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| 2012-03-05 18:00:32 |
A TIGHT SQUEAKER |
I have a little problem with the age spread of this story and with the story starting off as rape. The spin did not have it ending up as rape which is good, but fo anyone who has ever had sex with their, mother etc hoping that what was forced turns into somthing good, would most likely be mistaken. This is why I like to read stories about Sister Brother Incest with the female in full control from the start. It takes out the Rape Factor. If the writer of the story started it with a rape, regardless of how it turns out then it still just his spin. Again the Female being in control evan starting the action " she walked into the bathroom got in the shower and put his dick in her mouth, he could feel her and through the steam see her, as her head bobed up and down on his 8" Dick" See the difference girl in control.
That said it was a good story well written SSB is a fine writer. |
| 2012-02-27 23:37:18 |
Tales of a Secret Sex Writer, Chapter 1 |
This is a very good story. The only reason that it does not have a higher rating is because No on had Sex with any one, and the suck and fuck people can't stand that. This is in my Favs as a link to the rest of the series.
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| 2012-02-27 23:06:02 |
Tales of a Secret Sex Writer, Chapter 9 |
Good Job Great Story, pure fiction. Then again that what incest fiction is all about, doing what you can't other wise do, mostly because in real life it is not wise to do such things. You are a fine writer and only a few really good stories this year |
| 2012-02-11 01:11:31 |
Little Sister's Dilemma - Part IV (Conclusion) |
It all family and thats what counts most. A great wrap to a great story. |
| 2012-02-11 01:01:45 |
Little Sister's Dilemma - Part III |
Great Story, some of your best work ever. I hope in the fiction of these stories as they work in fiction as often as you want them to, but in real life rarely work out. Unless you go to Berzil or somewhere else that merrying you sister is legal, or at least No one cares.
Here we have Laws so good some not so good and incest is Taboo on many levals, I am not sure about gau incest male or female and have no desire to go anywhere near there.
I never had a sister but if I did i am sure that she would have went with my mother in the divorce and we would have been at best estranged. Or someone would have had to of died for bothering my sister had there been one.
In real life I have seen cases of where there either had been or was Incest going on, bad mostly bacause of the the selling of the female as a victim regardless either in real time or in what happened in the past. I close aged teens evan Dr. Lora calls it fooling around and makes it no big deal as long as there was No Force |
| 2012-02-11 00:19:57 |
Little Sister's Dilemma |
One of the best Sister and Brother Sex Stories that I have read. A real good story told by a Great Writer and Word Smith. Its in my Favs. |
| 2012-02-08 16:17:51 |
Little Sisters; The Best Pretty Please Pussies |
What has been missing in Brother and Sister Porn Stories of late is both good writing and youth. You have covered both again so very very well. This story was great and a fine example of you ability to use words. I love it and it is in my Favs. |
| 2012-01-23 19:50:03 |
What happens under the covers...Stays under the covers...Part 1 (revised) |
Great Story. Well written. Should happen more often in fiction. In real life it does not work as it gives the teen female to much power. |
| 2012-01-23 19:02:23 |
Adam - Seduced by Megan's Little Sister |
Ahh it appears that we have the All American Girl going on here.
Its well written and in my favs. |
| 2011-12-26 19:06:30 |
Bathtime With Niece |
Right Great Story. Happy Uncle.
Lets have a part 2 where mom and dad show back up. |
| 2011-12-26 18:43:04 |
Bra Shopping With Uncle |
This is a great story and it is in my favs on its own merits. Just so well written and so well presented. This is Adult Romance not Porn. A quality of writing that that goes way byound fuck and suck.
Of course the close family relationship does add to it. |
| 2011-12-16 18:48:10 |
Susan's Fantasies -- 3 |
Great Job! Happy Sex and Happy Endings.
A great place to stop, but lots of room for more later.
Remember these guys are on a budget, He is a School Teacher and a Park Ranger. I would for real like to see her get her education. Perhaps take over the the Bake Shop. Make some Adult Baked Goods. Perhaps they could move to the Ranch, He could Teach School she could run the Ranch.
You write Strong Roles for women and your woman are Not Victims which I love. The could win Mega Bucks and buy a 100 ft long mobile home and tour the country. He could geet a teaching job overseas, but not India or Aferica. They could become Mormons.
You could say they get tired of fucking their brains out, but I've been doing that with my much younger wife for 35 years and have never grown tired of it. Their is a natural process of slowing down which is different then getting tired of a person.
I remain a Great Fan and you Remain a Great Writer. Merry Christmas. |
| 2011-12-16 00:47:11 |
Susan's Fantasies |
As you may know I am a huge fan of yours, and yours is one of the name I look for and go right to your story.
No one has to tell you that you are one fine writer.
This story did move fast but it your style, don't change it. As I tell folks ifthe story moves to fast then read slower.
Great development and several workable twists and turns. To include off to Aunts house for the summer. You could write another story about that adventure.
Anyway another greatv story form a Master, keep up the great work.
I like the idea that we are dealing with a female who enjoys sex and is Not Queen Of The Kids.
This every girl has a perdact everything when in reality almost nothing is perfact. Much perferb this way.
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| 2011-12-15 02:44:26 |
Little Katie |
11 yr old boys do have 5.5" dicks, I was one and knew others. Also a Boy can start cumming at 10 or 11.
Some people do not know what cum is at 13 and use the term white stuff. Some women on their wedding night do not realize that the hubbys dick goes in them. The realization of this sometimes leads to a short marriage. Rare and today rareerv still but it does happen.
The super religious are famous for this. As Not knowing is sometimes a goal. Do not lok at it touch it and do not play with it. It is dirty and evil. Pleasure from it assures you of hell, and not learning to enjoy it is like hell on earth. |
| 2011-12-08 22:11:16 |
A Day on the Dunes |
41 year old Pussy in even fair shape is not bad. My oldest step daughter had two boys right around 40, and she always has been hot as hell.
We where close but when she was 10, my fat assed X Wife was fucking a 400 pounder in the down stairs apartment while I was working graveyard shift in a prison 2hrs away. So I had to do somthing short of killing people mostly because fat ass at 400 pounds could not move and always had some one around him.
I had another piece of shit new be guard living in the unit next to me but he was useless because he mostly wanted to sleep and tell his wife stories about how we might get killed when we went to work. Which where mostly bull. However he was working scared so cut him some slack. His wife was young, domestic hot, and I am not sure what idea in his right mind would would leave her alone at night.
The guy who Rented the Apartment Downstairs was showing 8mm Porn Movies with little kids hanging around . For some reason I did not stop him. |
| 2011-12-08 21:53:42 |
A Day on the Dunes |
This one is in the Favs. Great story and very well written. A best from the best.
As you know you are a great writer and what has been posted here lately is very close to dribble. So I read a good but not great story of yours called Jennys Big Boy. I linked off if the to your body of work and found this one I had not read yet.
It is different and from the female point of view which I love.
Now we need a part to for this where the kid, gets some pussy and perhaps they have a baby.
Your getting into upper middle class near do wells much as a friend from Vegas did before he went ape shit over the age limits thing. This is okay as it gets the work thing out of the way, explains the nice toys, and gives lots of time for Sex. After all this is fiction.
Good to see your work as always, I have been on a Porn Break do to so Health Issues so I have not read a lot or posted.
We thought I had congestive heart failure but its failing kidneys instead adjestment in meds buys time |
| 2011-11-16 17:22:15 |
It's Jeffs Turn |
I would suggest that an Incest Reltionship would undergo the same strains as others plus a few more. Yet on the other had not so many because of how well the people know each other. Problem comes when one wants to stop and the other does not.
Slightly older sisters an brothers and my passion Sister, Brother Twins, Mostly because i like to see the female both on board and in control are different yet. My other interest which is Handicapped Sex and those that are not suppoed to get any getting some.
I have found myself at 65 finally coming to an exceptance stage that life is not going to go on as it once did and that is just the way it is.
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| 2011-11-16 17:22:11 |
It's Jeffs Turn |
I would suggest that an Incest Reltionship would undergo the same strains as others plus a few more. Yet on the other had not so many because of how well the people know each other. Problem comes when one wants to stop and the other does not.
Slightly older sisters an brothers and my passion Sister, Brother Twins, Mostly because i like to see the female both on board and in control are different yet. My other interest which is Handicapped Sex and those that are not suppoed to get any getting some.
I have found myself at 65 finally coming to an exceptance stage that life is not going to go on as it once did and that is just the way it is.
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| 2011-11-16 17:22:01 |
It's Jeffs Turn |
I would suggest that an Incest Reltionship would undergo the same strains as others plus a few more. Yet on the other had not so many because of how well the people know each other. Problem comes when one wants to stop and the other does not.
Slightly older sisters an brothers and my passion Sister, Brother Twins, Mostly because i like to see the female both on board and in control are different yet. My other interest which is Handicapped Sex and those that are not suppoed to get any getting some.
I have found myself at 65 finally coming to an exceptance stage that life is not going to go on as it once did and that is just the way it is.
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| 2011-11-16 17:12:28 |
It's Jeffs Turn |
This was a nice story well written with good development and a good story line. Dad is not a mega success but he is not a loser either, he is havinv some tough times. I hope he is able to keep his job and save the company.
The upside that e4veryone in this story acted as if they where human, and had problems like being short of money even enough to go bowling, which is a white trash sport anyway but one I like. Good idea and a little different.
Sex with dad can go so many way, from loving it to Rape. It depends on so many things. To include being honest about wanting it. Different from Sex a few times to having Sex for life, kids ect. One snithing little bastard child or adult can spoil the whole thing.
This looks like it stands a chance and I would like to see it develop.
Every one is legal so this could be posted on Lit its that good.
Some of the kiddie porn writers are back and i love to read them but theres is not a reality. |
| 2011-11-01 03:20:00 |
MEGAN, MY PERT IRISH LASS OF A DAUGHTER |
Great Story, they do not evan come close to you. You work is so way out there you are off the planet.
This may be the Best Father, Daughter Love Romance Story I have ever read. I have to compare it to some of your other work.
Way 10/10 Great Job. Good to read you again hope you are doing well.
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| 2011-10-27 20:25:11 |
Anticipation |
I am putting this in my Favs, Not because its that good. Becaue You are one of the best Porn Writers to ever come along and a fine example of how things go way way better. Good Concepts and the talent showed. |
| 2011-10-17 18:36:44 |
My Sexy Sister |
Good Girl, Good Boy, Good Sex. Good Story. |
| 2011-10-17 18:30:40 |
My Older Friends |
I do not agree with Anon reader.
The Story is not a waste of either time or space. I really felt better after writing it. We had Fun, we had good sex and we had friendship.
When we went to the Zoo I put her in a Wheel Chair, She did not use any aids. I did it so she would not tire out as fast.
WE where subject to the stares and glares of society but we had fun.
