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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-06-08 08:36:51 |
Karen and Laci Chapter 6: The Silent Moon |
Tori - Reading this on my phone because I am addicted.
Thanks for the beautiful descriptives which are harder to put into the story when its from the male viewpoint..
Like that this was an extended series.
You are now one of my favorite authors. So very articulate I can feel every touch of every finger. |
| 2013-06-07 21:56:47 |
My life (9 yo - 10 yo) |
Sorry, gave it a negative.
Reading this is like reading one of the police reports my older brother brings home. Dry and clinical.
Needs lot of work. |
| 2013-06-07 08:05:24 |
Karen and Laci, Chapter 1 "Her Daughter's Friend" |
This is an excellent series. Love the narrative and writing.
Easy to read on my phone during lunch.
For young teen love, may I suggest you look at some of my stories. |
| 2013-06-07 07:59:23 |
Susie-Lea, Chapt 1 |
Thanks for the good comments and positive votes.
Chap 2 tommorow, Chap 3 next day.
Positive votes appreciated and keeps stories in the top 20 |
| 2013-06-06 22:28:36 |
Mika, Chap 8 |
For my regular readers: I have several stories which are unfinished; will try to work on them Jun-Jul 13.
Meanwhile, upcoming is a 4 part series (as of right now) about little Susie-Lea whom I met at my eye doctors. |
| 2013-05-24 08:52:48 |
Mom and son fun |
no need to even consider looking at the other chapters.
crap writing makes it not interesting. |
| 2013-05-24 08:52:06 |
Mom and son fun |
if you do not know how to describe a woman middle as a waist, not a waste, you do not need to be writing.
This looks like it was written by a 10 year old. |
| 2013-05-23 11:21:44 |
Mika, Chapt 2 |
We see the idiots are trolling stories and leaving notes. |
| 2013-05-23 11:19:03 |
Mika, Chap 1 |
Constructive critique always welcome..
However, you should read the story before complaining. There are no nine yr olds with "ample breasts". The character Mika has "apple sized" tits.
Her eleven year old friend has bigger tits. Sharon is based on a girl whom I know. God gave her lovely boobs and she lets me play with them. |
| 2013-05-22 21:45:27 |
Jr.high Stories |
LOL - he has nothing posted.
Come read my stories if you love Jr High |
| 2013-05-20 11:44:25 |
Gaby (Chap 4) |
Update: Chapter 5 is in the works. Hope to have it ready by Summer 2013.
Been out of country for a while. |
| 2013-05-13 20:04:32 |
Molly - Prologue |
Shorter paragraph would make it a lot easier to read. |
| 2013-01-03 21:49:13 |
Gaby (Chap 3) |
Thanks lil-Pam. Taking my time with Chap 5 to make it more interesting for you. |
| 2013-01-02 20:53:27 |
Gaby (Chap 3) |
Thanks for the good comments.
Seems we are on the same track. Mother comes into play in the next chapter.
It is Part I of 2 parts. You have to read it to appreciate Chapter 5.
See you there.
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| 2013-01-02 20:48:58 |
Gaby (Chap 2) |
Thanks for the good comments.
More cuming. |
| 2013-01-02 20:46:30 |
Gaby (Chap 1) |
Thanks for the nice comments.
For anon 2013-01-01. Glad it brought back memories.
For other, if you think 5 yr olds don't see porn, you need to go to an elementary school. My girl friend used to help out with 1st graders and kindergartners and the older kids just loved to teach them how to use the computers. Which meant watching a whole lot more than 'Angry Birds'.
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| 2012-12-31 21:48:21 |
Gaby (Chap 1) |
For anon 12-29. If I got you wet; you made my day.
Please enjoy Chap 2 & 3. They go together.
Feel free to leave me a private message, if you like story.
(Ted) |
| 2012-12-31 21:44:42 |
Gaby (Chap 2) |
Hope you enjoyed. More in Chap 3
Positive votes appreciated |
| 2012-12-20 16:55:33 |
A MOTHER'S LOVE |
I only read the first few pages. Have to come back for the rest.
I love the exquisite details description.
You have just become my favorite author
Ted |
| 2012-12-17 09:11:40 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 4 |
Very nice - kudos.
I know long stories are a big effort.
