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Comment |
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| 2010-09-01 21:59:08 |
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I laughed so hard reading this I pee'd a little. Looking forward to reading more from you. Thanks for sharing. Ha |
| 2010-09-01 23:17:14 |
Murder in Court. |
Maybe it would have been funnier if he had fucked them to death with the hammer. I'm just saying....I did smile thou. |
| 2010-09-01 23:37:28 |
The Leprechaun |
I wish you never tell a joke again, you made a good effort and the leprechaun enjoyed it even thou he didn't cum. All hell the joke stinks. |
| 2010-09-02 12:32:21 |
The Bookworm, the Dog, and Me |
Kids can be so nasty. |
| 2010-09-02 20:17:07 |
Gina gets it |
What the fuck, do people really do that. Ok go blow out another hole. And what's with the Merlot syringe. Wow you learn something new each day. Thank Mars its fiction. |
| 2010-09-02 20:27:18 |
My Life 6 - I enjoy Lynne and my sister together |
Okay it was good but bland. |
| 2010-09-02 22:58:42 |
Siblings With Privileges (re written) |
Thank Neptune its fiction |
| 2010-09-03 10:33:02 |
Sharing My Room With Sis 7: Secrets |
You really need to keep your eyes on your children if this us any indication of what goes on when your back us turned or your at work. Thank Jupiter its fiction. Looking forward to reading the series. Thanks for sharing your work. |
| 2010-09-03 19:22:16 |
And The Dog Made Three PT2 |
Gross but good story none the less, hope it was your original idea and not a copy CAT : I |
| 2010-09-03 19:44:57 |
And The Dog Made Three PT3 |
Boomer dude you stole someone's idea Still great story gross dog stuff |
| 2010-09-03 20:04:27 |
Female Scent - Animal Heat |
Teenage girls have sex with dogs because they can't talk and tell. Having sex with any kind of species besides your own shows mental disablitiy. You don't have to be a shrink to know that. There is enough dick and pussy in this world from willing individuals. People read, watch, sell sex everywhere so there's no excuse whatsoever. |
| 2010-09-03 21:39:55 |
And The Dog Made Three PT4 |
Once again good story if its your own. |
| 2010-09-04 10:35:45 |
Shaving Daddy |
This was all kinds of wrongs but good story. Thank Venus its fiction. |
| 2010-09-04 10:48:25 |
Question of a curious son |
Way to go son. WTF is wrong with parents allowing kids to do this. Thank Mercury its fiction. |
| 2010-09-29 11:22:13 |
Detention 5 |
Loved Series Detention 1-5 Why stop there, lots of avenues, develop B and Chris relationship or B could dump Chris (cut him off from fucking), and hook up with Jason who seems like a sweetheart. Loved characters and interactions. Pretty please write more, looking forward to more from you. Thanks for sharing your creations. |
| 2010-09-20 02:24:46 |
ANAL IN A CHRISTIAN HOME AY |
Start over and take your time with more details...good attempt for 1st time...being Anal is a good thing...PRACTICE |
| 2010-09-20 04:17:26 |
Friendship Bribe |
WTH was that, it was like putting bread on the toaster watching it brown and eating it as soon as it pops out ..Fix it...fast |
| 2010-09-20 04:28:49 |
The Log |
That was some dumb S??? No wonder your second to last in young. |
| 2010-09-20 04:54:08 |
Roger Buys A Boy - Part 2 |
Sick and twisted. Sometimes I want to be used like that. |
| 2010-09-20 08:16:32 |
My cute little boy 3 |
Good stuff...but to quick I feel like the wife left horny |
| 2010-09-20 08:49:02 |
She Loves Her Daddy |
He just snapps...what else please continue he has to teach her everything |
| 2010-09-20 22:48:03 |
Taryn's a whore |
I thought it was funny (and laughed) he paid for piss and shit, raggedy loose pussy from a whore. You've got the shock value down to a science. Don't you think it would take more money to clean that funky ass room. It all stinks, your idea, your characters, your story. Start over! |
| 2010-09-21 06:27:28 |
My Asian Domination pt. 4: no longer alone |
Good story. Can't wait to read more from you : ) |
| 2010-09-21 12:49:27 |
My New Neighbor's Pool |
Excellent Story. Made me very wet. Thanks, looking forward to reading more from you. |
