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Comment |
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| 2011-07-23 19:48:44 |
Playing With Fire - CAW 7 |
not my type of story at all but i quite liked it, you read so many stories on here that are the same over and over but i've never seen anything in this background before. keep up the good work :) x |
| 2011-07-05 19:53:46 |
I can't just say 'SIster you're fucking me' |
well am sorry but others disagree, and your comment sucked soo much you wrote it 4 times :/ |
| 2011-07-01 08:20:03 |
I can't just say 'SIster you're fucking me' |
wow, i get it. people if your going to leave feedback, please don't write the same thing over and over. Am sick hearing it !:L
i have wrote many times, when i write again i will work on the grammer, spelling and layout. |
| 2011-06-30 08:32:39 |
I can't just say 'SIster you're fucking me' |
well i can see that there are plenty haters! but quite a few folk have asked for another one. and i think 81% is a cracking score for a first time so i'll still writing chapter 2 over the next week but think al start a different series too, something more me ;) |
| 2011-06-28 19:38:14 |
I can't just say 'SIster you're fucking me' |
It's a true story as explained in the intro, true as in the intro happened and the rest was my imagination's reply. you'd be able to figure that out from the intro!!
so if your going to play stupid at least dont remain annoynmas! |
| 2011-06-22 15:58:51 |
Angel: Destroyed by Dad parts 3 and 4 |
great story :) just like the last, loved it :)
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| 2011-06-22 13:29:21 |
A Night With My Younger Step Sister |
ignore the grammer nazi's :P any1 with a brain can realise the 15/16 was a typo within 0.2 seconds....
great story, loved it. well done :) |
| 2011-06-22 13:03:45 |
Being at a gas station CAN be fun |
i aint no grammer nazi so i aint goin to point out what every1 always does (it bugs me 2 when people do it!)
anyway my opnion, story just didn't do anything for me, didn't seem very realistic and more like something a teenage boy would think of with an over active imagination.
good effort just not my thing :) |
| 2011-06-22 13:03:20 |
Being at a gas station CAN be fun |
i aint no grammer nazi so i aint goin to point out what every1 always does (it bugs me 2 when people do it!)
anyway my opnion, story just didn't do anything for me, didn't seem very realistic and more like something a teenage boy would think of with an over active imagination.
good effort just not my thing :) |
| 2011-06-22 09:52:22 |
I can't just say 'SIster you're fucking me' |
god, i will i will, paragraphs, spacing, spell check etc. i'll get there!
i was just bored and wrote a wee something. Nothing major.
AND i hate to disagree but i know many many guys that can and have went all night ;) and cum far more than 10 times, think my record is a guy who came 27 times in 24 hours. yeah some guys can. you might just be unlucky..... |
| 2011-06-21 20:40:34 |
I can't just say 'SIster you're fucking me' |
i did explain i didn't write this for this means, it was actually in pieces in an msn conversation pieces together, i tried to fix it up and i probably could have if i had made more of an effort.
I spent about 20 minutes max on this and if this goes well then obviously i might make it a hobby and actually try with the story.
i know i've never read porn and thought about the grammer and spelling mistakes.
My friend, didnt get to read the full story, he got what he needed after the 1st half but i'll get this to him asap.
i know. it was formatted better before i copied n paster it, like there was blank lines between paragraphs n stuff, i'm not used to writing, not wrote since i was at college last year
thanks for your comments, i take your critisim but would more like to hear your views on the story than the grammer, spelling, format etc. sure add it in but at least mention the story
i do aplogise grammer nazis :) |
| 2011-06-01 22:00:03 |
What Daddy Needs 7 |
yeah liked it but why the hell does every long lasting porn story end in pregnancy. complete put off. its porn not a soap :( |
| 2011-03-09 20:34:12 |
Charity Starts At Home : Chapter 4 : Learning the Basics |
loved it. just cant wait for the next part!! |
| 2011-02-15 21:01:39 |
Charity Starts At Home : Chapter 2 : Entertaining Guests |
everyone saying this is completely unrealistic, not really to be fair. yeah so i never shagged guys after my mum or that but i lost my virginity several years younger than charity and i can totally see her getting addicted to it and suddenly wanting to experiement and try everything. that's the way i was. i can see a side of charity in me. Love it! |
| 2011-02-15 20:56:38 |
Charity Starts At Home: Chapter 3 : Gotta Hve Faith |
oh 1 more thing, who reads sex stories and notices spelling mistakes, i didnt notice 1, you must have a poor imagination because i was imagining the situation, not spell checking. |
| 2011-02-15 20:55:09 |
Charity Starts At Home: Chapter 3 : Gotta Hve Faith |
thought story was great. turned me right on, and is keepin me up at night imagining it.
and to all those moaning about the pregnancy bit, yeah i had to read back a bit to realise but it took me like 3 seconds, not hard to figure out.
anyway great writing and i can't wait for part 4 :D |