We had almost 60 years of age difference and everything worked
When we diden't fuck we cuddled and talked. It was not a waste at all. Nice younger man and nice old women friends and getting some, |
| 2011-10-14 19:50:16 |
Camping With Mom - Part 4 |
I only stopped because I was scared she would die on the hump. She live to 93 and was my friend. Small Women about 115 soaking wet. She was boney and sagged but she had good sex not used that much. In the 30"s she had gotton married and he had a stroke about 6 months into the marriage and he recovered some but would not fuck her often and when he did it was his rocks only.
So she had a career. When he died she thought what little there was was over. I came along doing some maintence work and over a year or so we became friends.
Then she jut one day asked me. and I said I might break you,or hurt you.
she said no I would not. I said let me think about it. Next time i saw her i asked her if she still was interested she said yes. So i stopped what i was doing and very gently took her to her bed. The 1st couple of times she would only lift her dress but after awhile she either did not dress or undressed. We alway did it in the daylight, Love No. Friendship Yes!!!
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| 2011-10-14 19:36:16 |
Camping With Mom - Part 4 |
Yes size and age matters but so doesen't only having one parent around who works long hours and sometimes two jobs, plus weekends and Sundays. I complain about my dads strokes but i assure you i got mine in also.
I was death to get cought so we did not get cought. Older girls kept their mouths shut because of fear of the stigma of fucking someone both younger and not white.
I know of one girl who blamed her step dad foor the baby. Another one her brother for the Baby. Both where being fucked by the people they blamed.
The shock and response of No he could not be in regard to me helped. i have never felt bad about anyone I have pushed my dick into as they have cum and in most cases first. I only knowof one who closed up after cuming 1st and thats when we where way adults.
Younger Boy, older girl is good and usually safe sex. Sisters and Brothers who get along are best. Its that extra bonding.
i did an 82 year old in the late 70"s, I went easy and we both enjoyed it. |
| 2011-10-14 19:23:18 |
Camping With Mom - Part 4 |
My Mom fled from my father when I was 9, because he was beating her almost daily and me also,
I had been Sexulized early and the Birds and Bees Story was repeatedly told to me and sometimes beaten into me.
I knew i was trying to find a way to a least dry fuck my mom and suck her tits when the beating came that almost killed her.
i had seen mom naked many times, she was not that hot but she was soft and far from a pig.
Them I was there one afternoon and she was not, and when my father got home i was blamed for her departure and beaten, punched kicked and hit with an extension cord the yard kind.
Everyone of his Lonely Hearts Club adventures that he tried failed and I was blamed and beaten each time. As it was all my fault.
I was a year behind, (in those days if you did not get the basics you did not pass). also large for my age. Dad was afried of my going to public school because of the younger white girls.
However I was only into girls that where older. Me 11-12 |
| 2011-10-12 19:40:43 |
Twin Lover |
This is my favorite subject in Romance writing, Teen Twin Incest, I am going to put it in my faves mostly for that reason and a link into your work. Well written but asks more questions then it answers.
Of course they could do it during vacations, or she could wind up having to leave the area also and winding up at uncles house. This punke might have family or friends. According to the stoey he did not get charged either.
He cannot use self defence because his sister was not in any danger at the time he arrived. His actions where pure anger and revenge.
We have laws to cover situations such as sis was in. I am on the brothers side. However I would have done damage to the punks ability to have sex or to piss standing up.
Now I am for deep sudden justice for Abortionist and their Aides. From the Nurse to the DAG at the door. DAG does not get a by because he or she is a DAG.
In 27 developed Countrys this would not evan be an issue as Incest is Legal. At some leval.. |
| 2011-09-29 19:37:48 |
The Lake - Chap 6 |
The Vacume Guy is going to be happ with this one. |
| 2011-09-29 19:19:35 |
Becoming A Daddy's Girl Chapter 1 |
Nice First Story, I like the Mix. Space between Paragraphs, XNXX gives us all the room we need.
Content is good works well. I will just assume that the Mom is a successful Black Womeen. Education, Job and all that.
Most are these days. Hunger and wanting it does that to some people of all Races.
We have a Japanese Women who in in the U.S. House, came to America at 7 right after WWII wiith her mom. I hate her and her views and have worked against her in every election and will continue on doing so. She is a Pro Choice Pig. What I do admire about her is guts and sucess. She lost the Gov Election years ago but learned from her mistakes.
Hawaiians Block Vote Dem, and the party think you can put up anyone. But if a strong moderate runs and the Dem is Vile like she is the Repub can Win and thats what happened. This women is Vile.
Grown Hawaiian Men cryed when the came out of the Booth having crossed lines for the first time, To strong Women went at it the Repub Won. |
| 2011-09-29 18:54:17 |
Flights (Shen the Skald Book 1) ~ chapter 1 |
There is a question as to weather or not i should be reading this at this point in my career and the answer is No.
Great Story but I am not there quite yet. |
| 2011-09-29 18:19:21 |
Mom's Kids 2 |
I was waiting and looking for this one. It was well worth the wait.
This might just be the Best Story I have ever read. No one has evan had Sex yet. This is just Hot pure and simple hotter then Death Valley in July. You Aperv2 are a Great Writer. Your Pictures are clear and so livid. When the writing draws a picture and you can see the people clearly then you have done great writing.
Welcome to the Master Writers of Romance and Sex Stories, this is No Porn (not that i hav anything against Porn writing) this is about real romance lust and sex. Parts 1 and 2 should be used togeather in Writing Contests.
I could go into what Religion and Society do to destroy Good Sex but I won't. I also loved the Church Scene, that is what goes on in Church Boys and Girls Minds more often then Not. Clicks and youth directors hitting on the Hotties. In my Faith Group those people are always Femal
This is in my Favs.
This can have a Part 3 or not, Stands Alone. Remember Happy Sex and Happ |
| 2011-09-24 07:22:09 |
Sharing My Room With Sis 10: Abby's Fear |
Among the very very best. |
| 2011-09-23 23:28:28 |
Feeling My Daughter: Part One |
This is very very good lets see part to.
I think that might be one of the reasons I like Incest, I had No Sisters or Brothers and my mom feld home when I was 9.
My father kept moving with his lonely Hearts BS and staying in one place long enough to make a connection was hard.
This is a happy story and I would like to see it go on as such. |
| 2011-09-23 20:37:56 |
My Life As A Hermie Part 3 Growing Up |
I am now going to read blueheatts story that gave you this idea. |
| 2011-09-23 20:36:55 |
My Life As A Hermie Part 3 Growing Up |
I can only agree with the Great master Writer blueheatt.
This story and series is so well written and so well done. I needs to continue. Perhaps meeting another Hermie.
Would making love with yourself and making a baby be considered Incest?
Could you Merry yourself for the social bennies.
I like this where she has had a lot of sexbut not with a lot of people, her sex life is well thought out.
Her relationship with the 2nd boyfriend could continue when he is home from school, or the first guy could come back into her life.
Also Tom and jen and her could just hook up. She could get Jen PG.
Tom could get her PG.
If she has a baby (fuck the clerk, hope it a middle aged Religious Bitty). Could they have the same condition and be twins and have sex with mom later.
So she fucks herself and has Hermie Twins and they or Tom knock each other up. One of the Twins knock mom up and Mom knocks both the twins up. Knocks Jen up and Tom plays stud daddy.
All of cour |
| 2011-09-22 20:25:17 |
Mom's Kids I |
Fuck The Grammer, that is some hot Sister Brother Shit, loved it. NO One talks with good grammer, kids certainly do not.
Aprv2. Writes like people talk which makes for real writing. That was some great stuff.
In my Favs and more then waiting for Part 2.
She has not been vaggie fucked yet so its Not incest Yet its not incest yet, just two good blow jobs.
I the Blow jobs are that good the Vaggie fucking should be out standing. Also they could find out that there mom and dad are Sister and Brother.
Great Writing. Just way fucking byound good and she is only 14. This chick can fuck and be fucked for years before she evan gets out of High School..
The chick being Hot and Game On is such a turn on. Game on is part of being hot anyway. |
| 2011-09-21 19:00:28 |
Jeanie's Big Boy |
For some reason people get all twisted up about Incent, Be it Sister, Brother, Daddy Daughter, or Mom and Son.
It goes on so much it is just that the people that do it and enjoy it do not talk about it because of the law.
Incest has been going own from the Dawn of Man. The old Testament is ripe with it. The Blood Line would not lead to jesus had it now been for not 1 but two different acts of incest, to include a sudection by a women of and older man. Ruth and Boaz I believe had some great sex. That street was not as one way as you might think it was.
Be that as it may if you are not going to Church on Sunday Morning whay not having Incest with you hung son.
Here we have a close age mother and son, Mother is still in prime time, now she has a doublle load of fresh young in her pussy, all we need is an egg and we can have a baby or twins. I am not so much into Daughter having Dads baby but Cute Mom having Sons Baby is way Hot. A least Son will not leave her at the door step |
| 2011-09-21 18:35:18 |
Jeanie's Big Boy |
I loved this story as told from the Moms point of view. It is different outstanding and in my Favs. Some things make my Favs because they are good and i want a direct link to the writers body of work, To do this you only need to Fav 1 Story.
In the last few months some good authors have joined the site. I still miss the Masters who left over the Censorship thing which the site was right, that was an awful hack job and most likely cost them a lot of money.
A couple are back doing young porn but not bringing a numbered age into it leaving that to the reader. Good Compromise. I want my work read so I will follow the rules.
I am story bording a new girl that came to me a couple of days ago. She is about 14 and an Albino. |
| 2011-09-16 23:16:52 |
MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM-BUCKET! - CHAPTER 8 |
Great Story if you servive the Hospital be sure to continue 10/10 on the whole series. You are in my Favs. |
| 2011-09-09 16:51:14 |
Hung Like a Horse |
I really did like this story, it is interesting and has some nice twists and turns. Lots of common sense among the Teenagers.
I think you could develop things nicely with visits to one anothers homes, at Christmas and Thanlsgiving.
It does need a sequal and a happy life. Its in my Favs because its Cute and Different and the Sex and players are happy, with no Adults getting in the way. |
| 2011-09-04 03:41:27 |
"Bless me, Father" |
Real good story it is in my Favs. |
| 2011-09-01 17:55:00 |
My cousin and I |
The story is good i put it in my favs not so much for the story but because i do want to keep track of you as a writer as you have great potential. You appear to have all the basic tools and are a good story teller. Beleiveable Fiction is much better the Fiction that is just to far out there to work, although some of that is very good also.
A lot of Sci Fi Fiction has become reality Dick Tracys Watch for example. What None of us saw coming was the internet. Thanks George, Bill and Steve. |
| 2011-09-01 17:50:01 |
My cousin and I |
I liked you story, your work is very good. So she mover with you to the East Coast lets hear about that next.
You worry to much about what other people might think, just write. Let the chips fall where they may |
| 2011-08-31 01:08:46 |
Mikey and Nancy Mickels III |
I realize that this story does not have a lot of S&F. It does not because I did not want to mix it with the other stuff. I needed to Not Kill him because killing him would cause parts 1, 4,and 5 not work. So he had to recover. Almost dying on the Hump was a good idea.
