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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2010-11-17 18:34:32 |
American Wasteland #1 |
Reminds me of the Deathlands book series |
| 2010-11-16 06:16:57 |
Tribe |
I see that putz chilldude74 is using the comments as his personal billboard again.
It was a good story, but a little hard to read because of the lack of emotion. Flat, no excitement to it at all. |
| 2010-11-12 18:43:13 |
How I Met My Wife 5 |
It\'s on here because I read some stories on the site for entertainment. You would be amazed at the quality of some of the writing. It\'s on here because this site maintains the classification of \"True Story\" and \"Romance\", which is what the stories are. |
| 2010-11-09 07:08:35 |
How I Met My Wife 2 |
I thought the punctuation was okay. Sure could have used a few paragraph breaks, though. |
| 2010-11-05 19:35:38 |
How I Met My Wife 5 |
Yes, my friend, it is. |
| 2010-11-05 19:35:07 |
How I Met My Wife 5 |
Yes, my friend. It is. |
| 2010-11-05 19:34:07 |
How I Met My Wife 5 |
My wife says, \"We had our times, and some were tough, but we\'ve lived a dream.\"
I say, \"I just gave you a few of the good parts. There\'s been some that weren\'t so good; it wasn\'t all roses and the yellow brick road. What made the difference is that we did it together.\" It\'s all true, my friend, it does happen. |
| 2010-10-02 05:47:06 |
Instant Messenger 1 |
I normally don't care much for stories told in 3rd person, but it fit the setting in this one. Not bad, not bad at all. |
| 2010-09-30 05:30:15 |
A Family Thing part 2 |
You tell a good tale, nicely paced and finishing well. I don't know that Live should get pregnant again ... they seemed to be pretty much in agreement about the vasectomy, and it fit the storyline well. You write what you write - thoroughly enjoyable. |
| 2010-09-29 07:45:34 |
Jayson |
Good, quick, story. I thought the stripping in the mirror to be a little contrived, but it still worked well.
One more thing, you readers leave a comment. Pos/Neg votes are good, but the comments are what helps improve the story. |
| 2010-09-29 07:36:47 |
A Trip to Grand dad's farm - part 1 |
Budding domination/submission. Not quite sure of what to do yet, but you can see it happening. Very good, sir, very good. |
| 2010-09-26 11:05:07 |
How I met my wife |
Get a life, chilldude74. What a putz. |
| 2010-09-26 07:53:32 |
Power Tools Day 01 |
The story's too robotic, just like the character. Lost me about halfway through. |
| 2010-09-25 09:45:18 |
How I Met My Wife - 4 |
I see my ratings going progressively downhill, but the comments are (mostly) positive. I can't figure this out. Well, if you want it, there's one more story. Lemme know. |
| 2010-09-23 23:05:55 |
How I Met My Wife 2 |
There's a "How I Met My Wife 3 - Interlude" in the Information section. I'm not real good at the classifications.
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| 2010-09-13 21:58:15 |
How I Met My Wife 3 - Interlude |
I'd appreciate a comment or five !!! |
| 2010-09-08 19:52:20 |
How I Met My Wife 2 |
I see what you mean. Sorry, I wasn't even thinking about it. |
| 2010-09-06 12:33:49 |
How I met my wife |
You all have been really kind. Thanks so much, from both of us. Second installment soon! |