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| 2012-06-12 03:22:19 |
Defiance: Chapter Six |
I too would truely enjoy reading the full story. I love mytholigy.And romance. One hell of a story. |
| 2012-06-08 04:11:38 |
THE NEW GODS 3:The Girl in the Dungeon |
Doctor Who Fan also. Also love the story. keep up the great work
personal rating 10/10 |
| 2012-06-07 00:52:13 |
Defiance: Chapter Four |
Love the story so far keep going have Amy/Aglea join James/Gabrielle to kill Ares then they rebuild the world |
| 2012-06-07 00:51:39 |
Defiance: Chapter Four |
Love the story so far keep going have Amy/Aglea join James/Gabrielle to kill Ares then they rebuild the world |
| 2012-05-31 20:15:50 |
Endless Summer Part 2 |
Damm laptop screwy key board |
| 2012-05-31 20:14:02 |
Endless Summer Part 2 |
Love the story. It would be nice if you had Desmond & Lumi Fall in Love. And damm everyone needs a red head as hot as Lauryn.
Keep up the great work can't wait till part 3 |
| 2011-12-10 04:53:03 |
Best Sister in the World!!! Part 3 |
Let the kids find out that Mom and Dad are also bother and sister |
| 2011-11-28 00:46:20 |
Camping With Mom Part II |
What language was that in some spots
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| 2011-11-14 02:58:21 |
Halloween hi-jinx |
Just like a woman tp jump the gun and it was her that got screwed. HA HA !!! That will teach her |
| 2011-08-31 20:34:56 |
Ranchland - Chapter 6 |
Great story. Please don'r stop the story. If she is going to have a baby. Find a way for Amy and Ben to get married I have read too many stories that were romance that the author killed it by ending it too soon or screwing the plot.
DirtyDaddy1966 |
| 2011-08-29 22:01:48 |
My cousin and I |
Good story. I would like to read your next story. I had fun reading it. |
| 2011-07-05 04:03:36 |
Asian Wives Club |
I could not share my wife no one would want her she bitches to much. But great story |
| 2011-07-03 03:59:57 |
Defying my family part 6 |
Great end to the story I hated that you had to end it. Can't wait till your next story. |
| 2011-06-30 01:48:30 |
A Bad Relationship With a Bad Dog |
That will teach her dad to be a ass. And that is where he got it up the ass. |
| 2011-06-30 00:39:20 |
Daddy comes home from work (pt. 2) |
Is the mom stepping out on the dad? If so have dad divorce mom then he can have his daughter all to himself. She seems to like what they are doing. Keep going. 9/10 |
| 2011-06-29 03:25:28 |
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Man this is so far a great story. I could feel your emotions from what I have read. It is a very sad but loving story. I can't wait till you put the next part. I can feel the love you and your sister share for each other. I can only hope the two of you finally find the happiness you both need. |
| 2011-06-28 04:40:49 |
Body Of A Man, Mind Of A Machine 7: All According To Plan |
Great story. Maybe when the two love birds get time maybe the will get married have a super baby |
| 2011-06-27 11:42:07 |
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Damn I got hard with that one. Keep going |
| 2011-06-27 11:06:44 |
My Uncle's New Wife; Part 3 Cousin Ashley Takes Charge |
Great story keep going . Can't wait till the next part is posted . Rate it 10/10
Is cousin on birth control If not knock her up. |
| 2011-06-27 00:07:12 |
My big, happy family! |
It would be nice if he knocked up his mom and sisters. And maybe Mia. Keep up the good work i rate it 10/10 |
| 2011-06-26 23:34:22 |
Body Of A Man, Mind Of A Machine 7: All According To Plan |
I like how you are taking your story line you are giving it just enough sex to keep people interested in it I also like the ideal on the introduction of the Freemasons and the Illuminati. I would how even like for you to put more into it about Adrian and Jenny's relationship. And when they have time to rest give them a baby that is smarter then Adrian and Jenny. |
| 2011-06-26 03:49:49 |
Defying My Family Part 5 |
Keep going gets better as you go. He needs to knock up his sister, his girlfriend and her mom |
| 2011-06-24 08:40:02 |
My first time with robby |
If she gets knocked up that should teach her to try to trick him again. Keep going with the story. |
| 2011-06-24 03:01:57 |
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Try to tell the dad how he feels about his sister. Then tell the dad you don't care if it feels wrong that you will not stop being with your sister that you love her. Keep going |
| 2011-06-24 02:06:20 |
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Boy what a surprise only 15. Damm Girls age fast. I hope that Dad and daughter will continue to grow closer Maybe even romance and even marriage. |
| 2011-06-23 22:50:25 |
During a Snow Storm |
He could be having trouble typing with one hand. I like the story he is writing from the heart. keep going |
| 2011-06-23 14:04:58 |
My Uncle's New Wife; Part 2 The First Wife |
Damm does all of the women of his family want to fuck him?
