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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-08-15 15:47:01 |
A bitch's fall episode A |
that was just perfect! |
| 2010-11-01 22:28:01 |
I raped my mom |
Learn how to write properly. Grammar *is* writing. It\'s not optional. |
| 2010-11-01 22:27:56 |
I raped my mom |
Learn how to write properly. Grammar *is* writing. It\'s not optional. |
| 2010-11-01 22:27:51 |
I raped my mom |
Learn how to write properly. Grammar *is* writing. It\'s not optional. |
| 2010-11-01 22:25:21 |
the girl. 1 |
What a fucking waste of time. Stop writing until you learn how. |
| 2010-11-01 22:25:06 |
the girl. 1 |
What a fucking waste of time. Stop writing until you learn how. |
| 2010-10-01 23:35:03 |
neighbor down stairs pt2 |
I love the topics and themes in your story. But you are just a worthless shit of a writer. |
| 2010-10-01 20:02:54 |
She Never Said 'Stop'. |
I liked it! Fucked that worthless pot-head good! |
| 2010-10-01 19:42:09 |
My continuing affair with my Step-Mom part 1 |
+1 vote. Not bad :) But you do know that saying "I have no reason to make this up" just makes it seem more like you are making it up, right? :P I assume absolutely everything is fiction here, and I enjoy it anyway. So thanks for writing! |
| 2010-09-29 23:10:11 |
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I love the genres in your story. I hate your writing. |
| 2010-09-27 02:01:49 |
Please no more. |
Decent story, nearly ruined by what I assume was a mistake (text replace error?) of having mother and daughter with the same name. |
| 2010-09-24 02:16:42 |
A Night With Minh |
Not bad; love the rape and snuff! + vote! Only one issue: a rape kit is a kit that the police use to collect evidence. :p |
| 2010-09-24 02:04:19 |
The Student House |
the 'rape' tag does not belong on this story. |
| 2010-09-24 01:55:39 |
Lessons For The Tease |
Not too bad. The whole "rape victim starts to like it" thing is a bit tired and old, but I guess you had a reason for that. + rating |
| 2010-09-24 01:46:41 |
New Roommates, Mother And Daughter |
I should know better than to even bother reading stories that seem to have every genre checked. This story did not remotely have a number of the genres it claimed to. Oh, plus it sucked. |
| 2010-09-24 01:39:31 |
The Red Dress |
spelling, grammar, sentence structure, absolutely no dialog... and I roll my eyes every time I read a story about a young, teen lady who has super-gigantic tits. |
| 2010-09-24 01:37:22 |
My first rape |
Spell check is absolutely, 100% necessary. But so is understanding of sentence/paragraph structure, and this shows none. Also, a story that is 100% narrative, and no dialog at all, is boring as hell. |
| 2010-09-24 01:34:01 |
Garbage Dump Gang Rape |
It's not particularly interesting or coherent, and it does make you shake your head in disbelief far too much. The spelling/grammar errors don't help. Note: I like rape stories, so that's not my problem at all. This is just isn't good. |
| 2010-09-24 01:27:04 |
Triple threat. |
far too many misspellings and too much horrible grammar to even read past the first couple of sentences. |
| 2010-09-24 01:24:56 |
The Attempted Escape |
Seems to me 'caulking' a gun might cause trouble with it firing... 'cocking' might have worked better. the story might have ended sooner. I do love the themes of rape and murder in a story, but to constantly have to stop reading and figure out what word you really meant is very distracting. |