||I find it funny that the majority of negative comments are from "Anonymous" some of these people are just hiding behind it.
Good story, totally different from the first 3 though. Which I really liked.
||Liked the story series. I especially liked the twist of the mum being a bit of a bitch. She was clearly in charge the whole time. I think you could do a lot with that theme. Its different which is what worked for me. Please try to avoid the pregnancy route. Its such a boner killer and usually signals to me that the writer has run out of ideas. I know I might sound big headed, its not supposed to come over like that. I am just a fan of what you have done so far.
||Absolutly fantastic. I always think there isnt enough Mon/Son stories on here. You going to do a 3rd part?
||Everything for my Sister Chp. 1
||Good story, I dont really pay attention to Grammar and Spelling issues. Its not why i read the stories. Its all about the situation and the picture you paint. You seem to do that pretty well here.
||Me and Milly - Part 3: Her House
||Any thoughts on where the series could go? Would love to hear thoughts.
||A Summer Friendship Part 2
||Really nice story devoloping. I cant wait to read the rest.
||Dad and his Girls
||Thanks again for the comments everyone. I had the girls in my head at about those ages. But the reason I left it blank was for the reader to fill in for themselves. That's why I left the descriptions of them vaguer too. Ive started on the second instalment after getting such good feed back. After reading a few times I can see what I need to change.
||Dad and his Girls
||Thanks for the comments so far. I really do need to work on my spelling and Grammar. I am dyslexic so I tend to get words and things mixed up. I am going to try much harder for the next one tho. Any thoughts on where the stories would like to go in the future. I have some Ideas. R.E the Psychic/Physic thing. I just spell checked blindly. Apologies