit bull. I hope you get assraped in prison. |
| 2011-07-25 06:48:20 |
Loving Lisas Pretty Pink Pussy Petals |
What is it with these FAGGOTS who post their e-mail? Go jerk off with sandpaper you creep! |
| 2011-07-25 06:41:55 |
Sleeping Pills |
What the hell, daveconnors5 must be a FAG |
| 2011-07-20 01:38:12 |
My First time with Daddy |
Learn to fucking write you dumb twat |
| 2011-07-20 01:37:11 |
More than Just Practice |
The usual lame bullshit of the virgin girl who's so tired of boys treating her like someone sexual, but who's been on the pill since age 13 and goes after the narrator like she's a whore. WHAT A SHITTY STORY |
| 2011-07-05 12:59:10 |
Fishing with Abby |
Yawn. Because every junior high school kid has a 10 inch cock, and kids who haven't seen each other for half their lives are in love with one another forever, and every junior high school girl is on the Pill. Sure. Right. Let me guess, and she's got perfect 36Cs too, and came the moment her virginity was ripped through. BULL FUCKING SHIT, this garbage SUCKS |
| 2011-07-05 12:46:03 |
Long hot summer |
The previous pervert fucks an 8 year old?? I hope you get RAPED TO DEATH IN PRISON you cocksucker! |
| 2011-06-14 04:19:14 |
Teaching A bitch A Lesson |
Sounds like that ILLEGAL IMMIGRANT CUNT deserved to be well fucked. They're all animals anyway and should be treated like the mongrels they are. |
| 2011-06-10 18:30:32 |
Brother and Sister finally become close |
OMG this story is a HEAP OF FLAMING SUCK!! Who talks like that? This piece of shit story couldn't make a prison lifer hard. |
| 2011-05-12 09:27:21 |
My Lovely twin. |
This is fucking RETARDED and sounds like a LAME RETARD wrote it |
| 2011-05-06 02:56:08 |
Teaching her a Lesson |
I was a fucking bitch to my husband, and he put up with it for way too long. If he'd only smacked me around a couple of times maybe he wouldn't have left me. I've been by myself for ten years now and no man wants me. |
| 2011-05-06 02:53:13 |
My first rape |
I was a fucking bitch to my husband, and he put up with it for way too long. If he'd only smacked me around a couple of times maybe he wouldn't have left me. I've been by myself for ten years now and no man wants me. |
| 2011-05-04 21:14:40 |
Playing With Fire |
Nah, you weren't raped. If a man spits in another man's face, the other guy isn't assaulting him by punching him out. Tease a guy for an hour and start playing with his dick, a girl doesn't get to play the "OMG I'm a virgin!!" card. If more teenagers had the self-control to stay away from alcohol and not go out of their way to push farther than they're prepared to back up, fewer would wind up diseased and pregnant. |
| 2011-03-28 07:19:10 |
I Had To Please Daddy Somehow |
What a POS story.
LEARN TO WRITE you dumb bitch! |
| 2011-03-28 07:16:59 |
I'm Yours and You're Mine. |
There's nothing wrong with this shit-bag story that couldn't be improved if it was CRUMBLED INTO A BALL AND FED INTO THE MOUTH OF THE WHORE WHO WROTE IT. Learn to write you dumb bimbo! |
| 2011-03-28 07:14:13 |
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You sick pig, you SHOULD have your pencil dick torn off and fed to dogs. |