| Date |
Story title |
Comment |
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| 2010-11-01 16:31:16 |
Sister's Teenage Friends |
Needs some editing and it could be good. |
| 2010-11-01 16:29:20 |
Sister's Teenage Friends |
Needs some editing and it could be good. |
| 2010-10-01 02:22:07 |
I'm hot for my older sister |
This story was and is utterly lame. A continuation is not worth it. Length does not make up for lack of an actual story. |
| 2010-09-22 13:31:47 |
sex with my mom |
This was a purely shitty story. |
| 2010-09-22 12:40:29 |
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"Id have to ask the young, out-of-college kids at work. " I loled at least he knows where to go... though however the new ids are basically impossible to copy... >.> you gotta know who to bribe at the dmv nowadays. |
| 2010-09-22 12:32:22 |
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Good story. The build up was good, but the father switched gears a bit too fast however. |
| 2010-09-22 12:05:29 |
CFNM for my sister's |
An pretty decent start, but needs expansion. |
| 2010-09-22 11:59:36 |
Cock hunting |
Terrible... and too blatantly slutty. |
| 2010-09-22 11:54:11 |
geting in to moms pants |
Too quick and too short. Also in incest stories you can't jump so quickly into smut. |
| 2010-09-22 03:02:37 |
Caught by my sister |
Correct the mistake and add a bit. The story is too rushed just diving into the smut. Also write another chapter if your able. |
| 2010-09-22 02:53:27 |
Sex with my Hot elder sister |
Meh story... average but not enough detail. |
| 2010-09-22 02:49:10 |
Sister Catches Brother |
No... just... no... Was utterly blue balling. |
| 2010-09-22 02:46:51 |
Washing my Cousin's Ass |
A paltry attempt at a sex story and it seems to be written by a 10 year old, virgin's imagination. |
| 2010-09-22 02:46:30 |
Washing my Cousin's Ass |
A paltry attempt at a sex story and it seems to be written by a 10 year old, virgin's imagination. |
| 2010-09-22 02:39:34 |
Forbidden Chapter 1 |
Good start though a bit rushed and needs more more text to become a story... looking good so far however. |
| 2010-09-22 02:35:26 |
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Needs to be rewritten. |