Comments from GoodFather
|2011-03-10 08:01:44||This story began well. I liked the love shown between the daughter and the father. The sex scene at the end felt coarse and of character with what had gone before. Sex between these two should have been a gentle and loving experience after some resistance from the father.
I gave this a positive rating. If it ended as well as it began it could have been significant.
|2011-09-07 04:38:55||TEENAGE GIRLS FOR SALE||I would have liked this story more if the girls were virgins. That would have made them more vulnerable, and the story more exciting. Nevertheless, this is a superior piece of work.|