Comments from BabyBella

Date Story title Comment
2011-01-10 19:47:11 Fascinated with hypnotism Good story. I'm not always keen on hypnotism stories but this was better than most. I look forward to future chapters.
2011-01-12 06:27:06 Young Samantha - Chapter 1 I loved it. Not realistic and the spelling and grammar were poor in places, but it made me wet, and that's the main thing.
2012-02-15 16:32:19 The Best for Society a Calling All Writers X story I'm not sure what to say about this. It's like I walked in the middle of a movie, and then it ended before I really got to understand what was going on. What's there is intriguing and well-written, but it's not what I would call a story - it's more like an excerpt from a bigger story. Anyway, I gave it a positive and wish you well in the competition.