| 2010-09-22 06:28:45 |
buck and dixie in middle of winter |
Needs some retouching,paragraphs,I get what your trying to say but its not reading right the way it should. Redo :b |
| 2010-09-22 06:42:46 |
me and auntie with a suprise |
It needs to be rewritten so it comes across as understandable. |
| 2010-09-22 06:57:25 |
Mejere pt.1 |
You have got my attention, it was short however and seemed rushed. Looking for more. |
| 2010-09-22 11:53:44 |
1 old lady and her lost change |
That was a funny story..I like it and your extremely entertaining don't stop writing |
| 2010-09-24 23:50:48 |
Foster care - my new home |
I get the impression she died. I think the story Is a sad, lonely, fucked up way for anyone to grow up feeling they had to trade one abuse for another. No sympathy for these foster abusers. Thanks its fiction. Good story and ideas...good read thanks for sharing your creations. |
| 2010-09-26 14:55:17 |
Detention |
Made me wet and ons girl |
| 2010-09-30 09:44:15 |
Farm Girl - part 1 |
Okay...ah where did that come from. Thanks I owe you one. Only turn off was you could have produced two amazing stories but you crammed both her farm life with the school rape. Y? |
| 2010-10-02 01:34:27 |
Likes Animals - part 1 |
Right then, carry on |
| 2010-10-27 09:58:56 |
The Evacuee |
GOOD STORY FELT REAL WHICH IS ALWAYS A PLUS DAVID AND BETH SEEM EAGER TO PLEASE ONE ANOTHER I LIKE HOW THE STORY GREW INNOCENT AND SWEET AND THIS IS HOW MOST LEARN ABOUT THE BIRDS AND BEES |
| 2010-10-27 09:59:37 |
The Evacuee |
GOOD STORY FELT REAL WHICH IS ALWAYS A PLUS DAVID AND BETH SEEM EAGER TO PLEASE ONE ANOTHER I LIKE HOW THE STORY GREW INNOCENT AND SWEET AND THIS IS HOW MOST LEARN ABOUT THE BIRDS AND BEES |
| 2010-10-27 10:02:51 |
The Evacuee |
GOOD STORY FELT REAL WHICH IS ALWAYS A PLUS DAVID AND BETH SEEM EAGER TO PLEASE ONE ANOTHER I LIKE HOW THE STORY GREW INNOCENT AND SWEET AND THIS IS HOW MOST LEARN ABOUT THE BIRDS AND BEES REALLY ENJOYED IT THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO PART II |
| 2010-10-27 10:03:34 |
The Evacuee |
GOOD STORY FELT REAL WHICH IS ALWAYS A PLUS DAVID AND BETH SEEM EAGER TO PLEASE ONE ANOTHER I LIKE HOW THE STORY GREW INNOCENT AND SWEET AND THIS IS HOW MOST LEARN ABOUT THE BIRDS AND BEES REALLY ENJOYED IT THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO PART II |
| 2010-10-27 10:10:03 |
The Evacuee |
GOOD STORY FELT REAL WHICH IS ALWAYS A PLUS DAVID AND BETH SEEM EAGER TO PLEASE ONE ANOTHER I LIKE HOW THE STORY GREW INNOCENT AND SWEET AND THIS IS HOW MOST LEARN ABOUT THE BIRDS AND BEES REALLY ENJOYED IT THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO PART II |
| 2010-10-28 08:13:24 |
My Life - young boys fool around |
GOOD READ LIKED THE BOY/BOY EXPERIMENTATION LOVED THE FACT THAT THEY WERE SO ACCEPTING OF ONE ANOTHER THAT\'S WHAT HIT ME THE MOST GOOD INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS LIKED THE FLOW OF THE STORY THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU |
| 2010-10-28 08:59:24 |
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I HAVE TO SAY THE COMMENTS WERE MORE ENTERTAINING THAN YOUR STORY DON\'T GET ME WRONG I GET WHAT THE STORY\'S ABOUT I THINK SOME OF YOUR WORKS ARE GREAT BUT THIS ONE NOT SO MUCH THE AGES ARE WRONG THE ERRORS YOU COULD REDO OR NOT JUST SAYING THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU |
| 2010-10-28 09:00:30 |
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I HAVE TO SAY THE COMMENTS WERE MORE ENTERTAINING THAN YOUR STORY DON\'T GET ME WRONG I GET WHAT THE STORY\'S ABOUT I THINK SOME OF YOUR WORKS ARE GREAT BUT THIS ONE NOT SO MUCH THE AGES ARE WRONG THE ERRORS YOU COULD REDO OR NOT JUST SAYING THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU |
| 2010-10-29 08:06:45 |
The Evacuee part 2 |
EARLIER POST BY YOUR TRULY |
| 2010-10-29 08:17:00 |
The Evacuee chapter 4 |
NOW DAVID HAS A FEW.TRICKS UP HIS SLEEVE HE CAN SHOW BETH BUT I THINK SHE\'S LONG GONE GOOD STORY LIKE THE WAY THINGS PROGRESS THANKS FOR SHARING READING ON |
| 2010-10-30 08:13:37 |
Dealing with my sister’s disability |