Ted |
| 2012-12-17 09:08:50 |
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Jeez, does this series have a purpose? |
| 2012-12-09 20:47:53 |
Alexandria (Chap 1) |
Continued in Chap 2.
Chap 2 now posted.
Enjoy! |
| 2012-12-07 08:21:22 |
Emily (Chap 5) |
Thanks, anon below.
If I got you wet, you made my day!
You may also like my Strawberry series.
Just click on my author name.
(more chapters cuming)
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| 2012-12-06 20:18:34 |
Emily (Chap 4) |
Thanks for Positives !! |
| 2012-12-06 18:11:28 |
Emily (Chap 3) |
There are some Dark chapters in the Emily series.
Leave them in or soften them up???
Your opinion matters. |
| 2012-12-06 18:09:58 |
Emily (Chap 3) |
Thank you for positive votes.
Per request will update the Emily series and others where chapters have disappeared.
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| 2012-12-06 07:11:04 |
Emily (Chap 1) |
Yes, most of Chap 1 & 2 are true.
From there less so.
Positive votes help.
thanks. |
| 2012-12-05 13:34:39 |
Fire Class Part Two |
Style suggestion: Use much shorter paragraphs to make it easier to read. |
| 2012-12-03 17:02:36 |
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It is available now. (Sorry, forgot to hit the post button)
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| 2012-12-03 14:58:20 |
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Christina gets a cum bath in Chap 6.
Need lots of positive votes if you want preteen stories. |
| 2012-12-03 14:55:57 |
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Only 48 votes? How lame is that?
Need more positive votes to keep me working. |
| 2012-12-03 14:54:43 |
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OK guys, we need more positve votes.
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| 2012-12-03 14:52:48 |
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Chapter 7 has a bit more Mika for you.
Chapter 8 is a change of pace with 3 new girls. |
| 2012-11-26 22:10:36 |
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Update: If you like little Christina, you will like some of the later chapters which focus on her by reader's request.
Sorry, about website having punctuation problems.
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| 2012-11-26 22:10:32 |
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Update: If you like little Christina, you will like some of the later chapters which focus on her by reader's request.
Sorry, about website having punctuation problems.
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| 2012-11-26 22:04:46 |
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Chapter 6 has been posted.
Akin meets some scout girls (Part I)
Christina meets some scout daddies and other guys (Part II)
wait on it.
Thanks for the good comments |
| 2012-11-26 10:04:02 |
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Chapter 5 is posted.
Wait till Christina goes to her Pinkies girl scout slumber party. |
| 2012-11-19 11:06:11 |
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Thanks for the remarks.
Except doofus of course. |
| 2012-11-07 22:01:04 |
Strawberry (Chap 9) |
If you are new to the Strawberry series, start at Chapter 1.
Enjoy |
| 2011-11-14 17:18:11 |
Alicia Saves Her Mother's Job |
Well it lends itself to a nice continuation.
Co-worker, her daughter and the secretary.
Mom and daughter together. |
| 2011-11-14 17:16:12 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 03 |
Positive vote for a good continuation with a twist. |
| 2011-11-14 10:16:58 |
Alisia (Chap 11) |
This actually chapter 12 in the series.
The other parts are in the Twins series. |
| 2011-11-14 09:34:21 |
Tonight |
Positive for story; but hard to read formatting. |
| 2011-11-11 08:25:29 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 02 |
Your stories and mine are in the top 3 this week.
Too cool.
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| 2011-11-09 15:04:29 |
Maria Gonzales (Chap 2) |
Please don't post crazy numbers.
Thanks Bella.
See Chap 3. |
| 2011-11-07 11:33:20 |
Maria Gonzales (Chap 2) |
Maria's story continues.
I am also testing posting one chap under True Story versus Fantasy.
Positive votes appreciated. thanks. |
| 2011-11-07 11:30:21 |
Maria Gonzales (Chap 1) |
A change of pace from my usual stuff.
Chap 1 & 2 posted.
I restricted ananomous comments because of to much crap of some of the other postings. |
| 2011-11-01 08:54:05 |
Strawberry (Chap 7) |
For NGSalem. Ha, ha. Good comments. Made me laugh because Dori is the actual name of my boss. She is a really nice lady. She will not get killed yet. Have to spend Wednesday lunch with her and learn how she can make guys cum on command.
thanks,
Ted |
| 2011-10-31 18:59:46 |
The Twins (Chap 9) |
For anon who puts his finger on the key board and just prints lines of letters.
