Comments from annasdaddy
|2010-09-24 20:21:58||AlmaDelia's life||You could really really use some proofreading. How hard it is to at least make the effort? Couldn't even get into the content.|
|2010-09-24 20:27:36||Almadelia's night out||Not my cup of tea but fairly well written. Funny the last "anonymous reader" criticized people for leaving contact info then refused to do so themselves. I think I will leave contact info on my next story.|
|2010-09-24 20:34:48||Amy and her daddy. Part 1||I thought it was pretty good. Yes, it needs some work. Whoever said to "[not] ignore the critics" gave good advice. Keep trying. I just posted my first under the handle "annasdaddy." My title is lame but I hope you like the story.|
|2010-09-25 18:12:41||First meeting with StoneyPoint||I wonder why no one has commented on your story. I very much appreciate your comments on mine. I am in the process of revising it as well as writing others. I feel as though I know a decent amount about human as well as female anatomy. I mean, sometimes i know I know more than some women! I have heard of children masturbating from (at least) infancy and I certainly don't think there's anything wrong with that. I have also had girlfriends tell me that they experienced orgasms, usually through masturbation, at very young ages.
Even if, in a story, a character "punished" someone for something, that doesn't necessarily reflect upon my personal views which, I should point out, explicitly EXCLUDE sexual relations with children.
You have a good clear style, I look forward to reading more of your work.
|2010-09-25 18:18:59||The Dark||Now that's a damn good story. The long paragraph made my eyes blur a little, but over all you really had great pacing. It's wonderful the way you seem to resist sharing your fantasies but ultimately are compelled to share more and more. I love the internal struggle implicit in all of your work.