I will most likely end this series in Part 6 or 7 or Fast Forward however i am working close to real time so I can't do a lot of that. So about Part 7 we will pause for the cause. As their are other things i want to do. As you may know people who have different disabilityies and Travel to different places are my thing. I want to get these kids to Fiji., and I almost got it worked out. |
| 2011-08-31 00:55:41 |
My 1st Wife and Traitor Jane Fonda |
That said the person that should have been my father spilled his gutts on D Day.
The 40 almost 40 year old person who became my father was Black and American Indian and had a College Degree, on of his many issues was under achivement. He met my mom who was working as a waitress on the Cape and had a real low self image because of the Stigma of Rickets. Stigma over anything was a big thing in the New England, Brought on and expanded by Trailor Trash.
My object is that when he started to hang out with my Mom, No one hung him. He married my mom and they far from lived happyily ever after.
I should have been born white so I could have been a Nudeist. Also gotton laid sooner and easier. However I was not and I have had to deal with it my whole life, one reason I live in Hawaii.
i see this story is going heavy Negative however it was done for me and a little bit for my 1st Wife and to deal with the Reality of Commie Traitor Jane. If you did not like it then read somthing else |
| 2011-08-31 00:41:27 |
My 1st Wife and Traitor Jane Fonda |
Sorry Minor Mistake on my part. Would not lie on purpose.
What you do is go to Google an Key Word in Traitor Ja at that point the Drop Down list shows Traitor Jane Fonda cleck on that line and it goes to a Major Web Site and Deals with the Traitor and Her Issues.
If you just do Traitor J she is the 3rd one down. Over 273 thousand results. So she is concidered a Major Traitor which she is.
I know this works as I just did it. You do need Traitor and a least the J to get the result. Traitor Ja gives you the whole name in the drop down. First Web Site under Web gives you the whole story.
if this Traitor had Not Done a Page in Time Mag i would have never wtitten the story at least Not In The Way i Did. However I stand by it as it is what happened and I saw it, her and Joe MacDonald.
Also the Part about my 1st Wife. I was not going to do the Interracial thing because because it was not Black and White.
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| 2011-08-23 21:26:38 |
Loss and Gain: Chapter Five |
I am story boarding somthing like this but very different but with Hermies. Wrting a god long story or series is like giving birth to a child. |
| 2011-08-23 21:23:44 |
Loss and Gain: Chapter Five |
This is Fiction and you can go anywhere you want, but lets not go to Jail.
Lets get His writing back on track and he writes a Best Seller and makes the book and TV Tour.
Lauren goes to School near by. His Sister taakes care of all the Babys that appear to include her own. lets have Boys and Girls so we can mix it up in 14 years time. Lets have large dicks and Horney Bossy Women also.
Their is No Term in American English for Rounders. Which was why I was able to find you.
Money from his Books allows him to put Everyone through School.
I really like older woen who have late life kids so I really want to see his Sister get PG.
You are a Great writer, also No one dies for a long long time.
Jillian and the Redhed can be taken up as seperate stories, with cross over flash backs. Their kids and his kids could fall in love and every one winds up related somehow.
Writers sometimes do not sleep and neither do readers. |
| 2011-08-23 21:07:58 |
Loss and Gain: Chapter Five |
Captius: Great writing the whole series is in my favs.
Lets see following the idea of Happy Sex, we have a man who for the last two weeks has had Sex with his Niece, His Daughter Unprotected. Sex with 3 of her friends unprotected, and his sister (unprotected).
I would not add another Female unless it was a midwife. Some one needs to get PG, and because of my Happy Endings View of things, I would I would leave out the two friends, and they just go home at some point.
His Sister moves in and takes Major control of the house. Lauren Stays and they remain lovers. (thats to good to mess up) He also getsenough of his Daughter to keep them both happy and the Mother,Niece and Daughter play with each other. I would get the Mother and Daughter PG.
Part of me wants him to make a Baby with the Redhead but that would be hard to handle and spoil the story. However side story brothers ould be made happy.
Jillian is Mixed Blood and I would like to see a nice white boy with a big oneget |
| 2011-08-21 02:06:19 |
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Looking for Part 2, Part one is in my favs. You are a good writer one to watch. |
| 2011-08-21 02:03:26 |
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I think this is a really good story, well written and well edited, and well spaced, easy to understand and follow. I think it is a really really good first effoort here. I really don't think its a 1st effort. 9/10 for effort and being somewhat different, the boy is both thoughtful and cunning with out being mean. I am not sure the dicl size is vital but it does not hurt.
I would have had the kids a year or so younger. I don't like to start off almost grown. Also I would never make the females not able to have babies on the pill yes, Syerile No. Reason is it dead ends your future chapters. Its like a Donkey and a Horse, the Mule has no place to go.
Let the xhusband take the hit for not being able to make the babys. Measels went to his nuts, the War whatever, make him a Hero if you want.Try Not to dead and your people.
I disagree with the person who says its the same, its not. Yes many of the plotline facts are the same but what was done with them was different. |
| 2011-08-15 20:37:54 |
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Sometimes you see Daddy come in with Daddys Girl. Some Girls make no Bones about it. Boning Pop on Vacation, now go prove it.
Pops are usually fit at least to a point and a little red faced. Daughter who act that way around their Dads are usually in Love and just starting to come into their own nd have Sex, with the best hunk they can find, daddy.
Sex time with Brother has really grown over the years and with the help of the net and sites like this. The Stigma and Guilt are less.
I never had the joy of a mother to love or a sister to play with, have a relationship with or to have Sex with. So i enjoy reading about it and writing some.
I have never thought it was worng, wrong as long as the Sister Brother age spread was close and as the writer said No One is Abused. Halfs even less so, and Step and Adopts Not At All, go for it.
Go for it any way life is to short for shoulda, coulda, woulda, if i had only known. I believe in the natural barrier but it can be overcome, it bo |
| 2011-08-15 20:21:13 |
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Southern Canada. Maybe South Western Canada like Vancover B.C.
Late 1st Snow was the clue. Writing not English, to American, not American to English. Not Aussie because of Snow and Christmas. That leaves Canada and sometimes it Snows late in Western Canada and sometimes Vancover does not have much because of the Pacific Ocean Winds. Inland yes but the Coast No. I have been there several times and always enjoyed my self.
You can tell the Tourist to Hawaii from Canada as opposed to Tourist from Mainland America. The people from Canada are more friendly and open and come into our local Supermarket as family with their fresh Hawaiian Sun Burns. It get rarely over 90 here evan and August, because of the winds. But the hawaiian is murder on white skin. Some people like to come West Side because its cheaper to stay and you can rent a condo or suite.
Often i see Dad, Mom, and spruting Sister old enough to pop, and Dork Brother a couple of years older or younger, Should be getting sist |
| 2011-08-15 20:06:43 |
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Its good to see a writer come on board that totally has it togeather. You have all the talent, all tools and all the toys.
That was a great story. Well Written and well spaced.
Most of all it worked so well. Natural progression is the best way to do these types of stories. Agreat night of first sex, and caring and tenderness and love. This is Romance and far far from Porn.
He is 17 and she is only 15, so not much time was wasted and it gave them time to mature and grow as individuals.
I will not nit pick a perfect story. Other then the Em was pretty the author left out such things as Breast Size and Penis size and wisely as that does not matter. What mattes here is the love and desire to be togeather and the total lack of B.S.
These guys got right down to it, kept at it, and 10 years are keeping at it. Lots of Adult Brothers and Sisters live in the same House or Apartment, She has her room and he has his. She is now 25 and he is 27 still prime time for 10 more years. |
| 2011-08-13 23:44:12 |
it happened on vacation (and continued at home) pt 14. The Final Part |
This was a great series and you are a fine writer and i have this in my faves . |
| 2011-08-08 19:03:03 |
(Day Two) Loving Lisa?s Pretty Pink Pussy Petals |
Jackass; You are vone of the best Adult Romance Writers out there. So just ignore the Negative Commits, you stories are outstanding.
It s hard to keep things fresh with just two people, but this is incest so the fewer that know about it the better. These are adults,
Sence you planted the seed then lets have the baby. Twins perhaps one boy and one girl. Happy Sex and happy endings. Great Story keep it up. I have read some of your early work and it is just as outstanding.
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| 2011-08-05 16:06:45 |
it happened on vacation (and continued at home) pt 9 |
You are a fine writer and i love you work.
I understand not wanting the stuff on your computer at work. The Computer at home you can always do a drill down and hide the file.Get Windows 7 for Dummys. and get office 2010. 3.3 is okay but Free is just that you get what you pay for.
As for the GF you should perhaps consider a New one. One that either writes herself, or does not mind you doing it. Will evan watch a Video with you now aand then. Then do some of the stuff in the video. Never force it and try not to always want more and more from a person who is trying to get along.
A pissing contest on allowing access to Porn is never good for a relationship.
She should have No Objections on moral grounds as she is living with someone out of wedlock. Which is far worse then Romance Writing to some people.
What do you Harlquin is if not thinly hidden Porn.
Sci Fi was dead till Female Writers Started writing Porn Romance. Check out the Pern Series Books.
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| 2011-08-02 23:36:08 |
My Cousin, My Love |
I do not find it wierd that they are cousins, This is Incest, In Incest you have to be related. That is how the living arrangements where able to happen. Both at 11 and at 16 and 18. They would Not have found each other had they not been Related.
Incest allows settings and relationships that other wise would not happen. That is what is different about incest and what drives critics crazy. Its called availability.
Now in Happy Sex with Happy Endings everyone is or gets onboard. In real life the female is almost always the victim.
Did you see in this story how she took him, even though she was a virgin. 105 pounds of totally hot, A Cup Pussy wraped around his dick.
This author draws mental pictures like he has a zoom lens.
I see him, I see her, I see her riding him, and him deep in her belly, I see him explode and I see sperm meet egg. |
| 2011-08-02 23:23:11 |
My Cousin, My Love |
Because you may only write this 1 story, I have put it in my Favs. This is a Great Story either #1 or #600, still a great story. 10/10 but a couple of those points are for youth and effort.
I loved this story so I don't want to pick it apart, just enjoy the offering. |
| 2011-08-02 20:10:10 |
Mother's Milk |
Yes its been done but so what. Its a really good story. I have never read ti so its new to me. |
| 2011-07-31 03:54:21 |
I could never have imagined-Final Chapter |
I do more Adult Romance then Kiddy Porn and my people bever screw befor age 14. I have nothing against you doing it, because you have class and style. Great Story Great to see your work again and its in my favs.
