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Date Story title Comment
2010-11-03 09:15:38 Bad dog Makes me wanna get a BIG dog again!
2010-11-05 08:33:35 Amish Devil\'s Ohio You REALLY need education about use of grammar, spelling, etc. It's like you can't speak english or something? Spoils a reader's enjoyment of what is probably a good story. My 4 yr old has better command of English!
2010-11-05 08:34:13 Amish Devil\'s Ohio You REALLY need education about use of grammar, spelling, etc. It's like you can't speak english or something? Spoils a reader's enjoyment of what is probably a good story. My 4 yr old has better command of English!
2010-11-13 04:32:03 Leeza The Teaser Thanks for the comments so far - see Leeza the Teaser 2 !
2010-12-19 04:26:43 a night in the woods I agree - grammar and spelling are dreadful! Also use paragraphs. Good potential but out there a bit! Try again - practise makes . . . better!
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