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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-07-05 19:52:57 |
Fucking Beth |
This story is THE biggest pile of shit on here - not just what's in the story - yes, that's disgusting but you need a better lay out too. Man up and cme back with a better story. |
| 2011-07-05 19:52:20 |
Fucking Beth |
This story is THE biggest pile of shit on here - not just what's in the story - yes, that's disgusting but you need a better lay out too. Man up and cme back with a better story. |
| 2011-06-02 19:12:07 |
Try sleeping pills on sister |
good story! i liked the ending especially! |
| 2011-04-13 20:56:58 |
Dirty Little Boys, Filthy Big Girls |
Corr blimey! Such a fantastic story - well structured and very satisfying - well, almost - i need to jerk off again now - time number three.... I wish my big sister would do the same but she told me off when I felt her boob in her sleep. Anyways, you should be proud of this story and I'd reccommend it anyday! - This is my comment - it logged me out again for some reason :) |
| 2011-04-13 19:53:48 |
Mommy, Show Me How! |
Hey, i absolutely loved that story! I wouldn't have minded if my mum was like that! :) xx |
| 2011-04-06 20:40:00 |
love between siblings: part 3 |
This story is perfect - the love, passion and relationship are all in perfect synchronization :) |
| 2011-04-06 20:39:02 |
love between siblings: part 3 |
This story is perfect - the love, passion and relationship are all in perfect synchronization :) |
| 2011-04-06 20:10:54 |
love between siblings |
Great writing style! You seem to know what'snecessary and what's not with it - for example, you had the build up leading to the sex scene - you wanted Becky to have the confidence in making love to Jack whilst being assured that he wasn't just using her. Such a great effort! 10/10 (dare I mention it lol!) :) |
| 2011-04-04 08:28:19 |
Daughter's Friend |
That comment was made by me. It logged me out just as I clicked the "post a comment" button :) |
| 2011-04-04 07:31:57 |
12 year old sister rape pt. 1 |
That last bit with the boy spoilt the first part. Over all score - 4/10 |
| 2011-04-03 02:57:00 |
Timmy And Jessica |
Fucking good! Brilliant story! |
| 2011-04-03 02:55:47 |
Timmy And Jessica |
Fucking good! Brilliant story! |
| 2011-04-03 02:55:15 |
Timmy And Jessica |
Fucking good! Brilliant story! |
| 2011-03-29 19:01:37 |
A DINNER WE WONT FORGET |
That really turned me on... such a great story! |
| 2011-03-29 19:00:44 |
A DINNER WE WONT FORGET |
That really turned me on... such a great story! |
| 2011-02-27 20:20:29 |
home alone well not quite (proper version) part 1 |
Good story! All you need to do now is keep it going! |