Fascinated with hypnotism
||Good story. I'm not always keen on hypnotism stories but this was better than most. I look forward to future chapters.
Young Samantha - Chapter 1
||I loved it. Not realistic and the spelling and grammar were poor in places, but it made me wet, and that's the main thing.
The Best for Society a Calling All Writers X story
||I'm not sure what to say about this. It's like I walked in the middle of a movie, and then it ended before I really got to understand what was going on. What's there is intriguing and well-written, but it's not what I would call a story - it's more like an excerpt from a bigger story. Anyway, I gave it a positive and wish you well in the competition.