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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-05-26 20:14:50 |
Fallen Angel |
make it longer! I wouldn't have left then, I'd have had her for a week or two until she was completely useless... xD |
| 2012-11-15 21:32:42 |
I Lust My Sister Meridian |
great story, well written, nice plot and good twists... |
| 2011-01-23 02:39:26 |
Oh no Please...... |
dont listen to peoples criticism they probably just dont like the fact it was a bunch of guys rather than girls... i liked the way it was written, i wouldnt switch from 1st to 3rd so much myself, but it did work kinda.. lol pm me x |
| 2011-01-23 02:39:10 |
Oh no Please...... |
dont listen to peoples criticism they probably just dont like the fact it was a bunch of guys rather than girls... i liked the way it was written, i wouldnt switch from 1st to 3rd so much myself, but it did work kinda.. lol pm me x |
| 2011-01-03 16:40:20 |
How I came to be. Part 1 |
oh i'll be reading part 2 |
| 2010-12-25 22:00:57 |
A Lusty Teacher |
i liked it, message me if theres a part 2 coming!! or if you want ideas of where to take it next.. |
| 2010-12-25 21:52:16 |
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wow, and i thought i was fucked up |
| 2010-12-22 02:31:21 |
The Rape PT 2 |
that'll teach me to proof read eh :p lol. for the record its like 8.4 but you get good erections and bad! |
| 2010-12-18 23:12:08 |
the rape. |
sorry about the lack of paragraphs, they were there but they got lost in the cut and paste process, my bad for not checking. i'll rewrite the first part as soon as i finish the second ;) its coming people |
| 2010-12-18 23:11:53 |
the rape. |
sorry about the lack of paragraphs, they were there but they got lost in the cut and paste process, my bad for not checking. i'll rewrite the first part as soon as i finish the second ;) its coming people |
| 2010-12-18 23:11:39 |
the rape. |
sorry about the lack of paragraphs, they were there but they got lost in the cut and paste process, my bad for not checking. i'll rewrite the first part as soon as i finish the second ;) its coming people |
| 2010-12-18 23:11:25 |
the rape. |
sorry about the lack of paragraphs, they were there but they got lost in the cut and paste process, my bad for not checking. i'll rewrite the first part as soon as i finish the second ;) its coming people |
| 2010-12-15 12:22:58 |
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very good write so far |