Please stop. It does not help and just makes you look dumb. |
| 2011-10-31 18:45:19 |
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Excellent story so far. Just finished part one.
They are hard to read on the computer because of the lack of spacing; however, they read great on an i-phone because it compresses the width of the lines.
You may want to read some of mine, if you like little darlings.
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| 2011-10-30 23:15:21 |
Strawberry (Chap 7) |
If you got all the way to the comments, I hope you enjoyed.
This one was 'hard' work.
Positive votes are appreciated.
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| 2011-10-20 09:09:18 |
Amanda (Chap 2) |
Chap 2 of this series for my little girl lovers.
thanks for positive votes. |
| 2011-10-20 09:07:54 |
Strawberry (Chap 6) |
Strawberry series is still in the Top voted.
Thanks much.
Working on the next Chapter.
Remember it will be Friday and poor Tom has to stay home
to put up with Beth, Barb and Brit.
How bad a day can that be? |
| 2011-10-14 12:15:58 |
Amanda (Chap 1) |
Just for my little girl loving friends.
Other chapters are in re-work and will be posted soon.
Comments are always welcome.
Enjoy. |
| 2011-10-14 12:11:29 |
Strawberry (Chap 6) |
A little change of pace for those who like teens.
I will re-post the Amanda series as I get it updated.
It was deleted before.
Hope you enjoy.
Thanks for positive votes and comments.
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| 2011-10-06 10:50:51 |
Strawberry (Chap 5) |
My computer burped. Chapter 5 may be posted twice.
It's the same story.
Enjoy. |
| 2011-10-05 23:23:43 |
Strawberry (Chap 4) |
A teaser update. Chap 5 is nearly done.
Has a twist, which some may like / some not.
Yes, I did not forget about Strawberry.
Over 10K reads as of today and only 4 negative votes.
Thanks ladies and gents.
I had seriously thought of stopping, because some material is similar.
Ted |
| 2011-10-01 21:58:52 |
Strawberry (Chap 4) |
For CuteyKat and Lolitalover.
Enjoy and thanks for the suggestions.
Ted |
| 2011-09-23 09:05:16 |
Strawberry (Chap 3) |
Thanks babe!
Next Chap will probably take a couple of weeks.
Need to do some real work besides writing.
Linda and her mom plus Janet is probably a good Chapter.
First, want to explore the neighbor's kids some more.
Oh, the possiblilities. |
| 2011-09-22 16:06:50 |
Strawberry (Chap 2) |
Thanks, CuteyKat.
Chap 3 for you.
If you write stories, let me know your handle.
I will try to find CuteyKat. |
| 2011-09-22 16:03:38 |
Strawberry (Chap 2) |
Thanks for the comments.
Hope you like Chap 3 - published today.
Next one will take a bit longer. Trying to work more detail into it.
Spanking? Little bit of rough stuff?
Not sure, we love little girls - not to hurt them and make them hate men. |
| 2011-09-20 19:50:42 |
Strawberry (Chap 1) |
Thanks for the comments.
You may have seen some suggestions in the newer stories.
Hope you like Chap 2.
Boo to the 15 idiot who voted negative. |
| 2011-09-16 11:18:23 |
The Twins (Chap 9) |
Hope u like the continuation.
Thanks for the suggestions on where to take the stories.
(For those who asked me to e-mail my stories, I have done so. You can contact in the chat.) |
| 2011-09-12 11:00:47 |
The Twins, Chap 7 (New) |
New Chap posted 9/12
Let me know what you think. |
| 2011-09-05 09:52:40 |
Bath Time with My Stepfather |
Not bad - some women really get off on being mistreated. |
| 2011-09-05 09:26:45 |
The Twins, Chap 1 (Repost) |
The new chapter was accidentaly posted as Chap 5 (NEW). Its really chap 6.
All the chapters are now on-line.
Chapter 7 is in the works. |
| 2011-09-05 09:24:29 |
The Twins, Chap 3 (Repost) |
Note: The NEW chapter was accidentally posted as Chap 5 (NEW). Its really chapter 6.