Quigely, you and Bailey plus WP and KH got me into reading again. I am working on a few different thing now. My first story in decades did really suck and display my mental disorder, however I am leaving it up as a C&C for later, and an example of what not to do. Besides even if it sucks I like it,
To me social issues are much more vital then the basic Suck and Fuck. Capt KH people where almost always with money. Wither Inhearted it or Invested for it, or just Won it. That was the Vegas Way he had. Plus the Boys all had Sowalen Balls and had to fuck 6 times a day to keep them relieved. I loved him so much and was so sad when he picked up his ball and went elsewhere.
You are a Great Writer, Please keep it up. |
| 2011-07-31 03:40:29 |
I could never have imagined-Final Chapter |
Quigley; You are among the Masters and this is a great final part to a great series. Things are not always a Bed Of Roses.
Now me I would have gotton a Q Cumber, and some lube and prove that somthing different did not happen. If you are not cought in the act then you are not cought.
It does not matter if she got some or or not, it has nothing to do with his Injury. Which is not all that uncommon in Anal Sex. Vaginal Sex also which is why Big Dicks like the kind in the ads have a down side.
Size is as size does and believe it or not one size does not fit all in anla either Hetro or Homo that is the case.
How do you explain to your parents that on your wedding night you wound up in the ER with a busted butt. Blood during consumation is a good thing a Hemorage is not. Finding out your Wife is a hemophiliac not so much a good thing.
Thaat leads to problems and a no Fuck Doc Bill real quick. Plus paying dearly for pussy you do get.
Why can't they get togeather as adults. |
| 2011-07-30 07:46:28 |
Cousins Young Love |
Part 1 of 19 so far all good. Lucy both starts off and stays in charge. They have already been sleeping togeather for quite awhile. |
| 2011-07-30 07:32:17 |
COUSINS YOUNG LOVE Part 19 |
You are such a fine writer and this has been such a good series. Your people are well developed and they hold true to charter through out the series. Lets keep it going. Happy Sex, Happy endings.
Time for the babys to start coming, let the swimmers find their target.
I really think he is going to need some help but I would not want to see another Male in this unless it was a young cousin.
Lucy is and always has been a major control freak but has given up a lot of pussy and petting and is still young. Maybe one of Sarahs Brothers would fit in. My joy of older sister younger brother sex not with standing.
AS restrictive as it was he still had a fantasic childhood.
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| 2011-07-24 02:05:16 |
My Son and I |
This story is just so very very good. Its in my favs. |
| 2011-07-17 03:50:27 |
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Don't take them down just clean them up and repost. Its called a comparason in contrast. Then v Now and you becoming better.
Most people are one day gunna write a book (like gunna read insted of just wave the Bible) but they find out that writing is hard. Evan with all the new toys. Its better with the net and spelll check and to an extent Gram Check although I believe Gram check messes with style.
Sometimes when Gram check says its a Fragment and you try to fix it and becomes a either a bigger fragment or loses passion or meaning. You just have to let it go. Correct English can also look very silly, and is not the way most people talk. |
| 2011-07-17 03:38:40 |
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Also Shooting someone with a Stun Gun is a crime that you can get alot of time for.
Lets work it so that the Hawaiian gets some pussy. Perhaps the friend that drives the sister to school.
The law student who had to go to school part time and was told by some that he would never be anything but an ambulance chaser was driving up to his class reunion.
The smaart frat boy lawyer said to him. What did you do Rent the lexus or do you work at the car lot.
I other Lawyers answers. I do know the owner, and he gave me a discount because I got him out of some tax trouble and married his daughter. Also I cought a few those Ambulances. |
| 2011-07-13 19:22:50 |
The Hidden Pool |
In folklore people like this exist in many places. Keep it going, different type of story. |
| 2011-07-13 19:14:46 |
accidental_cousin_part2 |
Lets let the Retired G.I Father,Cousin, Uncle, get togeather with his Counsin, Neice/Daughter, and have a Baby. 14-0 age spread in Hawaii until 2002 and evan after that let me almost assure you no one will say anything. I do not think Cousins are close incest anyhow.
In Arizona 1st Cousins a legal marriage.
Somthing nice could happen to her husband, New Girlfriend etc. As a result Cara and the kids come to Hawaii. Good hookup and happy sex with happy endings. Cara's late life child born at Tripler AMC along with Her Daughters Baby, Born perhaps at or very near the same time at perhaps Queens. The Cousins get Married, perhaps waimea falls.
I am a little sad that they did not get togeather at the end except fo making the Baby, however perhaps this is not the end.
The 25th Inf Div is Stationed In Hawaii. During a Re-Up he could move from Inf to Supply and get far less field time. |
| 2011-07-13 18:53:22 |
accidental_cousin_part2 |
I came across both Accidental Cousins and Part 2. Off of a link from a story you wrote about sailing. Checking your work that got my interest up. So I read Accidental Counsins and really loved it, being able to relate to the Army Stuff and every thing. A great story that I like a lot.
Now Cousins 2. Is much better and a very smooth transation and building of a relationship. I was hoping that the Wedding Night Before Baby would be his. However your soluation was evan better.
Great story great ending, and very very well thought out and written.
Both Stories are in my Favs. Usually I only Fav 1 of a series as you can link off the 1 to the others. However in your case i wanted Both.
I thought that i was reading perhaps one of the Best, Incest Romance Stories that i have seen written. About midway into the 2nd one I realized that for style and content and the love and humanity in the story it was the Best.
In time lets let the Father/Uncle get togeather and have a baby. Ret |
| 2011-07-08 04:00:47 |
Life Goes On |
DownOnMe: I love this story, Just enough Sex to keep the interest with out being total Suck and Fuck. They have been togeather less then a day. He is an older man and older men do not fuck all night.
She likes older guys, perhaps because of her good experiences with her Grandfather.
this story is well written and someone took it through Spell Checkand did a good job. This story needs nothing else except to continue. Both of them have needs and they are good for each other. You set a good pace. This story is in my favs. Young and Older fucking as it should be done. Age takes a toll but should not take the total of someone.
Somthing needs to be in the Winnie besides your grumpy blue haired no fuck wife. Our culture makes men into sex far longer then Women (yes I know there are exceotions) and if the Man still has good health and the Women sometimes younger does not that adds to it.
If i spot you 15-20 years when I am 90 and your 70 we are both elderly. |
| 2011-07-01 17:41:41 |
First Time With Mom |
Good and I enyoyed it, natural relationship progression, in cases such as yours. The biggest crime iand shame is wasting it wishing that you could do it. She was Ripe you where ready things happen.
If Incest is good enough for the Royal Familys of Europe it should be good enough for the rest of us.
I used to do some venture Captial stuff and Dog Breeders are fun andthev return is good. Eating Places are not I lost my ass on Lamb
Burgers and Fried Rabbit, I happen to like Lamb Burgers and Fries and although i lost my ass, I never felt bad about the venture. Thank Goodness for Wally World.
I would like to see some more of your work. |
| 2011-07-01 17:23:46 |
Mikey and Nancy Mickels Part 1 |
You will also under that Key word heading see some of deformed Sex Organs.
As in most cases of sucessfulbdifferent relationships the people involved are mostly quite about it.
No one except a Junkie like Ms Philips goes around saying I fucked my father John, oh pure victim me.
I want to thank Bill Gates and George Allen because with out the Information Superhighway. The research for this would be impossible, let alone the publishing. I am glad neither of you where aborted.
My Passion is the Right of the Unborn to be born and live. I am not A Right To Life Person. I piss most of them off. I am pro birthcontrol, Hate Dead Fetus Picture Wavers, disrepect to the dead. And I detest Sin Debters As depressed fatasses who live under their moms bed but never get any. Who in the old days watched for their Mags in Brown papers wrappers and today look at tight clothing sites but not nude teens.
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| 2011-07-01 17:06:23 |
Mikey and Nancy Mickels Part 1 |
Thank for the better rating, I worked hard on it Not the Story so much that either flows or does not. I hate to edit, but I see it as a must. This Story would not have worked with out massive editing.
The Story takes place in the Now, Past and Near Past and flows freely between times. A little hard to follow sometimes. Mikey who does most of the talking is very involved in the action.
Remember the kid in the Cereal Commerical Him but a little older.
Hermaphrodite-Sex.com is the best site to see pictures and get information. This is very real and these are very real Human beings.
They are said to not be able to reproduce but that is not so, a lady in England gave birth to a baqby girl a couple of years ago, made international news breifly. She was told she could not have a baby but her and her husband did. I believe the baby was born C Section.
In most cases the Pussy is behind the dick.
Key word Nude Twin Hermaphrodites, 3 rows is a picture of my role models for this |
| 2011-06-29 20:43:41 |
Meeting Michelle |
Why would she go back to the Boyfriend, even with the pending deployment.
Great Story Loved it from strt to finish, great job. Lots of room for PT2, ex boyfriend encounter and perhaps a marriage and baby before he deploys.
This girl had been put down and Phyco beaten for awhile, losers do that to women and women take it hoping to chande the loser rarely works.
Sadness is once abused the women who are not strong tend to go back to it. Or find it again in another person.
Some women become secure in themselfs and find Strong Men who can handle them. The men are not alway stronger just know how to handle her and secure enough in themselfs to let her be herself.
Marriage or Life Parnership is not about the inflection of wills upon each other. Its about cooperation, loving, trust, and caring. |
| 2011-06-29 18:23:50 |
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a Virgin. Happy Sex and Happy Endings.
They should at least talk to, the Grandparents.
CPS people never look good to the people they deal with, either side of the coin. They also have their own issues and can be very judgemental. To their Credit they do some Nasty Stuff, and pick up some really wet puka . They do what they need to do to protect kids.
Lots of bad things could have happened to a pretty 17 year old with Dead parents, My Step Son Tryed to Pimp his Sister and he was 18 months younger then her. Where to go when Parents Die is Not always an option, Or evan if one prent dies and the other one is a complete dirt bag. Often its the Street. The closer to 18 you are the less CPS will look for you. The bigger the population the less they look. In some Foster Homes Runaways are Not Reported so that the money keeps coming in. Some even Rent The Room out. You can do the 1st but don't get cought doing the 2nd. Jail you will see, you will, you will. Again Great Story 10/10. |
| 2011-06-29 18:08:25 |
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Wow!!!! What a great story, don't want to lose this one in my favs already. Just a great story 10/10.
I would not have had him lose his job as he would have had Life and health Insurence, and would not have had to worry about Collage or taking care of his sister. Perhaps when the dust settles we will find out that there is some insurence eith from him or their mother. This would be nice you should not be screwed out of your education just because you are trying to do the right thing.
Perhaps they should go to the Mothers Relatives and perhaps things are not as bad with them as it may seem the Olive Branch may have been put out and rejected by the parents. They have had to deal with a lot with their daughter. Things are not always as they seem.
