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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-10-12 18:56:13 |
Blessed Be... |
Generally, we like it. |
| 2011-10-12 04:08:18 |
He knew she'd like it... |
That was pretty good. ^-^ |
| 2011-10-12 04:07:45 |
He knew she'd like it... |
That was pretty good. ^-^ |
| 2011-07-02 05:26:30 |
Fucking the Farm Hands |
It's a goddamn story!! Fiction or not!! 'Nd as for all them assholes who like to be dicks, just because the words aren't spelled correctly or what -the-fuck-ever, it's a pieces of shit? Or is it, you can't bust a nut? Do you really need correct grammar to do that? x} THEN GO READ YOU 'PRECIOUS' DICTIONARY 'nd, please, just PLEASE! SDFU. x} Seesh, get the hell over yourself. x} |
| 2011-07-01 23:24:36 |
.I Hope You'll Get Addicted. |
Lol. These comments are silly. Good story. In ways, not so good.
~JnF~ |
| 2011-07-01 22:57:35 |
Eliza's Rape |
Wow, absolutely terrific! Please write more?
~JnF~ |
| 2011-07-01 22:27:39 |
The Attacks Chpt. 1 - Kieran |
That was really really good. We can't wait for part two. You, sir, have great talent!
~JnF~ |
| 2011-07-01 18:02:50 |
Midnight Visit Ch. 2 |
Wow, we love is. Hope there's more to come.
~JandF~ |
| 2011-07-01 18:02:33 |
Midnight Visit Ch. 2 |
Wow, we love is. Hope there's more to come.
~JandF~ |
| 2011-06-30 04:04:29 |
Raped a goth girl |
Lol. The comment below ours is funny, harsh, but funny. It was pretty good. But, yeah, rushed. It seemed as if you were didn't care 'nd were just being lazy. 'Nd the kill was good, but it could've happened a bit more... entertaining, you know? You should rewrite it. In our opinion, any ways.
~JandF~ |
| 2011-06-30 03:50:15 |
rebirth |
The lesbian. We like it. x} 'Nd as for all them assholes who like to be dicks just because it's not typed correctly or what-the-hell-ever... SDFU. x} Seesh, get over yourselves. -.-
~JandF~ |
| 2011-06-30 02:13:11 |
Who Are You? |
Yes, the lack of sex is truly refreshing. We really like the work, the way it seems there's more to it, 'nd the way we feel reading it, though we can not describe what it is we feel. Please keep writing, it's great work 'nd talent you have here.
~JandF~ |
| 2011-06-28 01:31:46 |
The Invasion Part 2 |
We love it! Great job. Please continue -- Please!
~JandF~ |
| 2011-06-28 00:55:35 |
Jack and Jill - A Naughty Nursery Rhyme |
Jack and Jill went up the hill,
to smoke some marijuana.
Jack got high,
and down his fly,
said 'Jill if she wanna'?
Jill said yes,
and dropped her dress,
then they had some fun.
But stupid Jill forgot her pill,
and now they have a son.
Woo-hoo!
We love how you put it! xD
~JandF~ |
| 2011-06-24 04:10:43 |
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We absolutely love, love, love, LOVE IT! We definitely agree with the comment below ours! So far it's one of the best we've read! We just fallin' in love!
~J&F~ |
| 2011-06-24 04:03:33 |
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We absolutely love, love, love, LOVE IT! We definitely agree with the comment below ours! So far it's one of the best we've read! We just fallin' in love!
~J&F~ |
| 2011-06-13 23:50:59 |
Vampire Seduction 4 |
What?! Dx Don't get us wrong, the ending was great! But... we agree with the last comment -- keep up the great work! x} |
| 2011-06-08 16:57:16 |
Interspecie Breeding |
That was a good story. Um, these comments... We find them quite... disturbing... -.- |
| 2011-03-30 20:18:16 |
Broken Hearts and Last Goodbyes Part 2 |
We love it! He really can't wait for part three! x}} |
| 2011-03-30 20:17:30 |
Broken Hearts and Last Goodbyes Part 2 |
We love it! He really can't wait for part three! x}} |
| 2011-01-13 17:04:26 |
My Brother's Smile |
This was such a wonderful story! We love it! ^.^ |
| 2010-12-25 18:00:00 |
First Orgasm To First Fuck |
It was a good story but... I mean, well, why would he fuck his mom and not one of his sisters? And not knowing what an erection is, well, for some guys, that happens. But, honestly, the thought of those who have or want to fuck their own mom, well, is just flat out... um... we have to say sick. Cool story and all but there is no way in hell we think someone fucking their mother is... 'hot'. |
| 2010-12-25 17:30:01 |
6 stages of Guilt |
This was a very good story. We have no idea what to say. |
| 2010-12-06 12:34:21 |
My cousin and I |
Good story. We like it. |
| 2010-12-06 10:18:47 |
The unexspected |
Great story. We love it! Best Vampire story we read. |
| 2010-12-06 09:24:10 |
Beast |
Wow! More, More, MORE! The best story we've read! |
| 2010-12-06 08:42:26 |
The punk and me |
Badass story, that. We loved it. |
| 2010-12-05 13:41:52 |
A Weekend With My Punk Rock Cousin (Part 2) |
AWESOME! This is one of the best stories we've read yet! Keep up the fantastic work! |
| 2010-12-04 12:13:02 |
Loved by Joey |
Wow! This is the best short story we've ever read! |
| 2010-12-04 11:47:01 |
Finding out the Hard Way Part 1 |
Who cares what they think? Not everybody thinks the same way at that age and growing. We liked the story, though. :) |
| 2010-12-04 11:46:46 |
Finding out the Hard Way Part 1 |
Who cares what they think! Not everybody thinks the same way at that age and growing. We liked the story, though. :) |
| 2010-12-04 11:45:23 |
Finding out the Hard Way Part 1 |
Who cares what they think! Not everybody thinks the same way at that age and growing. We liked the story, though. :) |
| 2010-12-04 11:07:51 |
Nathan's Nightmare - part two |
You get props for this story. We love it -- please keep writing! :) |
| 2010-12-04 11:06:45 |
Nathan's Nightmare - part two |
You get props for this story. We love it -- Please keep writing! :) |
| 2010-12-04 08:35:50 |
Nathan's Nightmare part one |
We second that. Hopefully the kid gets back at him. But good story, none the less. |
| 2010-12-04 08:07:17 |
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Oh. My. God... O.O What the hell?! Thats fucked up!! It's a good story and all, but whoa... We just dunno what to say... |
| 2010-12-04 08:06:35 |
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Oh. My. God... O.O What the hell?! Thats fucked up!! It's a good story and all, but whoa... We just dunno what to say... |
| 2010-11-20 09:47:28 |
Revenge and Reward |
We absolutely love it! ♥♥ We would love to see a sequal! ^.^ |
| 2010-11-20 09:47:24 |
Revenge and Reward |
We absolutely love it! ♥♥ We would love to see a sequal! ^.^ |
| 2010-11-20 09:47:08 |
Revenge and Reward |
We absolutely love it! ♥♥ We would love to see a sequal! ^.^ |