Enjoy and please vote positive.
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| 2011-09-05 09:21:25 |
The Twins, Chap 5 (NEW) |
Hope you enjoyed Friday night with the Twins.
Thanks for voting Positive.
New Chapter with Debbie & Diane is in the works. |
| 2011-09-05 09:19:44 |
The Twins, Chap 4 (Repost) |
Series continues.
Thanks for voting positive. |
| 2011-09-05 08:59:22 |
The Twins, Chap 5 (Repost) |
The next chapter is NEW. It should be titled Chapter 6. typo
Thanks for voting. |
| 2011-09-05 08:57:30 |
The Twins, Chap 2 (Repost) |
Don't forget to vote. Thanks. |
| 2011-09-05 08:56:39 |
The Twins, Chap 1 (Repost) |
I hope you like the Twins.
The new chapter is actually Chapter 6 (not 5) typo. |
| 2011-08-10 09:51:24 |
Amy, Chap 7 |
The story had a good ending. Your first sci-fi attempt is OK.
Your pre-teen series are hot too.
Can't help but to love those cum swallowing little girls. |
| 2011-07-29 09:11:54 |
Amy, Chap 3 |
Lolita - see my chat answers. |
| 2011-07-29 03:56:52 |
Amy, Chap 1 |
Thanks Lolitalover.
My first attempt at science fiction. Chap 1 - 3 introduce Amy. So everybody hang in there. It will get better when the Cyborgs take over.
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| 2011-07-27 13:04:00 |
Amy, Chap 2 |
fireengine8
Trying my hand at science fiction with older characters.
More to come next month.
Leave comments. |
| 2011-07-27 12:57:37 |
Amy, Chap 1 |
Glad to see you are back. Your other stories were fantastic before the idiots deleted them all.
Hope this is just the first chapter in Amy's adventures. |
| 2011-06-23 17:20:33 |
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Not sure why there is a big empty space. Probably something I did.
Oops.
Anonymous below - how far did you before you decided it was crap?
Bet u were stroking all the way. |
| 2011-06-23 17:15:02 |
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From Author. The next chapter introduces the Twins. They are seven years old at first but age as you follow them through Sherri and the Twins, Chapt 2. (No Chap 1). Then they appear is the Alisia series.
If two seven year olds are too young for you, don't read and then whine about it in the comments.
Thanks to all of you who have given positive votes and comments. |
| 2011-06-23 12:01:01 |
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See all of Rachel in the next chapter. |
| 2011-06-23 12:00:30 |
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Had to take a one chapter walk on the dark side.
Rachel brings Uncle Ted back to his senses. |
| 2011-01-11 21:58:21 |
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KD - OK for you - See Chapter 10 (?) of Emily and her mom..
New mom who joins in.
PS - don't hit the enter button so much |
| 2011-01-09 08:33:53 |
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Quigley - reading your series on my Blackberry. Sure makes work go by faster (ha ha)
Take a look at my stories.
Thanks, |
| 2011-01-09 08:28:31 |
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For Anonymous 01/02/11:
I hope you enjoy the twins in Chapter 10. Six years old.
Let us know. |
| 2010-12-05 14:16:15 |
Andrea |
Good start - keep them cuming.
If u like this age group - look at fireengine8 stories. |
| 2010-12-01 11:44:30 |
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From Author.
Posted Chap 4 , 5 , 6, on Dec 1.
waiting validation.
enjoy
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| 2010-11-29 12:50:48 |
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from fireengine8
New Series - meet Samantha - 10 yr old.
cuming soon. |
| 2010-11-22 15:10:14 |
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Good story. (Needs some spelling/grammar attention. Try shorter para for readability)
For the 10 - 15 age group, see my posts. |
| 2010-10-26 10:18:40 |
the girl. 1 |
Had to stop after first para. What awful writing, spelling, etc.
Written by a third grader??? |
| 2010-10-25 16:56:56 |
Show Daddy |
I hate stories full of typos. Lets all go with age 5.
Dialoge sounds like a teen - needs spell check. |
| 2010-09-08 10:19:08 |
Daddys' little sweetheart |
Agree, good start. Daddy going crazy is weird; but why not.
And the haters read it to the end and then complain. Her age is in the first para; you can stop there fools. |