||The ten of them chapter 18
||I love the story line and the characters are belivable. Please keep this great story going.
||Sweet Little Sister - Part 3
||Its a great story that is easy to love , please keep on writeing part 4. Your a gifted writerthat tells a great story.
||The Inventor - Part 2 - Chapter 9
||yes! yes! your work is great this story is one that needs to go on for ever. yes you have to work on other storys but keep this one open and you will make it better and better just look at the first part and the second part at your emprovement in just this short of time. keep it up please in all that you write.
||The Inventor - Part 2 - Chapter 1
||This is much easer to read it is a short chapter but a fun oneplease keep up the good writeing and work. Please add more chapters to this story.
||The Hawk - 1984
||much better a hole lot less typos and other cluter in this story. please finish your inventor story keep up this way in your writeing and you will go far
||The Inventor and his girls... part 1
||this story has it share of typos, bad usage of words,bad gramer. but it does have a refrashing story that is not finished yet the only way that you can improve is to write and not let your readers tell you how bad you are as you will get the hang of it sooner or later please finish this wonder full story that you have started.
||please keep up your writeing as you are inproving this is a good start please write more chapters
||Worshippind Miki Part Two
|| A well written sequel, the two stories are great and fun to read. This story could use a lot more sequels to it. keep it cuming.
||SEQUEL: Revenge Against the Ex-Wife and Stepdaughter, Part 2
||cool story keep it cuming
||The beginning of the end
or a first time you do good . Yes please keep on writeing as this story needs a lot more chapters to it.
||hay Let your readers know where to buy your book as I for one would love toknow the ending to this story
||Giving in to my sister: Part 1
||this a great story you need to keep at it and the --- with what your readers think
||Jessica Loves Me? 3
|| By all means the reader needs chapter 4. You are writeing fine keep it up.
|| I can't wate for the next chapter to this wonderfull tale'
||two tickets to hinder
|| so I see some honest coments It is one story that is great
||shipwrecked chapter 1
||To all anonymous readers you suck ! This story may or may not suck did you write it ? This story has it points so enjoy them
||The Crash, part 1
|| This should be a long and fun story or noval you are doing great with it so far
||Man of the House Part 2.
|| I can't wait for more of an excelent story it is just plain fun to read