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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-07-18 16:07:41 |
She liked to play dirty little games with me partw |
Wall of text, try breaking it into paragraphs more. |
| 2011-07-14 17:09:50 |
The Girl Of His Best Friend |
Ha Ha! Good story, very funny if you're not the husband.
What's that about putting coffee in cup and adding water? Instant coffee? She deserved to be ripped off for serving that alone. |
| 2011-06-13 17:34:40 |
kumar and jo |
Well it looks like you wrote this one on your own.You even have your sock comment on.Not too good imo, but I won't vote on, one way or another. Tell your "friend" mumbai to behave, not to troll down others. |
| 2011-04-26 16:57:31 |
Robbie........ |
You stole this story from this site as other posters have noted-maybe in India that's okay but not here-you will be reported and hopefully banned-crook! |
| 2011-04-15 23:11:04 |
Outback Bar |
Yeah he might have a lot of money but thats bs to rip him off! |
| 2011-04-03 11:55:40 |
My God Mitchell Where Did You Get That? |
i don't think a teenaged girl would say the butcher shop line about meat but it was funny. |
| 2011-03-30 19:54:36 |
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u ask in forum post if people want sex or story. u figure out -people want incest. |
| 2011-03-30 19:51:43 |
Rough Justice |
You have written a terrifying story. Very well written.Can't vote for, can't vote against. |
| 2011-03-30 19:21:47 |
Sophie's Summer Holiday |
This story is excellent. I think this story won contest in past challenge and I see why. Very poignant. You are one of best writers on site that I have read. |
| 2011-03-27 22:04:10 |
Max's desire to rape 3 |
don't get bent out of shape-me no vote on story-but having big monster dick- not real monster- now this story listed as monster story - monster story should have reel monster |
| 2011-03-27 12:46:50 |
Sweet Melody |
wimmers on ur 2011-03-09 post u spell competition as
competitition? y u do that? u have tit on brain, i think |
| 2011-03-27 09:54:01 |
Miss Brahms is Spanked |
msr.shakespeare u shud have kept reading i left another mistake in story for reeders to find it like an easter egg hunt
btw u shud check ur spelling Mis=Miss fucken=fucking |
| 2011-03-26 14:23:06 |
Sweet Melody |
me give u positive vote even tho ur character is a CAD & BOUNDER |
| 2011-03-25 08:02:57 |
limerick |
thank u #1 fan wimmers me not take Lord's name in vain y u say that? |
| 2011-03-25 08:01:34 |
limerick |
sorry all me no this not proper limerick but when used original with 5 lines it not publish - need 500 characters so i just keep adding stuff keep comments coming - they better than "poem" |
| 2011-03-20 12:13:39 |
Fucking the Porn Reader Girl |
it not spelled fucken-its fucking- u rite me not have experience but me learn how to from dougaldick |
| 2011-03-20 12:13:26 |
Fucking the Porn Reader Girl |
it not spelled fucken-its fucking- u rite me not have experience but me learn how to from dougaldick |
| 2011-03-20 12:09:27 |
Erotobots Do The Funniest Things |
r u really william? he rite syfy too and u and him r friends
u can tell me i no tell(our secret i pinky swear)
how she want robot to look like doug, that funny ;) |
| 2011-03-20 09:37:59 |
Fucking the Porn Reader Girl |
oh the girl who track u down do spell/grammar check she not good i blame her this time if ur other stories this bad written i blame u and then vote on this story i give u pass but it not written
better i vote then , peeple vote pos on this? they shud put down crack pipe |
| 2011-03-20 09:32:39 |
Fucking the Porn Reader Girl |
She wanted to re-designed herself in story huh? |
| 2011-03-20 09:28:43 |
Fucking the Porn Reader Girl |
eased dropped? even i see that u should buy a better understanding of words me go back to story now but if i see new mistake i let u know ;) |
| 2011-03-20 09:07:30 |
Max's desire to rape |
mr kool u not so cool u vote down other stories but some of them can rite, u cant not in english ;) r u chinese? ur people not 2 reel either i cast thumb down |
| 2011-03-20 09:01:10 |
Sweet Melody |
ww wimmers u mean take nice girls money $ even let no good chinamen fuk her u not nice:( |
| 2011-03-19 01:15:41 |
Max's desire to rape |
english not ur language , is it? |
| 2011-03-17 22:09:25 |
Mistress Hazel |
me like ur avatar :) |
| 2011-03-17 07:55:19 |
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sad story mak me sad :( |
| 2011-03-16 08:10:40 |
Daddies Girls |
with ur daughter is not rite just sayin |
| 2011-03-16 08:08:22 |
Confessions of a Cock Slut: Craving for Dog Meat conclusion |
u shouldnt share girl with dog u crazy |
| 2011-03-16 08:00:50 |
Cybergasm. |
bravo hooray ur best yet until the next one |
| 2011-03-16 07:53:46 |
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did a dingo eat ur brain |
| 2011-03-16 07:52:48 |
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this story came from ur hed no way its bs wonder woman no 1 |
| 2011-03-16 07:49:50 |
Golden Chains in Sherazad Chapter 1 |
this s really bad did a kangaru kick u in the hed |
| 2011-03-15 23:18:37 |
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you desecrate wonder woman |
| 2011-03-15 23:16:37 |
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this is so lame and gay |
| 2011-03-13 12:04:36 |
Little Red |
Good story probly better than new movie |
| 2011-03-13 11:55:27 |
Surprise From Big Brother |
Where's the monster? A big dick isn't a monster. This story is gay. |
| 2011-03-13 11:55:27 |
Surprise From Big Brother |
Where's the monster? A big dick isn't a monster. This story is gay. |