Comments from brianmullons

Date Story title Comment
2010-08-09 08:49:15 Sharing My Room With Sis: Sharing My Computer Loved it, but please stop rushing the ends, a little bit of aftermath would go a long way.
2010-08-15 15:01:54 The sex joke and how it really happened Fabulous story, has a truthful ring to it
2010-08-15 15:12:03 New family Too quick not enough build-up, but good story
2010-08-16 06:29:18 Dave finds his sole mate in the last place he would have thought nice one. aside from a few bloopers, it was very enjoyable
2013-10-17 12:08:22 My daughter fantasy becomes reality Thank you for the positive comments. gives me the incentive to write the follow up and i will note the constructive criticisms ;-) B.