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| 2011-08-07 10:07:55 |
Birth of the Ringtaker 2 |
I really like the seriez I hoe you do more!!
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| 2011-04-30 20:43:53 |
Horny Auntie |
Fix'm, you sound angry and unimaginative |
| 2011-04-30 20:06:43 |
Vampire Aliens Rape Nuns |
good start add more detail, and use all five senses |
| 2011-04-27 21:25:53 |
The Plane Crash. |
Thanks for posting this!! |
| 2011-04-16 21:55:48 |
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I loved it!! good job, and thank you for continuing to post!! |
| 2011-03-29 20:58:47 |
Alex's Unusual Story -Part One- We Are Legion |
Ilked it Keep going, and add more powers! |
| 2011-03-18 16:16:54 |
The Champion's Companion 24 |
Then I'm not a neck beard. (I really am 26, and don't live with my mom.)
If you feel this site is missing something feel free to signup, and share. I'll warn you, no story on here is a fit for everyone.
I suppose it's a pity our kinks don't match.... if you feel this story is missing something tell me your fantasy. |
| 2011-03-17 07:45:05 |
The Champion's Companion 24 |
Female bukkake, and female squirting/ejaculations fall under 'water sports'.
I don't play WoW. WTF is a neckbeard? |
| 2011-02-17 07:51:24 |
The Champion's Companion 00 |
If your reading this then it may be too late..... this is a prequel. I can't control the way the site presents the posts so please understand that ch.10 continues the story.... |
| 2011-02-10 18:33:41 |
Mom Regrets Me *-* I Fuck Her |
I see many stories in your future.... Having the fan write back is a good idea too! |
| 2011-02-04 13:37:13 |
Lost... |
Pretty good story. The twist at the end gave me pause but only because it was not what you find on sites like this. Good job, it was daring. |
| 2011-01-15 13:21:59 |
The Champion's Companion 15 |
This is just economics, not politics. You should skip to the next chapter for the sex and violence. |
| 2011-01-12 20:56:48 |
Victorious |
I can dig it. The next parts aren't so 'wordy' |
| 2011-01-04 01:03:25 |
The Champion's Companion |
Chapter 00 is the prequel to this. It was added to help smooth out the story's unfortunately abrupt beginnings. |
| 2011-01-03 21:46:28 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:46:06 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:46:00 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:45:56 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:40:48 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:40:43 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:40:38 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:40:32 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:38:32 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:38:25 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:37:48 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:37:44 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:37:39 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:37:10 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:37:04 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:36:47 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. Fuck trolls |
| 2011-01-03 21:36:33 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |
| 2011-01-03 21:36:29 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |
| 2011-01-03 21:36:24 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |
| 2011-01-03 21:35:18 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |
| 2011-01-03 21:35:15 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |
| 2011-01-03 21:35:12 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |
| 2011-01-03 21:35:09 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |
| 2011-01-03 21:35:04 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |
| 2010-12-29 10:17:50 |
Mistaken For A Gentlemen; Part 1 |
good start kinda teasing. try to put space between paragraphs. the computer is not like reading a book it exhausts the eyes. but, good start fuck her hard. |
| 2010-12-28 19:37:34 |
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it was a good story that people who can read more than doctor Seuss will follow with ease |
| 2010-12-28 16:21:27 |
SKATER BOY NIGHTMARE pt 2 |
Much easier to read, good job. I'm dying already for chapter three. |
| 2010-12-22 00:48:06 |
The front desk girl |
That was great, even heart warming. |
| 2010-12-21 11:30:05 |
The Champion's Companion 00 |
Comments are welcome. |
| 2010-12-20 20:33:03 |
The Champion's Companion 9 |
I am very curious what people think of this story. There will be more women in the next chapter. I would love it if people mentioned why they voted. |
| 2010-12-20 20:32:54 |
The Champion's Companion 9 |
I am very curious what people think of this story. There will be more women in the next chapter. I would love it if people mentioned why they voted. |
| 2010-12-20 04:48:01 |
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I think it should have been more open ended. several of these story are similar. Arguably, I think you were peeling layers of the dark onion in the back of you mind. I hope you found and got through to the hot part.
People like stroke stories. You should consider other literature erotica sites if you want more of a novel. |
| 2010-12-20 04:38:11 |
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I REALLY don't know why that one is getting low ratings that was a perfect beginning to a series |
| 2010-12-20 04:31:09 |
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I don't understand why this is low rated it should be a series |
| 2010-12-09 21:30:27 |
The Plane Crash Pt. 19 |
now the plane is to small right? Maybe he could find a deserted resort. or maybe someone will come looking for the missing product.
Keep it movin man |
| 2010-12-09 21:24:06 |
The Mexican Housekeeper |
I liked it keep it up |
| 2010-12-09 21:23:59 |
The Mexican Housekeeper |
I liked it keep it up |
| 2010-12-09 21:23:34 |
The Mexican Housekeeper |
I liked it keep it up |
| 2010-12-02 23:46:59 |
SKATER BOY NIGHTMARE pt 1 |
breaking up the paragraphs help the eyes rest. having good readability will help your readers and make it likely they'll finish. Good read can't wait for more. |