Does he need up knocking one of them up?
Does he ever get into a long term relationship? |
| 2011-06-21 00:33:40 |
PREACHER'S DAUGHTER |
Ok now the daughter or daughter's. How did you keep from knocking her up? |
| 2011-06-21 00:19:12 |
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Interesting story and are there going to be anymore girls added or maybe any single moms going to join (don't forget the BLUE PILL) move the daughter into dad's room |
| 2011-06-20 12:38:57 |
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Great story I was hard all the way thru it. |
| 2011-06-20 08:08:24 |
My Uncle's New Wife |
Great story keep on going I would like to see if Ashley joins in or wants Jim all to herself. I rate it 10/10 |
| 2011-06-18 23:01:48 |
Daddy's Little Girl Part 2 |
It is more like daddy; brother's and best friend's little girl not bad but too many people can't be a romance. |
| 2011-06-18 22:22:25 |
My Japanese Love Part 8 |
I am sorry you ended this story I loved it. I can see that it could branch off into a much lager story.
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| 2011-06-18 02:36:14 |
Defying My Family Part 4 |
Brad is my hero he has 3 women that love him. And as for your story I agree with Ghstrider it keep getting better and better. Keep it up. |
| 2011-06-17 00:10:32 |
Loving Lisas Pretty Pink Pussy Petals |
Great story I loved it and all of your other stories you are one of my favorite writers. keep up the great work. Maybe one day you can wite one for me. |
| 2011-06-14 20:54:37 |
Defying My family Part 3 |
Wow what next. How will they confront Russ and Mikey. Will Brad save the girls and himself? Will he break up the whole group of skinheads? Keep going Yet another 10/10 |
| 2011-06-12 23:40:14 |
Owning a Dominant Bitch - Complete |
Great story I am glad it ended with a happy ending.....Well for all but Brittany I give it a 10/10 |
| 2011-06-12 19:54:01 |
My Japanese Love Part 7 |
Ideals for the next part.....Marriage birth.College.Baby girl Amya.more love.family moves in.
Great story rate 10/10 keep going |
| 2011-06-11 21:29:27 |
Defying My Family |
I just love you stories. I also have a love for Asian women. I rate it a 10/10 |
| 2011-06-10 22:38:18 |
My Japanese Love Part 5 |
Akira had only started having sex with Alicia a short time before she had sex with AJ.
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| 2011-06-10 22:33:23 |
My Japanese Love Part 6 |
I loved the story. I hated that Amya had to die but please let Akira's parents give AJ & Akira their blessings. Love has to win don't let Hiro win even after his death. Have Akira get pregnant with a baby girl and name her Amya after her sister. |
| 2011-06-10 15:27:07 |
My Japanese Love Part 5 |
Alicia.Amya&Akira gives a whole new meaning to I need to call AAA lol.
Bi sexual virgin what a twist. I finally remembered to sign in to write my comments. So I hope AJ & Akira is not a one time thing. I also hope you will continue the story with many more parts passed Chapter 6. I love your story
I give you a strong 10/10. |
| 2011-06-04 01:48:45 |
jessica visits daddy |
Why the long gap in the story it took away from it. |
| 2011-06-04 01:04:49 |
Stories of Davis Hall 3: Fingered |
Poor Wiil his mom is getting married. And he was almost killed a few time and no marriage and a girlfriend that loves to tease him. |
| 2011-06-01 03:38:49 |
Finding a Treasure at Winn-Dixie 2 |
Please write more parks to your lovely story. |
| 2011-05-16 21:53:05 |
All because of one F'n party |
I am sorry but where was the romance. I didn't see any just a young girl getting in over her head . Romance has love feels tenderness. NOT RAPE |
| 2011-01-01 08:24:36 |
Bus ride home |
Yes please put some breaks in your story to make it eazer to read. It was a good start. Keep going you are doing better then I could. |
| 2010-12-05 10:20:30 |
Man of the House. |
Great story keep going give all the sluts what they asked for and what he needs.Have Belinda fall in love and want to be with him forever. |
| 2010-12-05 10:17:59 |
Man of the House. |
Great story keep going she asked for it give her and her little sluts what they want and what he needs.Then after his parents get back have Belinda fall in love with him and want to be his for life. |
| 2010-12-05 10:17:49 |
Man of the House. |
Great story keep going she asked for it give her and her little sluts what they want and what he needs.Then after his parents get back have Belinda fall in love with him and want to be his for life. |
| 2010-11-12 04:35:43 |
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I loved the story. I wish that laws and society would change so Incest was legal. My daughter has ask me many times to be with her i refused. Now it is too late she has married and moved away. |