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Story title |
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| 2011-08-16 08:06:03 |
Caught IV |
I find it funny that the majority of negative comments are from "Anonymous" some of these people are just hiding behind it.
Good story, totally different from the first 3 though. Which I really liked. |
| 2011-08-03 04:20:47 |
Caught III |
Liked the story series. I especially liked the twist of the mum being a bit of a bitch. She was clearly in charge the whole time. I think you could do a lot with that theme. Its different which is what worked for me. Please try to avoid the pregnancy route. Its such a boner killer and usually signals to me that the writer has run out of ideas. I know I might sound big headed, its not supposed to come over like that. I am just a fan of what you have done so far. |
| 2011-08-01 07:47:51 |
Caught II |
Absolutly fantastic. I always think there isnt enough Mon/Son stories on here. You going to do a 3rd part? |
| 2011-07-28 06:07:46 |
Everything for my Sister Chp. 1 |
Good story, I dont really pay attention to Grammar and Spelling issues. Its not why i read the stories. Its all about the situation and the picture you paint. You seem to do that pretty well here. |
| 2011-07-12 08:28:41 |
Me and Milly - Part 3: Her House |
Any thoughts on where the series could go? Would love to hear thoughts. |
| 2011-07-11 08:29:41 |
A Summer Friendship Part 2 |
Really nice story devoloping. I cant wait to read the rest. |
| 2011-05-19 02:29:55 |
Dad and his Girls |
Thanks again for the comments everyone. I had the girls in my head at about those ages. But the reason I left it blank was for the reader to fill in for themselves. That's why I left the descriptions of them vaguer too. Ive started on the second instalment after getting such good feed back. After reading a few times I can see what I need to change. |
| 2011-05-18 02:45:48 |
Dad and his Girls |
Thanks for the comments so far. I really do need to work on my spelling and Grammar. I am dyslexic so I tend to get words and things mixed up. I am going to try much harder for the next one tho. Any thoughts on where the stories would like to go in the future. I have some Ideas. R.E the Psychic/Physic thing. I just spell checked blindly. Apologies |