I love the Real Time Stuff it makes the story so much better. I am a Roller Coaster myself so I love plot changes and suprizes,
We do need to get a cum load inside the Pussy Not On It. Cum ggoes In, Not On. To me she is still a |
| 2011-06-27 18:58:13 |
Penny, May I Rescue you from Hell? |
As a Vietnam Vet that story is outstanding. You did a great job. I would have skiped it but your name was on the by line and I always read your work. Loved the Story it in my Favs. |
| 2011-06-26 17:02:48 |
Father's Day Roast |
This Story as sick as it is, is still extremely creative. Interesting and well written. She may have been sick enough to write it but we where sick enough to read it. If there is and foul its on us, not her. |
| 2011-06-26 03:05:38 |
COUSINS YOUNG LOVE Part 16 |
Lucy has been a no Fuck for many many years and he puts up with it. Nothing changes with her. She has him trained and has had him trained since Sandbox.
Still a good series. |
| 2011-06-26 02:55:16 |
JAKOB and JESSIE: THE IMPROBABLE COUPLE |
Thiis is a great story that I really enjoyed. Thingslike this do happen in real life but not often. However this is fiction and it's fiction that could have happened.
Regardless it is a great story and is in my favs. Not much from you lately but you write a great story. |
| 2011-06-25 21:08:04 |
Nadia the Nymphomaniac - The Beginning |
That wa a good Story. I ran inot it while checking on someone who gave me a nagative rating in my story. Just great work really enjoyed it. |
| 2011-06-25 21:03:48 |
My Sweet First Wife |
I liked My Story, I will admit it is hard to follow. Thats legal, and Non Fatting by the way. Moral is a question of Opnion.
Have you Read The World According To Garp thats kind of like me.
Also an Enviromental Book, Called "Sick Puppy" Very much like me in Style.
Like i said 1st Story in a long time should get better. Wait till some of the people in my storys start speaking Pidge.
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| 2011-06-25 20:54:22 |
My Sweet First Wife |
Ghostrider939: Thank you for your input and I will let you know now that, I really like your Work. Thank you again for the input. The 6.1 Rating might say it all if I really cared, which I don't,
I have not in a long time been read by 1700 plus people.
I have just reread this work (it is in my favs).
I did not use Spell Check on the Intro and it shows, I can fix that.
The body has been Spell Checked more then once and that part is not so bad.
What I am and this is how my mind works, is all over the place, and into Subplots and Sub Stories. I AM HARD TO FOLLOW. I can only fix some of that.
To me life is kind of a stage and we are players on that Stage.
I will try not to ramble so much in the future. It like Robin Williams, or Drew Carry when they go into Improv. Your going one direction and a word or idea crosses you mind and you going some place else.
Its like farting and then thinking you need to put Gas in the Car.
I use Caps because I like to. Tham |
| 2011-06-24 19:32:01 |
My first time with robby |
I think she is a little young. I would perfer 14, that said i really did like this story it was fun to read. She seems to be a bright girl and if she does not know what she is doing she knowswhere to look it up.
I like 14 because of some of the legal issues as in being old enough to say yes. 18 is a little young to raise a teenager, 22 would have been better, she can be the Girl Friend or what ever else she needs to be. In a few years reinvent as Robby's Wife and Mother of his kids.
I hope Robby both has a job and stops drinking. Or at least getting drunk. Plus she has to go to school. Maybe Not that day in the story but most everyday. it is the emotional aspects of the age rather then anything else. The Women may be fucking her brains out but the child is still there. Good Story Good Job, XNXX is not short of space so please space, makes it easyier to read and understand. Good Job lets see part 2.
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| 2011-06-22 23:30:08 |
Uncle Bob's Gas Station |
I can even picture now the Gas Stations and Mini Marts that an SBA loan could obtain, Ones in Laie, right near BYUH and the other one is in Waianae. Everyone is mixed with everything out here and if you do not cause problems, no one says shit. They will just figure that Mindy got knocked up by some G.I. and when he found out about it he dumped her. CHild Suppport is so unenforceable that she can get WIC and Section 8. if she meets an Hawaiian and merrys him, you can buy or inherit (him) into Hawaiian Home Stead and live at a reasonable price. People here live 2 or 3 familys to a house here all the time. Only way to survive. Most areas are very mixed so No One Sticks Out. A least 3 Genders of People. Look up Mahu and see what i mean.
How about a story about Uncle Bobs Hamburger Stand. Best Loco Mocos In Town. (look up Loco Moco hit images).
Great work. Your people develop and you move seamlessly.
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| 2011-06-22 23:17:28 |
Uncle Bob's Gas Station |
Lub: You are a Master, your ability to present a story is just so way byound great. I took the link off of Uncle bobs Car Wash, which lead to the list of your work which includes this story. Uncle Bobs Gas Station.
This has to be among the top Incest Stories (Double Incest) that I have ever read subperb work. Outstanding story line, of course well written and well spaced, and edited. A 10/10 top of the line work. I know you posted it almost a year ago but I just found it and it is great writing. Loved the Plot the Story line and surely a part two.
Double set of twins some boys some girls. Set it up for the next generation. Only draw back is the small town. They could Sell and open a Gas Station in Hawaii along the North Shore, or the Waianae Coast. They could live in peace there nd no one would say shit. Their Married and shes legal. Lots of 15 year olds have babys in Hawaii. Home School Her no problems. Both are like small town but not so much. |
| 2011-06-22 17:49:49 |
Lost Sailor - Chapter 2 |
Lets get her PG, with all that Love Juice. Twins one boy one girl. You have great locaton and grat places this tail can go. |
| 2011-06-22 17:48:12 |
Lost Sailor - Chapter 2 |
This is a great story from a great location, as i said i researched it WOW. Don't understand the heated swimming pool at the resort in Malaspina but the rest is wild.
We had a Good Ferry going in Hawaii for a short while, until the Enviromental Morons and Airline money stopped it. Plus a weak Gov that did not want anyone to get hurt in the protests. DEstroyed Hundards of Family Wage Jobs, Commerence, and support jobs. I was planning on seeing the other Islands after 8 years but not to be. I did go to the open house.. Nice Boat so much care taken to be safe in the inviroment high tech all the way.
Part of what piss them off was that their was going to be a 2nd Boat that was in Part going to be used to carry our Striker Brigade from Ohau to their training site.
Also the ability to move Repair Equipment and Builsing Equipment back and forth.
I have not flown (my wife and kids have) sence before 9/11. I do not like dumb ass guards.
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| 2011-06-18 07:38:25 |
Uncle Bob's Carwash |
Lub: This is perhaps your bedt work yet. Its been well worth the wait, of course we need a part 2, 3, and so on.
We can only guess who made the baby. Love the different setting and the Car Wash idea is wounderful.
Remember Happy Sex, and Happy Endings.
I agree I would rather have my Son Fuck His Sister who he loves and cares about the some stranger who just wants to get some.
I would like to know weather Uncle Bob is the Fathers Brother or the mothers Brother, and if the mothers Brother what went on between them. Perhaps Boo or Bumps is his Son or Daughter.
The idea of Daddy being 1st up is very common in some cultures. Sweden, Denmark, Holland, Ice land and the neitherlands in Gerneral among them. That Hot blonde Pussy is never wasted.
People merry their 1st and 2nd Cousins all the time. You just do it No one says shit, you do not evan have to move.
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| 2011-06-18 07:38:24 |
Uncle Bob's Carwash |
Lub: This is perhaps your bedt work yet. Its been well worth the wait, of course we need a part 2, 3, and so on.
We can only guess who made the baby. Love the different setting and the Car Wash idea is wounderful.
Remember Happy Sex, and Happy Endings.
I agree I would rather have my Son Fuck His Sister who he loves and cares about the some stranger who just wants to get some.
I would like to know weather Uncle Bob is the Fathers Brother or the mothers Brother, and if the mothers Brother what went on between them. Perhaps Boo or Bumps is his Son or Daughter.
The idea of Daddy being 1st up is very common in some cultures. Sweden, Denmark, Holland, Ice land and the neitherlands in Gerneral among them. That Hot blonde Pussy is never wasted.
People merry their 1st and 2nd Cousins all the time. You just do it No one says shit, you do not evan have to move.
Every now and then you look in the Paper and see people with the same last name nothing like a Mrs Smith-Smith with |
| 2011-06-18 07:38:24 |
Uncle Bob's Carwash |
Lub: This is perhaps your bedt work yet. Its been well worth the wait, of course we need a part 2, 3, and so on.
We can only guess who made the baby. Love the different setting and the Car Wash idea is wounderful.
Remember Happy Sex, and Happy Endings.
I agree I would rather have my Son Fuck His Sister who he loves and cares about the some stranger who just wants to get some.
I would like to know weather Uncle Bob is the Fathers Brother or the mothers Brother, and if the mothers Brother what went on between them. Perhaps Boo or Bumps is his Son or Daughter.
The idea of Daddy being 1st up is very common in some cultures. Sweden, Denmark, Holland, Ice land and the neitherlands in Gerneral among them. That Hot blonde Pussy is never wasted.
People merry their 1st and 2nd Cousins all the time. You just do it No one says shit, you do not evan have to move.
Every now and then you look in the Paper and see people with the same last name. |
| 2011-06-18 07:38:23 |
Uncle Bob's Carwash |
Lub: This is perhaps your bedt work yet. Its been well worth the wait, of course we need a part 2, 3, and so on.
We can only guess who made the baby. Love the different setting and the Car Wash idea is wounderful.
Remember Happy Sex, and Happy Endings.
I agree I would rather have my Son Fuck His Sister who he loves and cares about the some stranger who just wants to get some.
I would like to know weather Uncle Bob is the Fathers Brother or the mothers Brother, and if the mothers Brother what went on between them. Perhaps Boo or Bumps is his Son or Daughter.
The idea of Daddy being 1st up is very common in some cultures. Sweden, Denmark, Holland, Ice land and the neitherlands in Gerneral among them. That Hot blonde Pussy is never wasted.
People merry their 1st and 2nd Cousins all the time. You just do it No one says shit, you do not evan have to move.
Every now and then you look in the Paper and see people with the same last name nothing like a Mrs Smith-Smith with |
| 2011-06-18 07:38:23 |
Uncle Bob's Carwash |
Lub: This is perhaps your bedt work yet. Its been well worth the wait, of course we need a part 2, 3, and so on.
We can only guess who made the baby. Love the different setting and the Car Wash idea is wounderful.
Remember Happy Sex, and Happy Endings.
I agree I would rather have my Son Fuck His Sister who he loves and cares about the some stranger who just wants to get some.
I would like to know weather Uncle Bob is the Fathers Brother or the mothers Brother, and if the mothers Brother what went on between them. Perhaps Boo or Bumps is his Son or Daughter.
The idea of Daddy being 1st up is very common in some cultures. Sweden, Denmark, Holland, Ice land and the neitherlands in Gerneral among them. That Hot blonde Pussy is never wasted.
People merry their 1st and 2nd Cousins all the time. You just do it No one says shit, you do not evan have to move.
Every now and then you look in the Paper and see people with the same last name nothing like a Mrs Smith-Smith with |
| 2011-06-18 07:38:14 |
Uncle Bob's Carwash |
Lub: This is perhaps your bedt work yet. Its been well worth the wait, of course we need a part 2, 3, and so on.
