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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-07-25 13:09:33 |
danny phantom series by jayrich |
i appolgize for the part seven multiple of them i am trying to get them deleted but well having some problems well enjoy the rest of the series and all the ones that are part seven are the exact same so you don't have to read the same thing four times well have fun to this story enjoy |
| 2012-04-05 13:04:50 |
Avatar the last airbender, Chapter1, Tea time |
i agree it was a little bit to short but it was okay so p r |
| 2011-09-24 22:03:46 |
My Life As A Hermie Part 1 Discovery |
good story but if you don't pay attention it says my live as hermine and i thought it was a harry potter story but still good |
| 2011-09-24 21:52:38 |
The Unbelievably Lucky Ron Stoppable pt3 |
dude sorry but not really but i already posted every chapter up on my stories list bye
greatly fireup1 |
| 2011-08-29 00:07:47 |
the kp chapters i think that are full if not sorry |
ohh i for got to say i apologize to the author on this site Sex conspiracy theorisit i know he started the first couple of chapters but i got impatient and posted them all so again sorry for posting them first but you were taking to long well
greatly fireup1
oh and ps i know i said this in my intro but i don't want to hear the cast of the kim possible show complain for three reasons
1. what the fuck are you doing on this site in the first place
2. hasn't the series been finshed for what two years now and they should be happy that a fan posted some good stories perverted but good
and finally 3. if you complain about this you can all SUCK NOT JUST MY LEFT NUT BUT MY RIGHT ONE also!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
as always
greatly fireup1 |
| 2011-08-21 11:06:38 |
Eriic's new next door neighbor |
yo awesome story i didn't notice any grammar problems except the usage of some words but that doesn't matter i and other people shouldn't complain about the grammar of a story if we read it we shouldn't complain about it but still good job sorry for the mixed message
GREATLY FIREUP1 |
| 2011-08-21 10:53:51 |
Shake it up |
OH WAIT I ALSO FORGOT SENTENCE STRUCTURE I HAD THE SAME PROBLEMS WITH MY STORIES THE ONES I CREATED MY XJ9 SERIES |
| 2011-08-21 10:53:14 |
Shake it up |
OH WAIT I ALSO FORGOT SENTENCE STRUCTURE I HAD THE SAME PROBLEMS WITH MY STORIES THE ONES I CREATED MY XJ9 SERIES |
| 2011-08-21 10:52:56 |
Shake it up |
OH WAIT I ALSO FORGOT SENTENCE STRUCTURE I HAD THE SAME PROBLEMS WITH MY STORIES THE ONES I CREATED MY XJ9 SERIES |
| 2011-08-21 10:51:18 |
Shake it up |
yo um well the story was kinda okay it was longer than mine but dude the only good story you did was "sunny with a chance to get laid" but still this one was okay check out mine and comment about it
oh and u didn't do a good job in the personal info so have fun day dude
greatly FIREUP1 |
| 2011-08-17 10:11:38 |
SHAKE IT UP |
I just noticed it i am sorry for the wall of text i will revise it and do a better job sorry guys thanks for the comment |
| 2011-08-16 21:53:35 |
Perfume 1 - Mother |
dude you did good on your story |
| 2011-08-16 21:41:50 |
FAMILY GUY |
this is really good for new time sex story readers before the progress into the world of sex becomes bigger and more understanding is all i can say if you get it you get it
bye bye
FIREUP1
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| 2011-08-16 14:53:49 |
SHAKE IT UP |
guys thank you for the good reviews but i need criticism also because i need to do better. yes this is my best story yet but i need my next one to be better thanks for reading and please give more comments bye
greatly fireup1 |
| 2011-06-21 11:01:57 |
jenny the teenage robot (xj9) part 2 |
hey everybody i need comments from you say if its bad or good or sucked beyond any point of return i need you to comment on this thank you |