Comments from fireengine8
|2010-09-08 10:19:08||Daddys' little sweetheart||Agree, good start. Daddy going crazy is weird; but why not.
And the haters read it to the end and then complain. Her age is in the first para; you can stop there fools.
|2010-10-25 16:56:56||Show Daddy||I hate stories full of typos. Lets all go with age 5.
Dialoge sounds like a teen - needs spell check.
|2010-10-26 10:18:40||the girl. 1||Had to stop after first para. What awful writing, spelling, etc.
Written by a third grader???
|2010-11-22 15:10:14||Good story. (Needs some spelling/grammar attention. Try shorter para for readability)
For the 10 - 15 age group, see my posts.
|2010-11-29 12:50:48||from fireengine8
New Series - meet Samantha - 10 yr old.