||Stop Calling Me Old
||Great story and quite believable. I know where you're coming from. Keep writing.....
||Daddy and I
||The story is great but it would be much better and easier to read if you proof read it or got someone to check speling and grammer for you before submitting.
||DRESSED UP WITH NOWHERE TO GO
||Delightfully provocative. A sin? Yes! But so cunningly crafted and executed. More of the same. Please!!!
||My Sister the little seductress
||So believable it's frightening. This could happen to anyone. It would make any man who read it, want to stick with fantasy and masturbation. You certainly got the message across. Well done.
||Great story. The story lost nothing by keeping the characters anonymous. In fact it enhanced it. I like your work. Let's see more of it. Thanks again.
||A teenage boys fantasy comes true
||Don't be too critical with the details, boys and girls. This is a light, sexy story. I for one enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.