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| 2013-01-03 19:24:09 |
Introduction to Pain |
Well uh it's definitely different, but short poorly detailed and frankly just reminded me of a hooker on one of her jobs and that's all im personally more of a sadist and this story well it didn't even get me semi-erect keep trying tho and please add more details |
| 2013-01-03 18:57:57 |
Someone Save Me: Pt. 4 |
I have never sayed this about a story before on this site but wow I am absolutely astounded by this story it is not just about the sex, it has kept me guessing and eager to find out exactly what is going to happen next I am very much intrigued by your stories and can't wait for the next chapter I hope it comes soon I easily give this series a 5/5 and highly recommend you keep writing you are truly good at it. |
| 2012-11-11 11:32:31 |
I get Dad after he is done with Mom |
another good but again short and could of been made into a full blown series |
| 2012-11-11 11:28:11 |
Grandpa and the twins |
good story tho short and i feel like most of your stories you could have been made into a series. |
| 2011-07-27 04:08:58 |
Faith's Party |
yeah no the lary the cable guy line did not work at all only down fall thro out the story well i think |
| 2011-06-30 23:20:34 |
Dirty Little Love Secret |
LOVED IT =D plz continue to write more |
| 2011-06-20 08:21:44 |
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ok i just stared reading i am on the fifth paragraph and iv got a few questioning things in the story u explane her to be his niece
"I picked up my niece from her mothers house"
"my sister calls and wants me to watch her daughter"
but he keeps refering to her as his sister
"Hey Sis, ready for an evening of shear boredom?"
"We arrived at the house Sis got out and gathered her back pack..."
""Sis!" I hollered, "You don't need to be cleaning my house..."
and a 10 year old doing dishes? not impossible but very highly unlikely |
| 2011-06-18 22:44:18 |
Taking HIs Sister |
nice story keep it up.
and as for the guy/girl/person below me if u got a story post it don't leave 5 different comments telling your story |
| 2011-06-17 15:32:16 |
Weekend Daughter |
interesting story not what i was expecting but still good and very interesting i do feel bad for Krissy and her dad(Bob) she looked young but how was he supposed to know unless he asked for an ID or a drivers license there are a lot of people who look younger and or older then they really are it wouldn't be unbelievable to some one that she was of age.
i personally know a few girls who are19 who look like they are only 15 and i know for a fact they are 19 |
| 2011-06-17 14:02:56 |
Waht Daddy Needs 8 |
i don't mind the whole incest thing how ever i normally don't read ones were the child and parent are in a relation ship i would of liked it more if u would of left out the little brother that she took care of when his mom took off / died i forget what happened to her but aside from that awesome story good writing and plez write one more i want to see how they proceed with the whole thing
(and yeah i care more about the story then the sex lol) |
| 2011-04-30 10:56:36 |
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OMFG!!!! this is one of the most amazing stories iv read on here thus far i give 10/10 this is exactly the kind of storie i was looking for one were they would end up together in sted of separating like all the others iv read |
| 2011-04-28 04:02:00 |
A rape during the night |
to: Anonymous reader
2011-01-15 08:03:14
obviously your ether stupid, blind, and or just skipped 2 the good part
"I was naked and was in no mood to actually put real pajamas on so i just slipped on one of my silk pajamas"
read it and u shall see what they are aculey talking about |
| 2011-04-28 03:28:59 |
Realising im a Lesbian - Part Six - Sex Songs? |
srry idk it just signed me out for some reson but the below coment is from me :p |
| 2011-04-28 03:12:51 |
Realising Im A Lesbian - Part Five - some people never learn |
thx for another awsome chapter stil think cayla is geting the shitey end but lshe is sly and sneekey wonder what ill happen next |
| 2011-03-24 20:22:43 |
Best Friends - part 1 [Jen] |
i wish you would write more i am dieing to know what's to come next |
| 2011-03-24 17:06:06 |
Realising Im (A) Lesbian - Part Four - Interuptions and Intimacy |
short indeed but good not going to lie tho kind of feel bad for Cayla seems like she got the shity end of the stick |
| 2011-03-24 17:05:42 |
Realising Im (A) Lesbian - Part Four - Interuptions and Intimacy |
short indeed but good not going to lie tho kind of feel bad for Cayla seems like she got the shity end of the stick |