We can only guess who made the baby. Love the different setting and the Car Wash idea is wounderful.
Remember Happy Sex, and Happy Endings.
I agree I would rather have my Son Fuck His Sister who he loves and cares about the some stranger who just wants to get some.
I would like to know weather Uncle Bob is the Fathers Brother or the mothers Brother, and if the mothers Brother what went on between them. Perhaps Boo or Bumps is his Son or Daughter.
The idea of Daddy being 1st up is very common in some cultures. Sweden, Denmark, Holland, Ice land and the neitherlands in Gerneral among them. That Hot blonde Pussy is never wasted.
People merry their 1st and 2nd Cousins all the time. You just do it No one says shit, you do not evan have to move.
Every now and then you look in the Paper and see people with the same last name. |
| 2011-06-16 18:12:43 |
Loving Lisas Pretty Pink Pussy Petals |
This Story is so way byound GREAT.
Lets FF this about two years and see what they are up to. happy Sex and Happy Endings.
i hope that yo and your 19 year old friend get togeather. Fuck the age difference. If she inspires you that much both of you go for it, she may be your late life Star Crossed Lover and mother of your last love chilld.
That was perhaps the Best Pure Brother and Sister incest Story that I have ever tead.
Have not seen much from you lately but the wait was worth it. 10/10.
Lets develop the Dude Ranch and lets have a Baby. Twins one Boy and one Girl.
Lisa is just so cool by herself. You develop your people so well.
By the way this is Romance Not Porn.
Congrads on another wounderful tale.
There are many good writers in our general ageb group. Some good young ones with lots of potential coming up also.
This is in my Favs by the way. Say hi to your friend for me. |
| 2011-06-16 00:24:41 |
Just As He Is - EPILOGUE |
This series was way to good and this story is so under rated.
Fine writing at its best. 10/10 on the whole thing. |
| 2011-06-10 18:43:46 |
My sister and I Pt. 6 (conclusion) |
REally
Really Good Series. |
| 2011-06-10 18:43:45 |
My sister and I Pt. 6 (conclusion) |
REally
Really Good Series. |
| 2011-06-10 18:27:56 |
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I like this story, the writing is getting better and the spacing is better. I hope this is a good and long series I see great potential. I put it in my favs so I would not lose the link. AS I want to keep track of your progress.
Remember happy Sex, Happy endings.
I do not think Grocery Store Male Cashiers get laid much, but I can't prove it either way. And it does fit. At least someone has a job.
I would hope the Job was not an end in itself but a means to an end.
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| 2011-06-08 18:26:14 |
Hottest 18 yrd old Slumber Party Ever! |
A Lot like the other story but a really good story. Like your work.
Note: Anything over 8" usually hurts wether a Virgin or Not. It may in part or all fit but it can be uncomforttable. Dicks are usuall 6 to 7 inches for a reason. These guys who Grow their Dick usually hurt women and in the end themselfs. There are medical Reasons why Not to grow your dick. |
| 2011-06-08 18:06:05 |
I told you he would fuck her! |
I really did like this story. In the Favs. Very good writing.
I wanted dad to Fuck Becky, However Chloe getting fucked was almost just as good.
I would like to see a part 2 on this. |
| 2011-06-08 17:40:37 |
A Mexican Holiday Part 1 |
That was one Great Erotic Story, It is in my Favs 10/10.
Lets see several parts and of course a happy ending. You are fine writer with great humor.
Perhaps a little more background on each as things go on. Return it to the US at some point and keep it going. At 53 and fairly heathly he can still do it 1 or 2 times per day and if she needs more then that he can take care of her and not Cum himself. At 65 i do that often, Wife gets very happy, and I am happy making her happy. At some leval Sex happens Daily.
Older man and Younger Women can work out nicely. No it is not for the Womans forever but its fine while it lasts and who is to say she won't go shopping and the Wal Mart Roof won't fall in.
Now i don't mean 80/20 unless both just want to. I mean like 15,20, 25 yers older. Wemon also but Women are wired different and the Society although it disapproves of both, always feels that a younger male is taking advantage of an older women. Or there is somthing wrong with him.
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| 2011-06-03 20:52:37 |
My sister and I Pt. 1 |
I liked this Story, the age spread is good. Both are old enough.
Professional Single Mom, No Dad. Moms at a conference i assume in another city.
You where able to set up and develop your people nicely No need to go stright to the Suck and Fuck. We are humans here not Rabbits.
Good Storyline well used but that is because it Works.
Good 1st Story and i will wait for #2. Space between Paragraphs just a little betteer. Don't be scared to use humor and wise ass remarks, as they show the security and fun of the relationship.
These are kids, Kids are not that serious even when they are serious.
Lets see some fun Sex and in the end a happy ending. |
| 2011-06-02 17:29:51 |
My Sister Sarah and I |
PV1; The 35 year thing was/is a long time. Now you have the Internet and other ways to keep track. Men are still easier to find then Women.
I am not saying it does not work, I am just saying its a long time. Had you trimmed 10 years you would still have had time for her to have a late life Baby with her brother.
A women dreeding time is from about 14 to 45 give or take. I hear as young as 8 in South America and in Aferica 25% of the Female Babys have lost their Virginty by Rape by Age 3. Because of the myth that if you have Aids and Fuck a Virgin it kills the Aids. Instead you infect the Raped Child.
Your series was great keep it up. |
| 2011-06-02 17:13:00 |
My Sister Sarah and I |
PV1: I want to talk to you about the last Story in this series, you disabled comments, and i cannot see why.
The Story is Very Well Written and Tight and well edited. You have kept the series togeather well.
The ending Twist was fantastic, byound belief. It so calls for another sequal.
You are a fine writer and do not let anyone tell you different.
I know that some people may be bugged by older people having joyful sex but fuck them. I am 65 and had joyful both last night and this morning with my 49 year old wife, we still go at it in some way daily.
I do not Read Porn/Romance as i do not see Porn in this story. I order replace Sex or Inspire Sex. I just read Porn/Romance because I like it and I can.
Keep up the good work. That would just be her Cousin so i know lots of places thats legal. |
| 2011-06-01 23:14:05 |
Shooting my Cum - my Daughters Fetish |
Please do a Sequel. THis is very good writing. |
| 2011-06-01 21:57:43 |
You CAN'T Fuck a Teacher |
Anon; have you been Sucking Blues Toes. |
| 2011-06-01 21:55:08 |
You CAN'T Fuck a Teacher |
Blueheatt does not have to do that he is a good writer and tells a fine story.
I Post on news websites and use to different names and often post in to agree with my self on a topic. The mods Know it as the Account and ISP is the same. This has been going on for years and i got the idea from someone else.
If you cannot encourge yourself who will. Its like Voting for your self.
Its really okay. You can put Chicken in the hamburger Helper also and the crocker police will not come. You can put two kinds of meat in the Tuna Helper also. My Son is a Vegaterain and he makes his with Tofu or No Meat, or Veggie Burger.
So using different names to build your self up or your fan base is fine.
Or you can argue both sides of a topic. The main idea is having the Balls and Talent to write in the first place. |
| 2011-06-01 21:55:07 |
You CAN'T Fuck a Teacher |
Blueheatt does not have to do that he is a good writer and tells a fine story.
I Post on news websites and use to different names and often post in to agree with my self on a topic. The mods Know it as the Account and ISP is the same. This has been going on for years and i got the idea from someone else.
If you cannot encourge yourself who will. Its like Voting for your self.
Its really okay. You can put Chicken in the hamburger Helper also and the crocker police will not come. You can put two kinds of meat in the Tuna Helper also. My Son is a Vegaterain and he makes his with Tofu or No Meat, or Veggie Burger.
So using different names to build your self up or your fan base is fine.
Or you can argue both sides of a topic. The main idea is having the Balls and Talent to write in the first place. |
| 2011-06-01 21:43:58 |
You CAN'T Fuck a Teacher |
This is in the Faves you are a really good writer.
She woulsv be several years older then Jason.
This is what can happen when Sister and Brother Fuck their brains out and end up wanting to be togeather.
We need another part as in who;s the Father, they meet and really like each other. We could have Double Pen and all sorts of three way fun. Sence her brother has a girl friend we could get her in on it, Then plat double who's the daddy.
Just so many ways to go,,, |
| 2011-05-27 00:56:14 |
(More) Sins of my Country Girl Sis & Me |
There are several really good writers posting right now. So it goes to style as to whom is best among them.
I am a great fan of yours because I think you are very funny, as well as write a good fuck story.
Another is great at Romance and deep love.
All have mostly happy endings and are tight and well written.
I like a very narrow niche of Porn Story and you guys fill it well.
I miss KH and wish he had not left with his toys. He is a bit of an ass but among the great writers.
WP has not Posted in a couple of weeks and with people in their 60's you sometimes wonder.
This was a really great story, I am glad the moms are on board. I gather that they to will get some.
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| 2011-05-26 18:37:40 |
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This continues to be a very good series.
I suppose in the World of fiction that the father never got cought.
Thats the problem people read this stuff and either get pissed off because they are reading it and can't do it. Or it gives them flase hope and they decide to try. Get told on get cought and go to jail.
Fathers wh oare the total support of their familyies are the worst because the mother tells the daughter that if they lose him, they lose alll the toys.
The problems of being told on or found out by accident. (Boyfriend looking through the Window etc. Or someone telling that special friend are to great and not worth the risk of years and years in jail.
If it is on your mind do not act on it. Evan if its thrown in your face turn it down.
There have been cases where Dad has been set up and then told on. So that Boy Friend and Girlfriend or Brother and Sister could be togeather. Evan Mom and Son. Pop is not going to catch them if he is in Jail, So Do Not Do I |
| 2011-05-25 21:28:06 |
The Storm |
Your Work is outstanding. A little different but in writing different is good. This Story which links to the other on is in my Favs. Keep up the great work. |
| 2011-05-13 17:26:01 |
13 year old virgin |
This is in my Faves as I would like to see it develop.
I hope his wife is as game as he claims. I do Not want to see the Girl Passed around and abused. High School then College, lots of good Schools in Or. Pac 10, (12). She should be able to afford it or a Soccor Schlorship, maybe make the O Team. Discover something, as she says be someone instead of Trailer Trash, single mom with a couple of kids and the Bum is either in Jail or Dosen't Work so no child support but he ccomes around now and then to chace of you last chance for a man dance, has sex with you and leaves you again, after beating the crap out of you if you file for child support again. Perhaps with a new bun in your unprocted oven. Lots of that in Or, and Wa, Both Urban and Rueral.
In Hawaii we do Not allow Trailers, the trash just sleeps on the Beach.
Living on the Beach is and of its self Not Child Abuse according to the Law.
14 for me has to do with legal sexual concent in Hawaii before 2002.
14-0 vs 16-5 |
| 2011-05-13 17:11:23 |
13 year old virgin |
The only problem with this story is that it is to long.
