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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-12-05 01:56:16 |
Becoming a single mom |
Very sad and disturbing. |
| 2012-12-05 01:47:32 |
Afternoon Encounter |
If true, couldn't you have taken a moment to help Lisa cover up and collect herself? Well, this story is not my cup of tea generally. |
| 2012-12-05 01:34:42 |
Life's Strange Turns. Part 1 |
I enjoyed your ability to capture a male perspective of women and sex. Well written and easy to read grammatically. An interesting story may be to now take the perspective of the 60-year-old woman, and tell her part of the tale. Rushed in a few places and the ending felt abrupt. But a lot of potential in your creative mind. I encourage you to keep writing. |
| 2011-10-15 01:42:38 |
Camping With Mom - Part 3 |
I'm with the woman who commented she is so horney she'd fuck her son, only I'd fuck my mother. Soo hot. Don't care how much is true. The heat between them is amazing..
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| 2011-10-15 00:59:12 |
Camping With Mom - Part 1 |
Much better edited. I have camped in cold weather and wish I had a hot woman to snuggle up to. Made me hard... |
| 2011-03-13 05:20:40 |
Best of Friends |
That was fun. More detail about physical attributes would be appreciated. Hope more sexual things went on and you will write about them too. |
| 2011-02-12 02:49:00 |
My Sister Taught Me |
Outstanding little story. I loved the female perspective and the description of how your pussy felt and your sensations. Like others more details of the conversations would be nice. I hope you write more. |
| 2011-02-12 02:48:35 |
My Sister Taught Me |
Outstanding little story. I loved the female perspective and the description of how your pussy felt and your sensations. Like others more details of the conversations would be nice. I hope you write more. |
| 2011-02-07 20:47:06 |
My friend had a hot mom |
I didn't know the details or female anatomy all that well, but I was smart enough to figure out she wasn't just scratching any old itch. Especially after I saw an orgasmic face like my own when I came. A case of 2+2 must equal 4. |
| 2011-02-05 13:40:08 |
My friend had a hot mom |
Wimmers -- Thanks for explaining. I didn't have a clue. I'm new around here. I didn't expect many people to read my story, let alone vote positively after seeing some haters around. But thanks for explaining. I'll be more careful in future to vote only on older stories. Though I invite people to check on my postings about stories, and the majority are very positive, including one that was published just a couple days ago. Thanks again for explaining. |
| 2011-02-04 07:40:48 |
Oh... Oh my... OH!!! |
What an awesome story. Precum is leaking and you made me so hot! Keep going... |
| 2011-02-04 07:17:55 |
At The Beach |
An outstanding story. Loved it and my cock made a tent in my boxers. I'll look for your next story! |
| 2011-02-03 21:42:35 |
My friend had a hot mom |
I comment on what I like or don't like. And not anonymously, I'll point out. I have no idea, nor do I care when they were written. And I have never intended any criticisms or cudos to be anything but constructive and pithy. I miss your point on why the date would matter at all. I am not in competition with anyone but myself. |
| 2011-02-02 05:01:53 |
Mums Friend |
Fun tease of a story. I enjoyed the realism.. |
| 2011-02-02 04:51:16 |
It Could Really Be That Good? |
I dated a woman years ago who said when shed owned a big dog he would lick her to orgasm better than any man. She never let the dog fuck her though. As I fucked her once, I asked if she would like me to find her a dog for a threesome and she squirted cum everywhere. Never happened but glad you got your fantasies played out. Keep writing. |
| 2011-02-02 04:37:34 |
Young girl plays nurse for elderly man |
Fun story, but try editinging it for punctuation and use of pluralization. But I got the gist and it made me hard. Thanks. |
| 2011-01-10 00:48:37 |
My College Years - Part 1 |
An outstanding effort. I loved the descriptive narative enhanced by believable dialogue. Segues in plot were efficient. I liked the real feel to the story.Most of all it made me hard as a rock. So much better than much of the drivel posted here. Keep writing! |
| 2010-12-18 10:37:37 |
My First Time-Age 16 |
Megan:
A wonderful story with a nice pace to the plot, and very real in the feel of emotions. Some of the dialogue was a little stilted and there were a few minor errors in grammar, but the hardon it gave me more trhan made up for it. Very believable. What happened to Brandy while all this was going on? You should write more. I love true stories from the female perspective. Brava! |