Comments from transgressyourself
|2010-09-12 01:12:21||Daddy Urges||Pretty good! I give a 3.5 outta 5. Points taken away cos some of the wording is awkward. Work on the grammer and keep it up!|
|2010-09-12 01:20:21||Daddy Urges 2||I'm reading your stories in order and giving my first impressions. Honestly, I thought part one was better. The grammer/wording make it difficult to read and it seems like you rushed this. More detail is needed. The story itself is pretty hot, but daddy-daughter sex almost always is if you're into it. But I think this is a rough draft at best.|
|2010-09-12 01:31:22||Daddy Urges 3||Agreed: Mom's roleplay was very hot. Gives me some ideas for stories of my own.
LOL moment: "Alice I want your ass?"
Still, not bad!
|2010-09-12 01:38:25||I love this story; I've read it atleast a dozen times and it doesn't get old. My only complaint is a general one - I hate it when the writer keeps on mentioning how big his dick/balls are. I don't like seeing a lot of cock in my porn and I certainly don't like reading descriptions of dicks and balls. Keep the details about the girls.|
|2010-09-13 21:46:51||Lisa @ 4||Hot, thanks for posting.|