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Story title |
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| 2012-08-01 18:09:38 |
Chapter 03 - My Step Sister Cindy |
Yes. As stated, the story is as accurate as I can recall. It has been many years and I may have some of the dialogue off a bit but the actions and events are all true. All true stories will be clearly announced. I'm debating on a fictional story after this series or I may just continue to share what has happened in my actual life. For me, the true stories are easier, and some of the stuff that has happened to me is pretty damned entertaining. I'm not a Brad Pitt or anything but I've done quite well in life. :) |
| 2012-03-02 00:41:53 |
My early years: Part one: Mary's lesson |
I'll back you up on that. I'm sure I had them, but my first memory of one was around 12 or so. I'm sure I got them from time to time but never really paid attention. And once I did start noticing them, it was all down hill from there. |
| 2012-03-02 00:22:54 |
Teen Fantasies Become Reality |
I agree with the previous poster. It was rushed and the dialogue seems to be very artificial. And what the fuck? They go from losing their virginity straight into wanting to have kids and then molesting them as well? I understand that this is fiction but damn, that is a bit of a stretch. Short version is this: Don't give up, take your time to tell the story properly, and try to have it at least be somewhat believable. |
| 2012-02-24 02:00:54 |
Chapter 02 - My Step Sister Cindy |
@Anon: Sorry if you feel this is a rip off of another story. The names have indeed been changed but that is as far as it goes. If is similar to another story, that cannot be helped. As I stated from the beginning, this is how it happened, for better or worse. Chapter 03 will be posted sometime in the next four days and I hope to have Chapter 04 posted within a couple of days of that. Thanks to everyone that have left comments, both positive and negative. |
| 2012-02-17 19:59:54 |
Chapter 02 - My Step Sister Cindy |
Eternal Death? Really? If I get eternal death for retelling something that happened to me then I hate to see what happens to me for some of the other stuff I've done. I will address comments in the forums shortly after this post. Including how I don't understand the definition of Incest. :P |
| 2012-02-17 19:55:53 |
Chapter 01 - My Step Sister Cindy |
*sigh* Really? Are we really going to start splitting hairs over the definition of "Incest"? I will start a thread in the forum to address comments rather than spam it all here. Regardless, I hope you enjoyed the memories I shared. See you in the forums. |
| 2012-02-16 15:25:38 |
Chapter 02 - My Step Sister Cindy |
Not to ruin it for you but that never happened. Remember these are not stories but memories of what really happened. Life is not perfectly scripted. |
| 2012-02-16 13:59:06 |
Chapter 01 - My Step Sister Cindy |
Chapter 2 just posted. Thanks for all the feedback. As for how many chapters, I don't have an answer. Some of the encounters were shorter than others or were so similar in nature that they are not worth writing. I may put together some of the shorter ones into one but that remains to be seen. My encounters with Cindy were amazing but there were other (both family and non-family) encounters I may address as well. I have had some interesting things happen to me in my life during my time in the dorms in both college and the military that I think others may enjoy reading about. As always, they are are not storybook perfect, but they are true. |
| 2012-02-16 10:01:08 |
Chapter 01 - My Step Sister Cindy |
Thank you for the feedback. I will start on Chapter 2 later today which will cover our second encounter three weeks later. (It was a very long three weeks!!!) :) |