Comments from BigWayne
|2010-12-20 19:17:52||Me and Dad in the Woods: Part 2||I appreciate that. Thanks.
Yeah, I tend to get a little carried away and vulgar when I start going good and I'm feeling a bit amorous while writing. That comes from typing with only one hand, ifyaknowhutimeen. X-) Sometimes I tend to put a little too much detail in them, and they get a bit long winded and stay in one scene for too long. I try to give the reader a good bit of detail so they can get into a character. My main problem is using a limited amount of descriptive words too frequently. My vocabulary isn't all that extensive, and I have to keep referring to Thesaurus.com all the time to get a fresh word for one I've used a lot.
|2010-12-20 19:41:20||Me and Dad in the Woods: Part 1||I am still currently adding to this, and I expect at least 4 chapters at least. Thanks for reading. All comments, good or bad, are welcome.|