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2010-09-23 22:00:20 The POP-Jammer Well, I agree with everything the other commenters wrote. You really have to weed through quite a few stories to find one worth reading. I love to write and am trying to post (though it's taking forever to validate) though I don't really consider myself a strong writer, I just enjoy it. You obviously have a talent and care about your craft. Thanks for the effort, it didn't fall on deaf ears.
2010-09-23 22:30:03 A Walk In The Woods I though it was decent. I thought it could use a lot of punctuation correction and it had some verisimilitude issues, e.g., she was seven through most of the story but nine in one passage.
2010-09-24 20:08:56 A Daughter's Evolution Wow, thanks for the comments! First of all, yes, this is fiction. If I knew of someone really doing any of these things, I would (at the very least) tell the authorities. As I read through it I realize that I kind of rushed the last part a bit. I know that pre-pubescent girls can orgasm based on women telling me so (I'm a guy so I can't say from first hand experience). I realize some of the details get fuzzy and I'll revise that.

Thanks for the input!!!! Even if it's critical or negative (not to confuse the two).
2010-09-24 20:17:51 If this is plagiarism then you're an asshole. Otherwise it's pretty good. Consequently I won't give you a positive or negative rating.
2010-09-24 20:20:34 all about honey Barely merits a response. Does make me wonder about your sanity. Somehow intriguing in spite of its shortcomings.
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