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| 2011-10-16 03:28:54 |
I move to canada |
Just as you couldn't make much sense out of my story I can't make much sense out of this. I love the idea of doing something unusual but the only problem is when it doesn't work out it is usually a disaster. Much too confusing and unreal. Did he record the entire conversation so he could quote it to her sometime in the future? |
| 2011-04-23 07:56:58 |
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Just to let everyone know Part 2 is now being written and should be posted in the next few days. |
| 2011-03-23 16:22:18 |
Fifteen |
I like sci-fi. Please keep going. |
| 2011-03-22 18:46:51 |
limerick |
Take not the Lord's name in vain! |
| 2011-03-18 18:21:17 |
My Stepfather 6 |
Don't like anal or transsexual stories |
| 2011-03-18 18:10:24 |
Roses for Monica |
Crap. Sorry don't like it. |
| 2011-03-18 18:08:27 |
My Stepfather |
The formatting is crap making this totally unreadable and I don't like anal or gay. At least you have one comment from someone who does not hide behind the cloak of anonymity. |
| 2011-03-13 21:22:20 |
Secret revealed 2! |
You're a fucking troll. How do you like it? |
| 2011-03-13 18:17:30 |
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Sorry guys. No more writing. I'm fed up of the talentless scumbags that vote down for no reason at all. Such a shame as I had many other stories to write. |
| 2011-03-11 16:26:54 |
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Waiting for an answer. Do I vote this up or down? |
| 2011-03-11 02:03:23 |
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Do unto others as you would have them do unto you! |
| 2011-03-07 15:23:33 |
Disaster at Antonio's |
God! People are never happy. If you only leave one line between paragraphs it disappears during posting and leaves one condensed lump of text which is unreadable. When you make the effort to make the story readable they complain it is too spaced out. And each time anonymous comments. And what the hell 'Bump' is supposed to indicate to you beats me. Keep up the good work.
As for AR 11/03/02 It is obviously a writer who doesn't have the balls to identify him- or herself. |
| 2011-02-10 07:02:11 |
Disaster at Antonio's |
Really good. Novel way of telling the story. I'd written a totally different story about the same photo but as I have now asked for all my stories to be deleted I won't be entering the competition. Hope you do really well in it. |
| 2011-02-09 14:36:10 |
A Satyrs Revenge |
I know you're in a difficult position at the moment being one of only 3 writers stuck at the top of the list, as the voting system has been shut down, and therefore the subject of a lot of hate on the site, but of the 6 stories this is the only one I have downloaded and plan to read again. Keep up the good work. |
| 2010-12-29 05:53:54 |
The Teacher's Conference |
This is just so beautiful. Has to be in the top 3 stories on the site. How it isn't rated 110% beats me. Why can't people who don't like a story just go away and leave an obviously great and well-written story's rating high? It's what a lot of people look for and thousands must have missed out on Mandy's first time because of a handful of dicks! |
| 2010-12-25 17:01:34 |
what ever happenz happens |
Ok guy. If your only half German you should have got at least 2 of the 4 words correct but you only got 1 out of 4. "Ich habe eine Schwester" and I'm not even 1/8th German. Loved te bit about your balls and the wooden spachula. Let me know if you post the video of it on YouTube |
| 2010-12-25 16:41:14 |
what ever happenz happens |
Christ man! Can you post a video of your balls whith the wooden spachula? I'm just dying to see iot! |