Not a sexy story. Good story tragic but good I don\'t think its about sex so much as a perverse bond formed by sister and brother due to the physical and emotional abuse at the hands of a drunken father. It reads true. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to reading more from you. |
| 2010-11-02 23:25:53 |
Becoming a man |
SHORT AND UNBELIEVING |
| 2010-11-02 23:44:31 |
Shaun's Story |
YES, GREAT START. WHAT HAPPENED MONSTER JUMPED THRU YOUR WINDOW AND FINISHED STORY AFTER HE ATE DANIEL WHILE YOU WERE PUKING. REDO YOU HAVE POTENTIAL IN A WEIRD WAY |
| 2010-11-04 00:19:23 |
Buying the Family Next Door |
I GIVE YOU 4 PUSSIES UP FOR BEING A VERY CLEVER YOUNG AUTHOR THAT CAPTIVATED MY ATTENTION WOULD HAVE GIVEN 5 PUSSIES UP BUT IT DEMORALIZES WOMEN EVEN DUMB SLUTTY WOMEN DESERVE SOME KINDNESS AND RESPECT AFTER ALL GARY WASN\'T FAIR NO YOU HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD WITH THIS ONE LOVED EVERY CRAZY WORD OF IT CHARACTERS, DIALOG, DETAILED DESCRIPTIONS PERFECT |
| 2010-11-04 21:46:27 |
Show Daddy |
DON\'T BELIEVE 15 YEAR OLD DAUGHTER KNOWS ABSOLUTELY NOTHING ABOUT MALE FLUIDS TOO SHORT TOO NASTY DO IT AGAIN DADDY |
| 2010-11-08 16:04:28 |
Cave Trap Part 1 |
VERY SEXY, GREAT READ. WRITING, DIALOG AND DESCRIPTION ON POINT. LOVE IT, CAN\'T WAIT TO READ MORE, THANKS FOR SHARING. |
| 2010-11-08 17:01:49 |
Cave Trap Part 3 |
THOSE WERE SPLENDID STORIES MADE ME CUM TWICE LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE OF YOUR CREATIONS THANKS FOR SHARING. |
| 2010-11-10 12:54:24 |
Question of a curious son part two |
Very hot indeed, would\'ve loved to watch. |
| 2010-12-12 21:35:49 |
GOING TO HEAVEN |
Well I have to agree with Sarah, loved this one. Thanks for sharing |
| 2010-12-12 21:39:00 |
Give me a blowjob |
Very good. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2010-12-18 06:14:22 |
Surprise From Big Brother 3 |
WELL, WHERE'S PART FOUR |
| 2010-12-18 07:00:31 |
Slutty Slut |
YUP, PERFECT TITLE FOR THE STORY |
| 2010-12-19 02:46:44 |
Playing Away From Home. |
GOOD STORY...NICE PLOT AND SEX SCENARIOS. JEAN IS A TRUE SLUT. FOR SOME REASON I DIDN'T WANT A HAPPY ENDING |
| 2010-12-19 02:46:57 |
Playing Away From Home. |
GOOD STORY...NICE PLOT AND SEX SCENARIOS. JEAN IS A TRUE SLUT. FOR SOME REASON I DIDN'T WANT A HAPPY ENDING |
| 2010-12-19 02:48:00 |
Playing Away From Home. |
GOOD STORY...NICE PLOT AND SEX SCENARIOS. JEAN IS A TRUE SLUT. FOR SOME REASON I DIDN'T WANT A HAPPY ENDING |
| 2010-12-19 02:49:17 |
Playing Away From Home. |
GOOD STORY...NICE PLOT AND SEX SCENARIOS. JEAN IS A TRUE SLUT. FOR SOME REASON I DIDN'T WANT A HAPPY ENDING |
| 2011-03-24 08:54:02 |
A friend in need |
VERY SWEET STORY, ROMANTIC YOUNG COUPLING... LOVED IT. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU. THANKS FOR SHARING |
| 2011-03-24 08:54:42 |
A friend in need |
VERY SWEET STORY, ROMANTIC YOUNG COUPLING... LOVED IT. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU. THANKS FOR SHARING |
| 2011-03-24 09:42:46 |
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GREAT LOVE STORY, IT CAME ACROSS SO REAL AND CHARACTERS WERE GREAT. COULD'VE BEEN WITH MOTHER/SON, OLDER/YOUNG, LESBIAN COUPLE...ANY COMBINATION. WELL WRITTEN, LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU. THANKS FOR SHARING. |
| 2011-08-07 20:20:37 |
Ranchland - Chapter 1 |
GOOD STORY....WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF HE HAD SEX WITH HER VAGINALLY |
| 2011-08-07 20:57:02 |
Ranchland - Chapter 2 |
GOOD STORY LOVELY ROMANCE...FINALLY HE GOT HER SNATCH. I LIKE YOUR LOVE INTERACTION WITH THE CHARACTERS, THEY ARE THOROUGHLY DETAILED AND HAS GOTTEN ME VERY WET IN THE PROCESS. LOOK FORWARD TO FIND OUT WHAT'S NEXT WITH THE KIN FOLK. THANKS FOR SHARING. |
| 2011-08-07 21:48:34 |
Ranchland - (The real) Chapter 3 |
GOOD FINISH....WHAT GIVES WITH THE PERIOD SEX, (TO EACH HIS OWN) SHE HAS TWO OTHER HOLES THAT COULD SATISFY UNCLE BEN. THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR CREATIVITY. |
| 2011-08-13 22:43:39 |
In the Flesch |
OMG, I came halfway reading this. So good yet so very bad. I'm gonna read it again and again. Thanks for sharing. |