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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-01-17 17:00:53 |
First Time i Had Sex |
Interesting! It would be something new to see more "first time" true stories on here but it's always better with more details. Don't fret. I'm jumping around in your stories and read this one because of the lower rating. Don't be conceerned about it. It's really pretty good and would be more so with details. |
| 2013-01-17 16:55:16 |
The Valedictorian Part One |
Awesome beach story with a surprise ending. I'm assuming it will take up here in the next one. Keep going! |
| 2013-01-01 14:51:13 |
Closing the Deal |
Don't worry about getting "to" and "too" mixed up man. I have the same problem when I get on a roll writing. Your context is great! Keep it up. |
| 2012-11-14 23:41:36 |
Other Men's Wives - His Sluts Chapter 12 |
Thanks for all the great comments. It's been a while since I posted here but I'll have to renew my interest in this series. I have two more chapters that have not been posted and I'll see where it goes from there. Thanks readers. I'll work on the mistakes. |
| 2011-07-16 22:09:39 |
my submissive wife 1 |
Great wife story. It's always good to hear about submissive wives and what they will do. Would love to hear more! |
| 2011-07-16 21:59:02 |
Other Men's Wives - His Sluts - Chapter 11 |
I apologize for the long delay in submitting the next chapter but my job has me tied up 7 days a week and long hours right now. I assure you there is more to come! Thanks for all my loyal readers and the comments. |
| 2011-04-25 17:26:53 |
moon light delight |
It's an excellent story line and more so if it's true. However, please do re-read and check your sentence structure. We all make mistakes, some are created by the format used for these stories (they don't always appear in the format submitted), but just getting your sentence structure right will help tremendously. Keep writing. Love the story. Hope your wife has many more adventures. |
| 2011-04-18 22:44:39 |
Angel Gets Double Stuffed |
Excellent story. Love threesomes and exhibitionist wives. |
| 2011-04-18 22:07:08 |
Other Men's Wives - His Sluts - Chapter 10 |
I sincerely appreciate your constructive comments. My error definitely. I will strive to improve. I just wish more would comment accordingly. |
| 2010-12-18 17:29:53 |
not the first |
Hey man. Know how you feel. Comments are always the best. I write for my own pleasure and like to know what others think but whether they like it or not is immaterial to me. |
| 2010-12-18 17:28:49 |
not the first |
Hey man. I know what you mean. I write for my pleasure only but post here for others to enjoy or not as they choose. I do like to have comments though. |
| 2010-12-18 17:27:54 |
not the first |
Man, I know how you feel. I write for my own pleasure but post here for others to enjoy or not. I do like to see comments though. Keep up the work. Would love to hear more about this wife of yours. |
| 2010-12-14 23:20:28 |
Discovering slut wife |
Would love to hear more about her exploits |
| 2010-12-11 21:15:08 |
Double Trouble? - Part II |
Very nice. A few more details would be great! |
| 2010-12-11 21:14:26 |
Double Trouble? - Part II |
Very nice. A few more details would be great! |
| 2010-12-04 11:40:06 |
How I Became a Party Girl |
Very nice. Too bad you don't want to share her now. Both of you would enjoy |
| 2010-12-04 11:39:33 |
How I Became a Party Girl |
Very nice. Too bad you don't won't to share her now. Both of you would enjoy. |
| 2010-12-04 11:26:20 |
Other Men's Wives - His Sluts - Chapter 4 |
Thanks for the comment. I caught that after I published this and there was nothing I ooulc do but fix it in futher chapters. Harry is the main character in my other stories and I got wrapped up in writing. |
| 2010-11-21 14:57:39 |
Alice and Toms holiday |
Nice start. Keep it up. It would be nice to have him set her up to be fucked by a few guys. |
| 2010-11-21 14:56:34 |
Alice and Toms holiday |
Good start. Keep going. It would be nice to see him set her up to be fucked by a few guys. |
| 2010-11-21 14:55:22 |
Alice and Toms holiday |
Good start Rider. Hope you continjue. It would be nice to see him set her up to be fucked by a few guys. |
| 2010-11-07 12:58:18 |
Amish Incest Pennsylvania |
Apparently my first post didn\'t show up. I would encourage you to read your stories after you write them. As stated by one of the others, there is not enough detail and you need to be sure the English is readable to the average bloke like some of these blowhards here. What was your reaction? Ages? Was this your first time? Was it really rape or did you want it to happen? Did your father take your virginity or was it taken here? Give more detail. |
| 2010-11-07 12:55:19 |
Amish Incest Pennsylvania |
I would encourage you to continue writing but I agree with one of these posts. How did you react? Was this something you wanted or didn\'t want. Was this your first time. You need to add details and work on the verbage so it\'s understandable to the average reader. Keep trying. |
| 2010-10-27 23:24:37 |
Injured Cousin |
It appears my earlier comment didn\'t post and I had to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. Erotic and romantic at the same time and that\'s not easily done. |
| 2010-10-27 23:23:09 |
Injured Cousin |
Very well written. Erotic and romantic at the same time and that is not easily done. |
| 2010-09-19 21:43:03 |
Blackmailing Jenny |
I have to agree with the comment that the shitty comments come from those who just can't get it up with a good story. I also agree it appears English may be a second language with you and you did very well. Don't get flustered with the "anonymous" deragatory comments. We all get them. |
| 2010-09-18 20:53:24 |
A Trip To Remember |
My apologies to the readers. I failed to post this story for edit first and it's difficult to read with no spacing. It was formatted before posting but I forget they don't stay that way when they get posted here. I hope you can overcome that. I'll be more aware in the future. |
| 2010-09-14 21:15:59 |
Pleasure Cruise - Part 4 |
Pregnancy is not my thing but I will have some new twists when I get time to write on this series again. |
| 2010-09-14 21:14:43 |
Pleasure Cruise, Part 2 |
I appreciate the comments - good or bad. It helps in future stories but anonymity gets no comments back. |
| 2010-09-14 21:12:38 |
Pleasure Cruise, Part 1 |
To "wantsum.;". My apologies for the formatting but that happened when I uploaded the story. I'll do much better next time. Thanks for the comments. Greatly appreciated. To those who are anonymous, I offer no comments. I'm all for good or bad reviews but your anonymity tells the tale. |