I would also wish the Girl was 14 Not 13. But thats me.
I have read about 1/2 and then The last part. It Ends okay. However I figured that out very early on.
He might need the Lawyer friend to keep him out of the Organ State Prison and his teaching job,
Chance meeting like that happen so thats not so strange.
A Boarding School is an awful place to be, no matter how much it costs. Its like warehousing your kid. No matter how fancy the female kids and the weak male kids are always sexually at risk.
Lonely people seek company and company comes in many packages.
However it much better then life on the Street.
This guy reminds me of Humbert Humbert. He died in Prison and lolita Died in Child Birth.The only difference is he is more handsome instead of being a dirty perofile.
I do like him he is kind. He does Care. Being picked up in a rain strom on a freeway in oreagon is in itelf an act of kindness. Plus |
| 2011-05-11 23:46:39 |
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I saw this story off of Blizzrds Fave Links.
Good writers tell about other good writers.
This is a very different Sister Brother Incest Story, because of the Age Spread, which really is not that much, but is a lot at the younger ages. There is an 8 year and some months spread.
This was just a great story. The female being in charge of an older male.
I loved the line I could not even eat sasuage gor a long time. Plus that his hers viewpoint on things.
An update would be nice but with a happy ending.
Its in my Faves, Great Story.
So the Father goes to a Bar to bitch about his daughter blowing his son and telling everyone in the Bar. Great Father.
I hope they have a good home and make a nice family. 26 and 18 is not a great spread. When he is 60 she is 52, both are middle aged. When He is 80, she is 72, both are elderly and perhaps still, kiss and lick and blow. |
| 2011-05-11 21:32:12 |
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I read this story 2 and then 1.
It may or may not be the best Sister Brother Incest Romance Story, that I have ever read.
It is of course in my Faves. This Story is so different, in so many ways.
I like the idea of the wealthy Female pedofile. Peds are seem as most always Men. Trting to get to young boys or girls.
The concept of Running away from home but staying in the same town is a little weak but the running away because of Beatings is not a streach.
The Reality Checks plus the Discovery and coming of awareness for the teen girl.
Great Stories nice and different twist , lets keep it going. I am glad the brother and sister got togeather sooner then later.
They do Not have to go back, If you do not report your kids missing then they are not missing, although I would think The School Officals would take at least a mild interest. Payments ro Schools relate directly to attendence.
We Need the nice rich lady to take them to Hawaii. Because some things are that th |
| 2011-05-11 03:25:32 |
Daddy's Little Girlfriend |
Good Story! Everyone is different, for some it comes early and for some later, Diffrent time space and season for everyone.
Everyone is not the same in a Box. |
| 2011-05-09 17:09:58 |
My Lovely twin. |
This was a great Story.
This Story was so great with so many twists that I had to read the ending and then go back to the main body of the story.
I love Sister Brother Twin Incest Stories. With the female being the aggressor. Happy Sex, happy Ending.
In a way you chickened out but in the end nicely redeamed yourself.
It was different and the twist where good. Better then She Sucked we fucked that we usually got. Needs a Part 2 for some reason. College is the great seperater.
Lots of Incest relationships end about that time, just like, High School Girlfriend Boyfriend Relationships. She goes to School and He goes either to another school or the Factory or the Army. They keep in touvh for a while but after awhile they both know its over and move on.
Its kind of like the Waaitress who Supports her Husband through Medical School. In the end He is a Doctor and she is still a Waitress.
Two whole different people. Cell Phones make it harder to break away.
Great Story |
| 2011-05-07 20:14:54 |
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This is a very good story, well written and tight, and well proof read. I am looking forward to the other parts.
I am not sure of you and conversation yet, however you develop and describe nicely. I am looking forward to him doing the sister with the Tattoos.
I love mother and Son Sex and think the 37 year old Lawter should have his baby. Girl and Boy Twins of course.
You write it and just let it flow. Its in my Favs. Really Really Good. |
| 2011-05-06 17:37:13 |
My step-sister Sara! |
I think this is a really good story. You have alot of Natural Talent.
I do not think any body ever should get Raped. It is wrong and just as wrong in fiction.
Those that like to read about Rape have no REspect for Women, Female Teens, Girls, their Mothers or Themselfs.
I like free willing and very happy sex.
Talking about Dick Size is okay but keep it relevent. |
| 2011-05-04 15:58:16 |
Two Tales About Jack And Mary |
Both Storyies ar very good as type off writing called Comparison and Contrast.
I both the girl is safe in the end.
I believe that both should be further developed, either togeather or seperately. Further Charecter development as in what does Jack do for a living.
Also the development of Mary as herself and not just a Sexual being in both stories.
I am glad that she does not have thee perfact body and is described as thick. I have always liked thick.
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| 2011-05-02 17:19:12 |
The Ghost and Me, Part 4 |
This series ismore romance writing then Porn. |
| 2011-05-02 17:17:59 |
The Ghost and Me, Part 4 |
Daddy Warbuck you are a Great Writer. We wish you well with your medical issues and that you have a great outcome.
You are in my favs. We are praying for you. |
| 2011-04-30 15:34:44 |
A Little Sister Brother Thing |
Your Story is very underrated by the way. |
| 2011-04-30 15:33:35 |
A Little Sister Brother Thing |
This is a very good story, very well written. I had a problem with the child sex but it was more play then not, until she was old enough.
He controled himself and her as best he could. Very good writing. Way under rated.
Sometimes are 1st sexual experiences happen and we want them but that still does not make us way to young. There are Sex Laws for a reason.
In my State it used to be 14 game on. However we changed that in 2001 to 16-5 and a class C. Some of us wanted 16-3 but that put the kids in danger so we settled for 16-5.
my Island being the Pedofile stop for the tour plane on the way to Asia.
The pedafiles go to the Western Islands and buy 9 year olds. 70 million people mostly dirt poor and half starving it is easy to obtain what you want and cheaply.
Upon their return to the US I believe they chould hve been taken off the plane lined up and Shot. Then dumped at Sea for Fish Food.
Now and then 1 gets set up Robbed and killed, and dumped in a Gluch. |
| 2011-04-23 17:54:06 |
My Oh So Warm Daughter On A Cold Alaskan Nights |
I am not sure how that story could be anymore Original then it is. |
| 2011-04-21 20:02:34 |
Always and Forever Chap. 3 |
This is good and the couple being Non White makes it better.
I just read aWP story and nothing as good as those.
Good writing. |
| 2011-04-21 19:47:52 |
Mi mujercita hermosa, my beautiful little wife |
Now you roam in Mexico.
Thaqt was most likely the greatest romance story I have ever read. Its been awhile but I understoodb and could read the Spanish.
In Hawaii Maui is where most of the Mexicans have settled. Not so much Oahu the Asians own that. Whites, and an amazing number of Blacks, and of course the Hawaiians who are mixed with ervryone andeverything..
Master Work from a master, only i disagree that you have reached your peak, that you have still to accomplish.
10/10 Great Work of course in my faves.
Notice the idea that in every good story like this, the Daughter or Sister takes the lead and is Strong and in Charge. Yet the Men are strong and successful in there own right.
I would have liked twin girls or one of each. However maybe one will turn out to be a true hermathrodite.
Its all been said Mahalo . |
| 2011-04-20 19:52:07 |
The Big Time--Michael K Smith |
Girls Girls, now play nice.
This is another story from a master told from the female point of view which I love.
I really liked this story and would love to see more like it. |
| 2011-04-20 07:18:29 |
The Livingston School for Young Ladies |
It has been a few says, but this story was well worht the wait.
It truly is some of your best work. The best partv is your naming of the Middle Eastern Family. That had me rolling in laughyer.
There is to much good action going on not to have a part 2.
This story is vastly underrated, most likely because some folks diden't get enough suck and fuck.
However I like development and talk ienteraction besides Fuck Me Deeper.
Great Story it in my Fvs. |
| 2011-04-14 19:33:45 |
Always and Forever Chap. 2 |
I enjoy the simpleness of it. Not much foreplay but she still came. This writer is very good with English.
Sex skills develop over time, most porn writing or evan romance writing have the guy as skilled as can be like he is 30 or somthing.
At that age it is mostly plug and very little play. Which is okay for most for awhile because all they want to do is fuck anyway. Remember they are just outb of high school, and it was the secound time for both.
This story is more real then you might think.
Mom and Dad apprently do not get along but they are civil. Part 3 a little more detail.
If you are under rated do not pay attention, you are doing just fine. |
| 2011-04-14 19:17:26 |
Always and Forever |
I really liked this story, Its cute, it is how Sex Happens between Teenagers more oftenb then Not.
Some of the White People won't like it because the people in the story are both Black or Black mixed and as the Girl said there parents are loaded.
They think , if they think at all that Black Girls get started at a young age by being Raped. Gladly Not So Much.
For the Lower middle Class, Middle Class and Upper Middle Class, its more or less the same as every one else.
All Blacks do not crave White Skin.
This is more how a Black Girln would go about doing it, Just Do It. Once the mindis made up the body follows. Strong Women means just that Strong Women.
If you are a Raceist, Turn the page and get over it.
Good job 1st Try, Develop things a little better. Spelling Grammer, Spacing Great.
It was a given she was Wet when he nailed her. Does not have to be in the Story. The Forever and always thing is a little weak, but why Not. There kids. |
| 2011-04-14 01:00:11 |
Happy Hour at the Happy Rabbit Irish Pub |
Wow!!! Great Story, has everything perhaps one of your very best works ever. Mahalo, Mahalo Noa Loa.
Bailey is my my daughters (20) first name. Named her after an old cotton picking friend of mine in Arizona in the late 80's. He picked the worlds best cotton, high Cotton, Pima Cotton.
You write so well, I never expected that story or that fine a story. This was not Porn, this was pain, love and passion. The girls got it very young but I find no fault concidering what happened to his daughter.
You could do a part two if your interested in Twins and hermathrodites. I live in the pacific where the further West you go the more that is accepted and the less it is so called corrected.
I did not say lady Boy, but True hermathrodite, two functioning Sex Organs.
Nothing here out of the Normal, Short People, Amputees and Special People fall in love and have Sex also.
You did a great job, Thank you again. |
| 2011-04-12 15:46:15 |
Paladin, Paladin Where Do You Roam |
Strange Evan for you. Great work, just not my type of story, but great work regardless.
Now if you could do somthing on Amputee Sex with Teens and a little incest thrown in. Or Hermathrodite Love Story, With a little incest in that.
Handicapeable Sex etc. Or Sex among The Little People or the Special People.
I am tired of this perfact body, routine.
Did you know that they Have underwater Hotels in the Fiji Islands
You are an extremely fine writer, and I am a huge fan of yours. |
| 2011-04-11 16:09:33 |
THE SIBLINGS chapter 2, Opening moves |
The only problem with work this good and of this quality is that it spoils reading the rest of the dribble, and you lose interest.
