Comments from Jswab

Date Story title Comment
2011-09-21 05:37:57 Amber, Fucked Like An Animal <i>I have to admit, I did get off to this story, but, at the same time, I'm disgusted. A true story such as this...I'm almost ashamed your friend actually let you post it.</i>
2011-09-21 05:40:27 Amber, Fucked Like An Animal 2 - The second rape I'm glad the third story hasn't been posted yet, as these just anger me. I understand her friend didn't know he raped her, but, still...she just left her there like "fuck you, family comes first!" Now, before people bash me for what I'm about to say, I understand how frightening it can be when this happens, but she should've hit or kicked him. Scratch his face, kick him in the balls, or something.
2011-09-21 05:44:49 Tori, the highschool cumslut Good story, but a few things. For people talking, use quotes, not apostrophes. Why is mind control a tag? At the start of "David had just put his books in his locker", and all the way down, there needs to be a break after one of the periods, as it looks like just one big paragraph. The more cluttered it is, the less good it looks.
2011-10-16 03:13:46 Girls at the beach I would proof read this, because you have quite a few grammar errors, which makes it more difficult to masturbate to.
2011-11-16 17:17:45 Sleeping with Jorja (Part1) I liked the story, and I vote that you continue. However, you may want to change the title to "Raping Jorja", as sleeping with sounds like she consented.