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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-04-24 12:39:57 |
My Sister was always on my mind |
Some have asked why my sister lived with my grandmother, and if I ever found out why, What my sister and I guessed was that my mother must have got pregnant with her before marriage. We asked my parents, but they shut down the conversation. My grandmother died before we could ask her about it. |
| 2013-04-21 18:53:48 |
Sister and Me |
This is really bad. Is this a joke or are you having difficulty with the English language? |
| 2011-09-06 14:31:25 |
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That was a really good start. Definitely go on to chapter 2. |
| 2011-08-13 16:28:05 |
Jeanie's Big Boy |
Great story. I write stories too, and it's so frustrating that they can't fix the punctuation problem on this site. It detracts from the story. |
| 2011-08-13 16:11:36 |
Mom's Insecurities |
This was very well written. It was not the usual "jerk off" material, but rather, a very sensual story told in a very erotic way. Keep writing! |
| 2011-01-30 09:23:38 |
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Thanks for the comments. It must be kept in mind that the story is categorized as fiction, so the boy's capabilities are enhanced to add a little "wishful thinking" to the story. |
| 2011-01-30 09:23:31 |
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Thanks for the comments. It must be kept in mind that the story is categorized as fiction, so the boy's capabilities are enhanced to add a little "wishful thinking" to the story. |
| 2011-01-30 09:23:20 |
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Thanks for the comments. It must be kept in mind that the story is categorized as fiction, so the boy's capabilities are enhanced to add a little "wishful thinking" to the story. |
| 2011-01-16 07:06:37 |
Me,My Friend and our little girls |
I don't think that the majority of readers care about spelling and punctuation. Let's be real here. These types of stories aren't written to be believable, or to win a pulitzer prizes. They are written so that readers can jerk off and cum fantasizing that the subject of the story is them. I agree that the grammar errors are a little distracting, but they don't ruin the "erection effect". |
| 2011-01-16 07:06:07 |
Me,My Friend and our little girls |
I don't think that the majority of readers care about spelling and punctuation. Let's be real here. These types of stories aren't written to be believable, or to win a pulitzer prizes. They are written so that readers can jerk off and cum fantasizing that the subject of the story is them. I agree that the grammar errors are a little distracting, but they don't ruin the "erection effect". |
| 2011-01-16 07:05:50 |
Me,My Friend and our little girls |
I don't think that the majority of readers care about spelling and punctuation. Let's be real here. These types of stories aren't written to be believable, or to win a pulitzer prizes. They are written so that readers can jerk off and cum fantasizing that the subject of the story is them. I agree that the grammar errors are a little distracting, but they don't ruin the "erection effect". |
| 2011-01-03 12:56:37 |
My Kindly Neighbour |
Great story. We need another chapter. Well done mate! |
| 2011-01-03 12:51:18 |
My Kindly Neighbour |
This story definitely needs another chapter. Well done mate!! |
| 2011-01-03 12:51:04 |
My Kindly Neighbour |
This story definitely needs another chapter. Well done mate!! |
| 2010-12-18 14:46:15 |
Finally! |
Great start to the story, but it needs to continue. The kids sexual experiments just started and the story abruptly ends. If you are going to write more chapters for a story, end the first one by writing: To Be Continued. You are a good writer, so write a follow up. |
| 2010-09-27 07:59:03 |
My Sister the little seductress |
Guess you can't hit a home run every at bat. Not sure why this story wasn't well received, but I felt good about it as I wrote it. |
| 2010-09-22 22:37:36 |
Sleeping Cocksucker-ChapterTwo |
Thanks for the suggestions |
| 2010-09-20 07:59:14 |
A bumpy ride to camp Crystal Lake |
Not bad. Hopefully there will be a followup story. |
| 2010-08-18 06:58:35 |
My Sisters Confusion-Final Chapter |
Some of the comments on here are very confusing. What the hell is the last comment from anonymous reader supposed to mean??????? |
| 2010-08-17 07:49:22 |
My First Lover |
Well done. Keep writing! |
| 2010-08-15 08:24:10 |
My Sisters Confusion-Chapter three |
Ok mate, chapter four coming up this week |
| 2010-08-14 08:03:12 |
Jessica, My Next-Door Neighbor |
Very well done. I like the innocence, and the pace of the story. You should definitely write a follow up. You have knack for keeping your readers erect!! |
| 2010-08-12 07:19:23 |
A STORY OF REDNECK PERVERSIONS |
I see from the ratings that my foray into darker and funnier stories wasn't well received, so I guess I'll go back to the more popular "jerk off" stories. |
| 2010-08-09 17:18:09 |
Tammy and I on a boat |
Not bad. It must have been pretty shitty for her when you withdrew from her ass and came in her mouth. Between her anal smells and the sunscreen, the taste would have gagged most women. |
| 2010-08-06 22:25:01 |
Sharing My Room With Sis |
I'm always amazed at the literary critics who are "anonymous readers" and try and be overly critical about these stories. Who cares about the spelling and punctuation. The majority of these stories are meant to be erotic, and for a lot of guys, jerk off material. So, for all those who love to criticize and be so picky, try writing some yourself. Otherwise just enjoy your erections and stop picking holes in stories like this one. I enjoyed it a lot, and was erect for most of it. Well done! |
| 2010-08-01 21:02:13 |
online and doin it anal with bro |
This was pretty bad dude! Impossible to read. |
| 2010-07-25 06:54:00 |
I'm hot for my older sister |
Very well written. I stayed hard the entire story. |
| 2010-07-10 16:51:52 |
Santa's Candy Cane |
Great story. One hell of an imagination. Well done!!!!!!! |
| 2010-07-08 21:22:09 |
Finding bliss with my sister |
Well done. Brought back some special memories for me. |