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Date Story title Comment
2011-01-18 14:48:16 Good Story but I don't like the wide format it makes reading more difficult
2011-12-17 17:05:41 MIchelle Part 1 Excellent!!! Only one spelling mistake. Better than 99% of other stories. I also wonder where is the daughter?
2011-12-19 19:46:17 Weekend at a cabin; part 4 Not a bad series!! Well done, but a few mistakes.
2011-12-19 19:48:41 Weekend at a cabin; part 4 Better writing comes out like you talk. How does the past tense of think sound? Thunk?
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