My interest lies in a very narrow nich of Porn. Amputee Sex is my other area of interest. |
| 2011-04-09 19:00:37 |
The Siblings |
I wanted to log in before making a comment on this story.
It is perhaps the Best Story of its type I have ever read. The development of the Plot and the people in the story are fantastic.
The development of the relationship between the Sister and Borther is done is such a way that you cannot in anyway call this Porn. It is a love story about two kids.
Yes I am looking forward to the parts yet to be posted that have the Sex. However I love development and conversation. The sharing of some very private moments some never before covered. "If you want to see me change my Tampon you can watch" Show the love and trust in the relationship.
This is extremely well written and you feel you are there. It has a To Kill A Mocking Bird Quality. Zeus24 I am so glad you posted it. It will be in my Faves and I will be looking forward to the rest.
I am into to or three very narrow nitches of Porn, and this fills it all. Exceot Amputee Sex. So lets see the rest great story, |
| 2011-03-31 18:25:54 |
Jessica & her son Jimmy |
Please tell me why every night can't be like this.
He will dry fuck you for about 3 years and one day he will cum.
I would have loved to have dropped my very 1st load inside my mothers pussy.
He can make a Baby at 12, so its just a little while longer and you can have some fun in the mean time.
Now if its male/Female at that age i feel entirely different. Or if moms a 350lb pig. |
| 2011-03-23 18:30:02 |
The Little Mormon Girl |
You are a Good Writer, they need to quit picking on the small stuff.
My wife has often taken the lead in our relationship. Not odd at all. |
| 2011-03-23 18:27:16 |
The Little Mormon Girl |
She Escaped.
Most Mormons are fine people, Not into Regligious Repression at all.
They may not date till 16 and then group date till 18, also have their on Clubs and Activites.
A lot decide Not to have TV. Less now because BYU Channel.
The Church Web Site is totally Awsome.
They will Pass a Plate In Church and never ask a Non Member for a Dime. All Chapels and other Buildings Open Turn Key. No Debt.
Most are everyday people you would Not know where Mormons if they had not told you or you diden't ask.
This Story is more true then not. Some like in All Faiths are Extremist.
Out of mostly fear or a twisted desire to embrace the World themself. Protect try to protect there familyies by Not Exposing them to "The World". However the results have been somewhat negative in these later years and a more moderate view is being encouraged, while following the stanards.
Like I said This Girl Excaped.
Experience in watching Siblings and House keeping, Counts as Rea
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| 2011-03-23 14:56:33 |
Samantha And The Pizza Delivery Boy |
In your wet dreams, get real. |
| 2011-03-22 22:05:10 |
Joe on the Road |
This Story sounds more true then not.
Man you tall a good story!! I so loved this story. Its in my Faves, and you have become one of my favorite writers.
I look for your stories first.
You are always going somewhere new and different, it is the type of Story I would really Not Consider Porn not that it matters. |
| 2011-03-21 23:06:54 |
Summer With My Granddaughter |
Great Story....Keep up the great writing. In my Favs. |
| 2011-03-21 22:48:17 |
Summer With My Granddaughter, Part 2 |
This is in my Favs. Thats all that needs to be said as this outstanding story stands tall by itself.
Great Writing and appapently some knowledge of Aussie English.
Great Job I felt like I was there. |
| 2011-03-21 16:49:17 |
Last Will and Testament |
I am a Porn Reader and Writer.
This is Not Yale and this is not Harverd,
Nothing to be sorry about, He posted av great story I would not have read other wise.
We are not copywriting and getting paid for the by line. Credit is nice but not necessary. Reposting of this type of story is ahigh compliant.
Its in my favorites. |
| 2011-03-14 17:59:43 |
Bless Me Father, For I Have Sinned Ch. 01 |
Fantastic, Great Job, a Master Work. You are among and may even be the finest of Writers, and on this site that includes some very heavy company. |
| 2011-03-12 21:27:17 |
Melody's New Life - Chapter Two |
Great Story but I go along with the too many Disney Movies. |
| 2011-03-12 20:53:29 |
Their Unusual Mommy |
Its in my Favs List, Great Job.
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| 2011-03-12 20:52:31 |
Their Unusual Mommy |
This was/is a really Great Story hermaphrodite. These stories are so Hot when things are working well.
I know you are from Canda, and to take nothing away from your writing some may think that your math is a little off. The girls where adopted but not as babies.
What happened to the Law School?
10/10 mostly because of content and the Cool and acceptable you presented it.
This situation happens more often then you might think. In the West its corrected and in the East (Asia Pacific Islands, Not so much.
So a White Person with this situation is even more rare.
its a touchy subject even among the touchy subject people.
I would have loved to have known one. |
| 2011-03-11 14:42:32 |
Last Chance....Chapter 4 |
I agree with Greg 314.
Not that I don't love stories about Penises Sticking in Wet Vaginas, I do.
However I love this story also. |
| 2011-03-11 14:38:42 |
Last Chance....Chapter 4 |
SSALO: You are a master, you can do and right what ever you want to.
A Sex or love scene does not have to be sloppy or Vulger.
I would like to see this develop but part of me says leave the happy ending..
Both are extremely messed up people, but sometimes that works.
A lot of what you put into a story is different, even for the different people. However it is Real and so very very good.
A lot of people that did lonely hearts clubs where these kins of people.
Not so much Internet Dating I believe thaty is a different breed of Cat.
i enjoyed all of this story and was able to put my self in the place of everyone, to include the Phych, who is a little strange in her own right.
Your story is 10/10 and i do not want to pick it, Just say great job put it in my favs and say it was an E-Ticket Read. Some of the best stuff I've ever read. Porn or Not.
I know Porn when I see it and this was Not Porn. This was just plain good. Good Luck!! |
| 2011-03-03 19:41:05 |
My Three Ladies part 2 |
Wow Jenni lives in West Virgina, I live in Hawaii, and you are Downunder. How i love the Internet. |
| 2011-03-03 19:39:30 |
My Three Ladies part 2 |
This is a very good story and series and the Aussie Twist is very good. Keep up the good work. |
| 2011-03-03 19:12:40 |
My Three Ladies |
I lovedv this story its in my Favs. |
| 2011-03-03 07:56:11 |
Last Chance....Chapter 1 |
This is a very good story. Thanks for the warning about the lack of Sex. Its Not all about Sex as a lot of Middle Aged Women tell me.
I can relate to this Story very well, from his point of view. 17 years difference in age is wide but its not the end of the World.
I was 42 and my Wife was 26 when we met. Plus she
had two kids 6 and 4. 23 years later our
youngest daughter is 20. Not the lady I am married to but in life I have picked unattractive over attractive in hope of loyalty, it diden't work.
AQnyway it is a very good Story. In my favs, I like the writing style and the pace. Looking forward to #2. |
| 2011-02-25 20:20:59 |
Tommy and His Mommy |
This may have been the best porn story that I have ever read.
The part i liked most was that her body was Not Perfact.
This is a great story and its in my favorites. If you where not a Master you are one now. This Story is your Phd in Porn Writing.
Thank you so much. |
| 2011-02-23 23:36:41 |
Owned Teacher Chapter 1-3 |
I would have Not have even touched this except for who posted it.
This is a very good story and extremely well written.
It is also a statement on our society in general.
If this story was written and posted some where between,1996 and 2001 then the internet was a baby and we did not yet have Cell phones in great use.
I am not into Blackmail Storyies although I must admit this one is very good. The female is in charge and that is my turning point for any Genre of Porn.
i would have called Security and i would have had the Girl Arrested and at least throun out of school. If anything had happen I would have sued the School System, all involved and the girl and her parents.
I would owned it and said that in what ever year. I did some nude modeling and I was good enough that I published in Penthouse Mag, and well paid for my work. Penthouse is a legal publcation and I was well over 18. I would have gotton my Union Rep and D Double Dared them to fire me. No Fear. |
| 2011-02-02 21:37:37 |
Daddy's Little Waitress Part 2 |
Lets Drop the Girls Job, No reason for it and it will cause problems. Daughters being Waitress are problems looking for a place to happen.
At 16 she is really to young for that job anyway.
Lets have Dad work less and fuck more.
How about a long vacation with them going to Disneyland and Hawaii.
Cruiseship around the World.
He has to Divorce his Wife or risk getting cought. Possible Custody battle. Also a possible baby.
Above all lets have a happy ending. I really like this story.
Lets just cut the 70 hour work week, life is far to short.
Moving to a High Rise Condo would be good.
Daddy and Daughter have agreed to fuck each others brains out. Lets help them do it. |
| 2011-02-02 21:37:29 |
Daddy's Little Waitress Part 2 |
Lets Drop the Girls Job, No reason for it and it will cause problems. Daughters being Waitress are problems looking for a place to happen.
At 16 she is really to young for that job anyway.
Lets have Dad work less and fuck more.
How about a long vacation with them going to Disneyland and Hawaii.
Cruiseship around the World.
He has to Divorce his Wife or risk getting cought. Possible Custody battle. Also a possible baby.
Above all lets have a happy ending. I really like this story.
Lets just cut the 70 hour work week, life is far to short.
Moving to a High Rise Condo would be good.
Daddy and Daughter have agreed to fuck each others brains out. Lets help them do it. |
| 2011-01-27 20:00:01 |
A Weekend With Little Sister, Part 3 |
Daddycums: this is a great story and a great series. You are to good a Writer to writev under the name that you use.
This to good to end you might continue on with their time growing up and their years togeather. |
| 2010-11-27 19:54:40 |
An incest birthday chapter 10 |
I could have done with out the Dallas bit. However it turned out okay.
You are a very good writter and you throw curves and plot twist so well.
I suggest that Steph and her Brother are really having incest and want a cover as much as Randy ans Rita do.
Aunt Liza should hook up with the Bosses Brother.
All the females should get Pregennt and not be sure who the father is. All this Seman we need some Babyies.
I do not want any one killed off. Dad should find out so but be okay with it, I liked 9 until the change.
I am into happy sex and happy endings, That is why i log in as Happy Rabbit. May Daughter has two Rabbits, hey stay in seperate cages in my finished basement about 12 feet from this Computer Station. I also have 3 Cats and a Small Dog but the Dog stays outside or on the Lani. I don't want the Dog but he belongs to my Son and as long as he takes care of him, I am okay with it. Its the smell mainly. I have a Wicked Sinus problem. All in all a Great Series. |
| 2010-11-20 15:34:05 |
My Little Sister Sophie (Part 3) |
Way Way Hot. Good writing. Good Story line. Little Sis appears to be in charge. |
| 2010-11-20 15:09:42 |
My Little Sister Sophie (Parts 1 & 2) |
So far this atory is really good and well written. |
| 2010-11-16 02:19:23 |
little sisters birthday wish 1 |
Escaping and dealing with Mormonism is hard to do as a teen.
The cought, snitch, and in trouble factors are so great. |
| 2010-11-10 20:37:25 |
The Kiss |
I tink that this is a very good story. |