||Asmodeus - Demon of Lust: Part Two
||another FANTASTIC one!!
||Stranger in the night
||Nicely done, enjoyed it.
||Daddy's Toy part 2
||Great story, can't wait to read more.
||Really great story!! I very much enjoyed it.
||Yes, Mr. Shaver (part 2)
||Nicely done, more please. Maybe a prequel telling us how this whole thing started.
||Yes, Mr. Shaver (Part 1)
||Nice start, can't wait to read more.
||Be My Little Whore Tonight
||Loved it, that was fantastic.
||More then I bargained for 1
||Good, keep us wanting...
||Ashlynn gets disciplined
||Really, that's all the comments? Please I'm needy, give me feed back. Thank you
||DIary of a Pain Whore - Chapter 4
||Please I need another!!
||Liked it till he whipped her across the face with the belt. An ass spanking is hot, a face slap is hot, a belt whipped face not so much. Other wise good job.
||Unholy Punishment? Part 1
||That was AWESOME. Please do another.
||My daughter Kelly
||Good, but please seperate into smaller paragraphs. Otherwise it's a hard read.
||Life and Times of a Pain Whore - Chap2
||Her life is like a train wreck you can't help but watch.
||Daddy's little Sex Doll
||This could be good but it has lots of typos. It makes it confusing to read.
||Daddy's Little Sex Doll II
||This could be good but lots of typos. It makes it confusing to read.
||Amber won't do it again (Sequel)
||Loved it, GREAT job!!!
||OMG, seriously hot stuff!!
||Megan and the Monster
||Very entertaining, would love for her to go back and present him his son. Maybe get some more hot loving.
||A Cruise with My Granddaughter
||Always a pleasure to read your stories. Great Job!!
||Act like a whore...
||thank you all for your comments. I've added another story from Aslynn's perspective and tried to add more details as requested. Please check it out.
||Dam that was intense!! My favorite story on here so far. But I agree with seperate the chapters. It's easier to find where you left off. Thoroughly enjoyed non the less.
||Master Claims His Pet Part 2
||Fantastic!! Looking forward to part 3.
||That was FREAKING HOT!! I swear after I read this I was at the dog park and a guy came walking thru with his Great Dane and my twat started to twitch!! I had to come back and read it again.
||Can't wait to read another. very good!!
||That was so FREAKING HAWT!!